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Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2013 01:04 AM · On: Epilogue

i loved it thank you and for some reason i am very glad that u picked jazz :) 

Reviewer: kirifox (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Epilogue

Would love to see a sequel. However, hate that Jasper is that involved with Lily. I don't think she really loves or needs him, and would thow him away just as she did Emmett. I think she is lying when she talksa about sending Emmett back to Rose. And Jasper has made a bad choice...again...

Reviewer: Master J (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 03:03 AM · On: Epilogue

plz plz plz post the sequel!!!!!!! if not that many people have said they want it then plz let me read it!!! lol and by the way....AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Niere (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Epilogue

Please Please Please post the sequel. This was totally awsome and I'd love to read more... and more... and more... etc.

Reviewer: Niere (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2012 11:43 PM · On: I Don't Want To Be Sober...

Awsome as always. Looking forward to next chapter.

Reviewer: vanessa118377 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 11:24 PM · On: I Don't Want To Win...

I absolutely love this story!  I am hooked and along for the ride!  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Reviewer: TefGomez (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Consume All Of It

...actually, "te perdiste" means you got lost. "Te extrañe" means I missed you. And the spanglish part was kinda cliche. Other than that, I'm really enjoying your story, quite different. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I went back and changed the chapter as soon as I got this review! I only took two years of Spanish and that was way back in high school, so I'm a little rusty. If ever you run across something like that again, always feel free to point it out! Thanks again for reading and taking the time to leave a review. We really appreciate it and hope it won't take so long to respond next time!

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 04:52 PM · On: The Sweet Escape

So Emmett gets some love. Hope Jasper does too. LOL 

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 04:28 PM · On: Feel You Underneath My Skin

Nice digs.

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 04:23 PM · On: I Breathe You In, Again


Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 10:28 PM · On: Consume All Of It

Kinda didn't. Lily's up to something. Just don't trust this girl...

Author's Response:

This is the first time reviews have been working for us in a couple months, so let me start by apologizing about the lack of response! Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and the amazing rating you gave us. I hope the rest of our story is living up to your standards, and we hope to hear from you again soon!

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Drink the wine, my darling

I'm intrigued. Can't wait to read more! Other than the Vampire Diaries, you've named all my favorites in your A.N. above, so I'm very curious where you go...

Author's Response:

Once again, thank you for your review! And again, so sorry about not being able to respond! I hope reviews are working from here on out! :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 10:03 PM · On: Before they left your lips...

Yep, ROse is a bitch. LOL

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Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Promises were spoiled

*rawr* on all accounts.

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Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Drink the wine, my darling


Okay, this is different!  I'm concerned about Emmett's not-at-all-subtle thing for Lily and the way Lily compelled Rosalie. That's quite troublesome.  Her blithe attitude to her species feels brittle and too casual - makes me suspicious of her.

I am not familiar at all with the other vampire varieties you mentioned in the notes, so I don't know how they fit in here if at all.

I know your penchant for messing with Emmett's love life, lol, but wonder what you've got going with CARLISLE here at this point!

Further up, further in...

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Reviewer: ali208 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Consume All Of It

aside from saying that your chapters are well put together, there really isn't much information to comment on. I'm sure you're 'getting to that' but cant comment on what you don't know.

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Consume All Of It

Hi ladies!

Well, another intriguin' chapter. Now I'm really curious about Carlisle and Lily's past involvment. Loved Lily's 'advice' about Edward's treatment of Bella and his own emo self. Hope he takes heed.

So Jasper has made his decision, and Alice has accepted it? Somehow I doubt that. Maria was a complete surprise, but I'm glad she's gone. Never did like her anyway! lol

Now about my Emmett. Yes, I am team Emmett all the way and I do hope you won't hurt him. It would make me very sad. However, I'll be glad to see him rid of Rosalie.

I'm dyin' to know what Lily's agenda is, and why.

So, I'm very curious where you are takin' this and anxious for MORE PLEASE, ASAP! This is a very compellin' and well written story!

Til next time,


Ellen xx 

Author's Response:

This is the first time I have been able to respond to reviews in MONTHS! I just wanted to say thank you so much for reading our story, and for taking the time to provide such positive feedback. We absolutely love to hear from our readers and hate it when the site won't allow us to respond. I sincerely hope you have liked where the story has gone since you left this review, and I promise the ending will not disappoint. Just know that we love Emmett as much as you do, and so please trust us when you're losing hope...

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Drink the wine, my darling

Hi there!

Very intriguing and has my imagination goin' wild. What can she want with Emmett and Jasper? What is her past with Carlisle? Is she good or bad, or in between? I like that she can manipulate Rosealie, although I feel that she will be manipulatin' all of them before she's through. Will she interact with the wolves?

So many questions and only you girls can answer them. So, give us MORE PLEASE, ASAP!

Lookin' forward to the next chapter!


Ellen xx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, and that shiny rating! We appreciate it so much! :)

I love how you're thinking already, and throughout the course of this story, ALL your questions will be answered. And, at the same time, it will keep you guessing! We hope to post once, maybe twice a week, so favorite us for updates. :)

Reviewer: BurchGirl (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Drink the wine, my darling

Wow! Very intriguing. And for once a female not fixated on Edward. Though I do love me some Edward. ;) Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

We are so glad you liked it!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. There's not gonna be a whole lot of love for Edward in this story, so I'm glad you like the direction we're heading! :)

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