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Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2013 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

You're back!! I am so glad you haven't given up on this story- it is so good I cant.wait to see where you take it. Sorry it has taken me a while to review, I was delaying gratification because it is woo good and I didn't want to be.left hanging for too long. Good luck making progress!

Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2013 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4

You're back! I am so glad that you didn't abandon this story. I hope that you keep it up- especially leaving us where you did (that was kind-of cruel) There are so many questions you keep leaving us with I can't wait to see where you take this.
Also I love the character interactions between Jasper and Eliza, and the way Alice reacts to that, you are really able to show that there is conflict and tragedy here without simply telling us. Thanks for a great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2013 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really like the conversations between Jasper and Eliza, makes me wonder what her relationship was like with her own father. I wish Alice would open up with Jasper and tell him what's going on with her but I can understand why she won't. I wonder what it's going to take Jasper to get Alice to open up?

Reviewer: KyokoNyx (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 3

I am so glad that this is back! When I saw it I actually squealed. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this, thank you so much.

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really like this story. I LOVE Jasper and Alice as they are my favorite Twilight characters, but you are writing a very fine story and taking them in such a very different direction as characters. I am putting this story on my favorites, so I won't miss a chapter! I olok forward to the next update and all the ones afte that too! :)

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

I think Eliza will be what keeps Jasper from leaving but hope Alice lets him stay. I can't imagine what happened to Adam and why people think Alice had something to do with it.

Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story is so well done, I am sorry that you don't have more reviews, it certainly deserves them. (I guess that is the problem if Alice and Jasper speak to you, people aren't pulled to them the way they are with Edward and Bella, which is funny because there are so many compelling A/J stories and the B/E ones start to all read the same.) Anyway I loved that we got some of Jasper's back story, and that his interest is piqued. I can't wait to see where you take this trio.

Reviewer: deltagirl (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

I get the feeling that Jasper might be as interested in Alice as he is in him even though she vows to fight it. I can't imagine what could have happened with Adam that makes people think Alice is evil.

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ok i like this chapter, but is he a Lieutenant or a Major, Oh and just for future reference, a Captain is a rank lower than a Major, so really the Major is the superior officer.

Reviewer: MusicLvr84 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm excited to read what happens next.

Reviewer: MusicLvr84 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Prolouge

Excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: krida (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very well written! Not a big Alice & Jasper fan, but this one I really like! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: oskigal (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 02:44 PM · On: Prolouge

Wow, I am so excited to see where this is going, this was an amazing start. I can't wait to read the next update!

Reviewer: Ruty14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Prolouge

I really liked it. This story sound interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Prolouge

well I'm intrigued. I want to read more.

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Prolouge

So far so good, can't wait for you to post more.

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