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Reviews For Stolen Dreams
Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 36

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 36

Once Bella was notified by Edward that he was out of range with his cell phone and wouldn't make rehearsal.  He would make the wedding no matter the cost.  The fact he told Jasper to CALL Bella to let her know for him.  Jasper couldn't spare one moment to relay Edward's message that he was out of range and would be there for the wedding.  Just enough time to elimate her distress.  Can't blame Edward for chewing Jasper out royally for not calling her.  Those text messages to both Alice and Rose would have definitely added more stress to Bella about Edward's appearance.  At least after Bella talked with Edward she was able to sleep that night.  Glad Bella told her mother off at the salon those comments about Edward were not necessary.  I bet Edward looked stunning in his dress uniform.  Beautiful ceremony.  Looking forward to the reception and the other shoe dropping when Edward needs to tell Bella he has to leave.

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 36

Something is wrong and I'm missing big huge chunks of the wedding, Big white blank boxes take the place of where I am assuming text should be ?  Anyone else having or seeing that instead of text ? 

Reviewer: lolita1419 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2012 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 36

Hello!! I'm in love with this story, your doing a great job with your writing and I wait every week for new updates! While I was reading chapter 36, there were some blank white areas and it would skip dialogue. I'm not sure it it's me and my browser or if the webpage has some issues...I don't want to miss any part of the story lol..Thank you and please continue writing! :)


Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 36

SQUEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeee  OMG OMG OMG sniffle that was just wow perfect wow perfect!!!  Just  perfect!!  You had me going that he wasn't going to maek it love love love!!!!!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 36

Nice wedding.  Glad Edward made it.  Renee is a pill

Reviewer: secret lover of him (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 35

I'm missing my story...I hope that all is well and that you will be back soon...


Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 35

You left us hanging...but it's okay. I can't wait to see if Edward is going to make it to the wedding.

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 35

Well shit - is he seriously gonna miss his wedding? Makes me want to cry! Good chapter though.

Reviewer: Silent Heart (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 35

i think he's just apologising for not calling earlier that day. not that he wont b able 2 come for his own wedding....


nice going

keep it up.

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2012 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 35

NOOOOO....he can't miss the wedding...Pretty pretty please update again soon. I hate cliffies.

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 35

very very good chapter keep up the great work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 35

My poor heart is breaking yet again for our poor Bella. She has had to endure so much, and now...even though it isn't forever, she feels so lost without her fiance around during such an important time, but I have to think that she understand that he wouldn't be away from her for anything. It has to be very very very important. Something he can't disclose. Poor Edward and Bella. You did a great job describing the aftermath of the bachelorette They look a little green and pale to me..haha. When Alice's and Rosalie's phones rang with texts...I had a bad feeling. He's going to be late? Maybe he can make it? Felt so sorry for Bella to have to endure her rehersal without her Edward, but at least Ryan was there to help out. I can feel the love that is flowing through your Edward and Bella and it is so so so strong. The late line...damn.....had me almost crying. He seems so upset, and of course she is upset. I know they'll find their way to one another, even if it is delayed, but I hope it can go on as planned. Truly love this story, and can't wait to see the wedding. Ryan is so sweet and I'm sure their special plans for Ryan are going to be great!! Loving it!!! Keep up the great work!!! xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 35

I think I would be a very unhappy camper with my attended and with the United States military/government right about now if I was Bella.  It would be very hard to even want to speak to him about now.  Especially since everyone else has been getting messages and calls letting them know updates on what is going on, but not Bella.  Edward doesn't even call until Bella's going to bed the night before their wedding.  All he can say is I'm sorry.  Right.  What is he sorry for, missing the rehearsal or the fact that he can't make the wedding due to this wonderful last minute job commitment.  I understand national security is important, but so is their wedding which was scheduled first.  I mean they aren't even taking time off for a wedding, what's a couple of hours for a bloody dinner and practice rehearsal.  Is the man even in Forks yet?  Or is he still in Seattle?  Will he make it to the altar or will he stand her up at the last minute?  The least he could have done was called her/text'd her a couple words throughout the day.  After all it is his wedding too.  I can't blame Bella for being hurt, upset, or even livid at him.  I think he really has been inconsiderate to her this time.  No excuse for not communicating with her at some point earlier in the day.  His partner had no problem contacting just his "girlfriend" multiple times during the day, but Edward couldn't spare a couple seconds to contact his fiancee (future wife on the morrow.)  I hope Bella lays the guilt trip on him THICK.  Total jerk on this one Edward, total lack of putting in an effort to do the right thing for your girl.  Your actions couldn't have done more damage to put her right back to feeling how she did when your family up and moved right after Ryan's birth and supposed death.  For one of the happiest time in both of your lives, you sure aren't starting out on the right foot.  Get your act together boy, you have sure got some begging/pleading/amending to do to your girl for your lack of action to this point.

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 35

Not good, not good at all, going to cry now.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 35

The military does this stuff.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 35

Evil! Haven't they been through enough?! I'm holding out hope for a HEA

As for the links; I can't post them here so I'll send them in a PM

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 32

I am not reviewing and I am rereading. I read this all some time ago. It is a good story, hard issue for people to go through.

Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 35


Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 35

Evil so so so evil!!! OMG OMG OMG!! Post again soon!!! He better eb apologizing for being AWOL duringteh day and no because he won't make it...sniffl post post post so sad poor Bella..

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 35

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 35

6 weeks worth of working on this chapter, wow, well bless your heart, You are talented that's for sure, you always have a way of bringing the logical to a story, it is logical that certain career choices give one little choice.... that's logical and reality for Military families everyday...Bella doesn't complain, hasn't whined at all, she trudges through life and pushes where is important, Ryan her son...just what she does for and with him is incredible his needs first jjst like his Father, Major Masen's needs first.... My question is when is someone going to put Bella first?!?  Yes, Major pulled off a very perfect Bella marriage proposal, but Edward just doesn't always show how much Bella means to him... perhaps thats why Bella never pushed him to stay in touch when they were young and thought they lost Ryan....she doesn't know that she's important to him....I will stand up for Dr. Swan, since she doesn't .... I'm always Team Bella and Edward and Extremely Team Edward....but I can say Major Masen your letting your girl down, do you have any clue how lonely she is? When you didn't call for an entire day and missed the rehearsal without so much as a call or even the coldness of a do you think she would feel?!?  I love the story, but I'm not sure Bella should follow through with this wedding.....Not sure if your committed to her, or just the idea of what could have been...

You, my dear uthor have pulled and tugged my my heart strings this entire story more so than any AM we understood the distance Edward out between them, it was her age.... yep got that, but this story...boy, the lump in my throat with this one is just something...

Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 35

Oh no I hope he doesn't miss the wedding 


Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 35

I hope it's I'm so sorry i dodn't get there tomight and not I'm so sorry I can't be there tomorrow

Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 35

Dude. Not cool. That is a terribly mean cliffhanger. >:(

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