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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
HOLY HELL wow!!!! That was just wow and I can't think of teh right words to describe it but just wow!!! So glad I got to read this after BD2 woot
Author's Response: Wow, I'll take that. Wow is a good word I think. LOL. Thanks bunches for the fic love, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. And I gotta say I'm a little jealous that you've seen BD2 already. I'll be going next week and I can't wait!
~Jen
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2012 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 36: A Thin Line
loved the chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you oodles for the fic love. You guys are all so very much awesome.
~Jen
Reviewer: gingerhat (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
There's nothing like coming back from vacation and finding updates in the inbox. Happy sigh. Yes, nothing like it. Left my husband to take care of all the 'we're back' necessities and plopped my rump down in the chair to read. He's wonderful. :)
Small rant...>>> The media has really done a job on us, hasn't it? Size 12? Ewww?! Bite your anorexic tongue. The other day I read that at 5' you should weigh 100lbs. Been there. WAY TOO skinny. It's one thing to be healthy, but another to be brainwashed by the media. Hopefully, the pendulum will swing back before too long - after all, Rubens painted the 'most beautiful women' in his day. People ought to take a look. Stepping down now.
I really liked your treatment of this event. It was both honest and respectful and that can be difficult. Edward was very genuine (as well as Molly) and I found the interactions delightfully 'innocent' and non-prejudicial. What a breakthrough for Bella, too! Took a while to get the scene read, though. Kept having to wipe the steam and condensation off the screen. :D Really enjoyed having Molly's POV, too. Very well done.
Just have to repeat myself - love your guts in putting this out here. What a marvelous trip it's been and will be over again in the future.
Ginger
Author's Response: Ginger,
Writing this chapter was difficult because that balance between honest and respectful and just flat out smut is strangely thin. Little bits of conversation helped propel the scene and understanding of why it was done. It was never intended for shock value. It was meant to move Bella forward, which by all accounts, it has. I've been working on the last chapter and the Epi and I thikn you guys will really enjoy them because writing them has been both amazing and so damn hard. A lot of tears shed writing them, so I can't wait to get them to you.
Thanks for taking a chance on WIP, and I loves ya for it!
~Jen
Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 32: Potty Mouth and The Hippie
Been readinng for two days and i fucking love this! But you seriously got me with, "it was all very big chill" one of the best movies ever!
Author's Response: I'm glad you fucking love it! I was shocked that even one person had read it and here we are nearing the end and there are hundreds reading it. Blown. Away. Thanks oodles sending some fic love.
~Jen
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
Nope, you haven't lost me at all. This was a very unique chapter and one that I kind of enjoyed. I can also understand why this happened too.
Its a very good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for getting it. A lot went in to this chapter, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the fic love!
~Jen
Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
I think that was really hot, I dont think I would have the guts to let someone watch me like that though..
Author's Response: Glad you got a kick out of the chapter. Thanks for reading!
~Jen
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
I've never read anything like that on fandiction. Really good stuff!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks oodles for reading and for taking a little time to toss some love this way.
Reviewer: WolfREADERgypsy (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
All I can say is, wow.
Amazing & very well written. This has to be the hottest scene I've read. Ever.
Author's Response: Thanks. A lot of work went into that scene. Glad you enjoyed it.
~Jen
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
The wedding was perfect, I love that Charlie walked Alice down the isle, he's so sweet. The reception was a lot of fun...the after reception party was damn hot! And good lord you had me tearing up the last few chapter's in EPOV were beautiful.....
Dixie
Author's Response: Well then I guess I did my job! 2 more chapters Dixie, and I promise they won't suck. Thank you for the fic love.
~Jen
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 34: The Blue Dress
looking forard to more
Author's Response: There isn't much more left of this story. 2 chapters I believe. But I'm working on it. Thanks for reading.
~Jen
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
Yes. I do like Molly. Whether she watches or not.
Good friend, Rose. But good call on Bell's part to wait 'til later, I think.
Author's Response: I thought so too. I toyed wiith the idea of that happening at the hotel during Alice's girls night, but I didn't like it. Thanks for the fic love.
~Jen
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
I like Molly! And I think she should watch! lol ;)
Dixie
Author's Response: I'm glad you like her. Some people have been a little upity about her and a few are even all Molly, size 12...ewww. Fuck 'em , she's awesome! I'll be posting a pic tease of her on my blog which will listed on the chapter but since Twilighted seems to be just fine with link info it's januarysfiction.wordpress.com
Thanks for the fic love Dixie!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 32: Potty Mouth and The Hippie
What a fun night! Loved it!
Author's Response: I know it was super cheesy and uber fluffy but it was fun and we got to learn a little bit more about the families Bella and Edward came from.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 31: Filter Malfunctions
I love Renee, she and Esme will get along great!
Author's Response: They're great! I love them. You'll get to see more of them soon, keep reading. LOL.
~Jen
Reviewer: gingerhat (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
You. Are. Evil. ;) Introduce the pregnancy issue like that and then just ... make us wait for another chapter! I thought about calling you an evil cow but after that lovely mention at the beginning (sniffle') I just couldn't do it. (When speaking in person you can get so much joking/sarcasm/dryness/etc across in tone - my sister and I cut up constantly and it's clear we're joking, but I think I've not come across well to some people in the past through the written word.) And, yes, she should definitely wait for Edward. That should be found out together for a multitude of reasons of which I'm sure you're well aware.
Molly is a hoot! I can see a bit of spectator sport in our future if she can keep her mitts to herself; I think that would bring out 'Ballistic Bella' if she were to overstep the watching part.
The end is coming soon? ? (More sniffling.) Kind of figured, but was hoping for unending chapters. Sigh. Will just have to reread unendingly. :) Maybe you'll have a few outtakes? Where Emmett gets hold of helium and sings 'Muskrat Love'? Or, HEY! He could do that at the wedding! :D Alice would chase him in her designer wedding dress while everybody else wet themelves. Hee, hee.
Here's to dragging out a good thing!
Ginger
Author's Response: All the sniffles, I just can't! Yeah, I debated god and hard about the ending of that chapter and making you guys wait, and I'm choosing waiting because it tells the story better. I think they'll be an outtake or two. Surely a future take. Glad you like Molly. Some people are getting there panties n a big old bunch because of her, and I'll be honest, it's kind of entertaining to me. I'll be posting a picture of what my Molly loos like. Seems like a few people are all a size 12, ewwww. Fuck 'em, curvy is wonderful and my Molly is hot as hell! I'll leave the link for that in my AN's so you guys can scoop out a visual on her if you want.
Thanks for the fic love! And I'll catch you in the next chapter.
And don't worry I have two ore stories already on the go that I'll be posting after this. Plenty to read.
~Jen
Reviewer: Triplemoons3 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Dear Aunt Emmy
I'm in Jacksonville, Florida USA
Author's Response: A new reader! Welcome Triplemoon, glad to have you, thanks for reading and for taking the time to give a little fic love. Hope you enjoy the story.
~Jen
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
squeeee omg omg omg omg wow oh wow thats ummm interesting!!! holy hell drunkward is fucking kinky!!!! squeeee post again soon!!!
Author's Response: Holy shit Sarah, thats a lot of squeeing right there. Drunkward is sooo bloody cute. I'm workin' on the next few chapters, but my guess is it'll be about 2 weeks before the next update. Writing and real life can be a bitch sometimes. Thanks oodles for the fic love and all the squeeing!
~Jen
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks for the fic love, glad you enjoyed the chapter.
~Jen
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
Alice and Jasper's wedding in the very near future. Bella tasting different and her orgasm being even more powerful. Being affected by the pumpkin smell. Very possible Rose could be right. Bella is pregnant. It's Edward and his super sperm. Of course, Mike never did it right so how was she suppose to get pregnant. Edward is very cute when he's drunk. Looking forward to the wedding and the pregnancy test with Edward. Suggestion of having Molly watch them. Interesting. Of course, Edward doesn't know that Molly is Bi and finds him very hot.
Author's Response: Everyone notes the pumkin thing and her mood swings...but you're the first to site the sex stuff. Interesting. Neither your very observent or your a perv, either way I love you! Thanks for reading. I'm wokring like a nut over here to get these chapters just right.
~Jen
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
OMG....Drunken Edward is effing kinky! So not complaining...but Damn! And Emmett. Gotta love him!
Author's Response: And hot, you forgot hot. I love drinken Edward... he makes me smile!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
OK, so I'm guessing that Bella is indeed pregnant. I have PCOS & have 3 kids so it's not impossible.
Next, I totally KNEW Edward was gonna suggest Molly watch! I'm anxious to see Bella's response
Author's Response: My lips are sealed, for now. Thanks for the fic love and I''ll catch you in the next chapter.
~Jen
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 34: On The Eve Of
PLEASE HURRY AND SEND US THE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Look at all the caps!! LOL. I'm working on them, promise. I like to have the chapter ahead of the one I send to my beta complete first. That's not the case, I'm struggling. They're not where I want them to be yet. I just can't half ass it, it's not fair to you uys. But I promise they're underway.
Thanks for the fic love, Jen
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 32: Potty Mouth and The Hippie
Bella's mom comes for a visit. If Bella wasn't stressed about enough things not having Edward with her all the time just adds to it. Then to have both of her sets of parents meet again and not at her place but at the Cullens. Talk about worrying what will happen. Things worked out pretty well. Charlie and Renee behaved for the most part. All sets of parents got along well with each other. The evening was a success. News of the engagement and the beginnings of celebrating and plans has started. Looking forward to the future chapters.
Author's Response: I'd have been peeing myself. So much room for something to go really bad. But it didn't. Working on the next chapter, hope to have it out to you guys soon.
~Jen
Reviewer: andrea07 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2012 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 32: Potty Mouth and The Hippie
Amazing! This is the first time I've left a review (I know bad me) but wanted to tell you this is fantastic, am loving it, can't wait for the next chapter :D also love love love all your wee saying am even starting to say them too and people are looking at me a little weird as am from Northern Ireland lol. Really hope there is a Baby Cullen in the future it would just make it perfect <3
Author's Response: Well hello Ireland! Thank you so much for reviewing, first time or 30th, it all makes me smile. I love to hear what you guys have to say. I get strange looks too, but I'm a little off centre, so it's to be expected. Thanks oodles, MissJ
Reviewer: gingerhat (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 32: Potty Mouth and The Hippie
I go away for a weekend and come back to this! A wonderful surprise - a new chapter - mixed with aggravation that it was out there for days and I didn't know! :)
Honestly, really enjoy the parents. And, wow, for once it was nice to get a little more on Phil. He's been such a throw-away character in almost every other fic. What a lovely comment about Bella being his daughter. Also, a first for me - some explanation for Renee's departure that made a great deal of sense and was more sympathetic than others who just used the 'flighty' excuse. The whole get-together was terrific.
Why, yes, I have seen 'The Big Chill'. That's all I'm saying. :D
It's a heck of a lot more difficult than people think to find that 'perfect' song - my tastes are a bit dated, also. Don't find much these days that really thrills me. So..., 'I Found Love (When I Found You)' by Kenny Wayne Shepherd is wonderful - 'Promise Ain't Enough' by Hall & Oates is also good - 'Come Away With Me' by Norah Jones is sweet. It's a pity that 'My Kind of Lady' by Supertramp is probably a bit dated to be a song from Edward to Bella. Lyrics are terrific, though and it's a great tune.
Now! Off to read the teaser I saw! You're the best and thanks!
Ginger
Author's Response: Ginger,
I never understood why Renee's need to flee isn't explained in fics. We all do things fro a reason, I figured her reasons should be included. And Phil, he was a mere mention in the books, but I felt like he would have love anything that came along with Renee. I have a step father, and although we didn't always see eye to eye, he's much like Phil in the found father kind of way. Glad you enjoyed getting to them. Thanks oodles for the lovely words, as always.
~Jen
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