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Reviewer: kini_113 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 07:23 AM · On: You are + EPI Home again

Excellent story!!!!  Very well put together in a way that doesn't triavialize grief and process of dealing with it.  I didn't quiet understand what you ment in the epilouge about animals and humans being different or the last line about J choosing to remain in this world.  Is that a lead in to another story or a sequal? Thank you for the time and hard work you put into this wonderful creation ;)

Reviewer: kini_113 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2013 03:01 PM · On: A little bit of comfort

I always thought of him as having blue/grey eyes but that's just me.  You had me crying by the end of this chap.  Very well done story, off to continue reading it now :D



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you! This was the first story I have ever written and first piece of anything in English for me, so I'm afraid it's not as mature as I'd like it to be. Still it's very personal and I put all my heart in it, so finiding that readers like it is the best gift ever.

<3

Reviewer: Holley01992 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 06:29 PM · On: You are + EPI Home again

Wow. This story was awesome! I loved all of it. :) 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 10:47 AM · On: You are + EPI Home again

sniffle love love love sniffle!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, thank you so much!:)

Xxx

MD

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 09:39 AM · On: You are + EPI Home again

This was a very nice story for a Saturday morning!  Goodand not too long.

Thanks - Xanath



Author's Response:

Thank you!:)

I'm glad you liked it!:)

MD

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2012 05:03 PM · On: You are + EPI Home again

nice way to wrap things up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) 

 

MD

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2012 03:15 PM · On: You are + EPI Home again

Thanks for writing. I will look for you on FF...

Author's Response:

Thank you!

See you then! :))))

 

MD

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Rescue Me

nice.

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Rescue Me

Felix the good guy?

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2012 10:30 AM · On: Rescue Me

oh wow oh wow oh wow!  Man someone needs to torch Janes ass...Post again soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Only one more chapter to go! I have it beta'd and it just needs a few edits so it should be up here really shortly :) 

 

xxx

MD

Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 11:16 AM · On: Phone

I'm really enjoying your story.  I hope you update soon.  I'm looking foreward to seeing  Bella come into her own.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

New chapter is validating here as we speak and the last one is with beta :)

If you are very anxious you can read the whole story on FFnet but it should be complete here really soon now!:)

 

I'm so happy you like it!

MD

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 03:33 PM · On: Phone

Go Bella!!!!

Reviewer: moriahhh (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Phone

I can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Hi!

Not much left but it may still take some time to beta it so if you are anxious you may go to my FFnet profile where the story is complete but not beta'd.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

MssDare

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 02:57 PM · On: Phone

Just found this story and spent all morning catching up!!!  Love it and can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!:))) next chapter is with beta but sometimes it takes a lot of time before i can post so if you are anxious about what is going to happen next and if you don't mind the mistakes and strange use of language - you may go to my fanfiction.net profile where it's complete:)

:)

MD

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 03:25 AM · On: Phone

Ohhh callin in the big guns :)



Author's Response:

Yes!:)

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Lake

I'm glad they are happy.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I've the next chapter ready frome beta and will be putting it up today:) so it should be here shortly:)

MD

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:10 PM · On: Family

Hmmmm.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:01 PM · On: A little bit of comfort

That was sweet.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 08:42 PM · On: With you

I wonder if Victoria will show up.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:55 PM · On: Winter

Oh Victoria I wonder why he didn't say anything before now.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:45 PM · On: Down

I wonder where they will go next.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Walkabout

Ah they are getting close.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:27 PM · On: Stillness in time

It seems she makes Jasper clam.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:58 PM · On: Wake me up

Oh no is he mad at her.  I guess that would make sense since Alice went to Voltera with her and didn't return.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Let go

I hope she finds Jasper.

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