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Reviews For Storm Warning
Reviewer: cris-p (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow!  I just found this story, and couldn't believe it!  I graduated from Alabama quite a few years ago, and now live about 3 hours from Tuscaloosa.  I still remember watching the news that day and being horrified that a tornado was ripping through a place that I love so much.  It was heartbreaking.  I loved your story, you did a great job with it.  Thanks for a great story, and for caring so much for those who were affected by the tornados.

Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

A very sweet story. Much different than any other AU I've read before. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Though I do have one question. How old was Edward? I didnt' figure that out. Did I miss that point?

Reviewer: quirkyb (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

Man, I tried to read this, but couldn't stop thinking about the actual day. I was working on campus and had to hide out in the basement of Woods Hall. Afterwards, I tried to drive to my mom's house only to find many of the roads closed, due to downed trees and power lines and the neighborhoods I grew up seeing for 26 years were just gone. Still too fresh. 

Author's Response:

Surviving a tornado (and knowing who and what didn't survive) is one of those experiences that, unfortunately, will stick with you forever.  I wasn't in Tuscaloosa when that EF-4 tornado struck, but I have been through one in another town.  That is from where my descriptions came.  I'm glad that you didn't read the whole story -- chapters 2 and 3 (the basement and aftermath scenes) would have been very difficult for you, I think.  

What is in the basement of Woods Hall?  I'm thinking that it's a sculpture gallery?   Maybe?  My sister was an Art History major (she had several classes in Woods), but I was mainly in Houser and across the street from Woods in Hardaway.  

Are your family and friends OK?  Was there much damage in your own neighbourhood?  



Reviewer: wilhelmiina2 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2012 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3

A true feel-good story, very sweet, thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: pennylynn (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nice.  Short and sweet.


Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad that you enjoyed it.  My apologies for the late response -- I'm not notified when someone submits a review. 

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 3

loved your story,..beautiful edward..sigh

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I realy like this Edward also.  Daydreaming...  ;-)

Reviewer: WhereYouWho (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great story!  I really liked how you had parts of the book integrated into your story without making it ackward.  That and I totally agree with your end note. 

Thanks for sharing your story!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I admit it isn't easy to suddenly throw a vampire into the mix smoothly! 

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this Edward lol i Loved this story and I wish you would continue it!

Hope to hear from you!

until next time


Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am thinking to write Edward's POV.

Reviewer: Mrsgabicullen (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

ok is he a vamp??????? new reader good so far. Really interisting. Cant wait to read the next chap.

Author's Response:

Read on!  You'll find out :-)

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

We were in Florida's panhandle.  And before Georges hit we had friends visiting from out of state.  It was one of our firsts.  All the kids and I did a rain dance prior to his "landing".  Our friends had to stay an extra week due to flooding.  No one let me rain dance after that. lol.

Author's Response:

Ha!  I'm not surprised!  It actually seems to work for you ... in a big way! 

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

What a great story!  Very well-written, and I just love how the were both unsure of how the other felt.  Nothing sweeter than an insecure vampire! I would love to read more of your Bella & Edward!

Reviewer: mayday000 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2011 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 3


Reviewer: JStone78 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

that was good, why not keep going with it?

Reviewer: ded (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 2

Excellant story.  I really enjoyed it.  Thank You.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pito (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great short story!!  Can you please continue it ?  Let us hear what happens to them when they leave this place. 


Reviewer: raindrop0620 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it! And loved this Edward! :) I wish you would consider continuing this so we can see how E&B's relationship grows and see him change her :)  ... great writing though! very compelling and heartfelt

Reviewer: VampireBoyfriend (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting story.

Author's Response:


Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow I really liked that and would like to see it as a full story. Liked this Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is so sweet.  And I liked Manu. It's cool that he was friends with Edward and supportive of his relationship with Bella, despite knowing what he was.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great story!  Loved it!

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 3

This was a lovely short story. If only Edward really was around during times like that. sigh!

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 2


Author's Response:

I hope that's a good "wow"  ;-)

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 3

Lovely little spin on the story!! Can't wait to read more from you!! xx

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

love this...glad I don't have to wait to find out more!

Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

Love your twist on the story. Thanks for writing!

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