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Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 06:55 PM · On: Dead Men Don't Talk

really curious to know how Anjali has been passing info, but more importantally why she thinks Leah has as well. Almost sounds like it's involuntary. hope there is more to come soon

Reviewer: twichef (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2013 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Changes

Interesting to say the least, but i am wanting to see where this is going although i have an idea i still cant wait to see...

Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2013 08:40 PM · On: Prisoner of Love

omg!!!!! this cliffie is sooooo not fair, but i love it anyway :-) these last two chapters have been amazing. please upate ...SOON !

Reviewer: Lynzy80 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Changes

Update. I love the story, but I want to finish it. Been to long since an update.

Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Slow Burn

Anyone who did not see this coming like three chapters ago is just ignorant,

Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 10:52 PM · On: A Big Hurt

I love you story, I really do but you really need to check your facts before you write soemthing.

1.) Seattle is east of Forks so unless Jake was swimming accros the Strait of Juan de Fuca, Bella and Edward would have been ahead of him on land and probably could have linked up with him on the way. Coming back to Forks would have been a pointless waste of time. 2.) Traveling by land 300 miles away from Forks would have put Leah roughly around the vacinity of Surrey, British Columbia (just over the Canadian border). Not the Yukon. From Forks, WA to the border of the Yukon Territory is 1,500 miles give or take and I highly doubt even Leah (as fast as she is) can travel 1500 mph. Now that being said, I do like your story and do not mean to demean you in anyway

Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2012 04:38 AM · On: Prisoner of Love

I'm in after-glow too. Ex------cellent job!!!!!! Please keep writing.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Prisoner of Love

Given their circumstances that was an awsome first time. It was perfect, a little humour, extremely hot and very loving. Ness was right they needed to ensure that they would always have their first time together,

Update soon, I need more! I love this story! Dixie

Reviewer: DanceWithMeTonight (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Dead Men Don't Talk

Wtf?!?!? Someone needs to kick that chick's ass!! How dare she be telling them everything! And to that to Seth!!! She doesn't deserve to be an imprint! Gosh and poor nahuel, he's going to be fucking blindsided when leah tells him the truth :(

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Dead Men Don't Talk

Wow so intrigueing cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 06:59 PM · On: Dead Men Don't Talk

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!!!!!!! This has to be the cruelest cliffy yet!!!! I really don't like you at this moment......lol

Now on to the review....THAT LITTLE BITCH! She must have a way to make it seem like Seth imprinted on her? I feel so bad for Seth. He's such a sweetheart.....:(

I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

Dixie

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 12:01 AM · On: Anyway, Anyhow, Anywhere

Wow i am at a loss of words awsome just finished reading the last five chapters and i am ready and cant wait for more

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 06:45 AM · On: Anyway, Anyhow, Anywhere

Oh *squee!* I am so happy for her, you have no idea.

And the fatherly/daughterly stuff with Carlisle and Leah is precious. Thanks for including it.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Anyway, Anyhow, Anywhere

Shit, Leah is so stubborn! I'm so thrilled for her. When they heard her babies heartbeat it brought tears to my eye's!

Now...whats happenening to Jake and Ness?!?!

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Over the Wall We Go

OMG! lol What is it with you evil...evil author's! Seriously that was, once again, so mean!!!! lol

I'm so glad they are alive. Good thinking on Ness's part to suck the drug out of Jake. Why is Jake still alive....is he thinmking to bread Ness and jake or keep Jake around as a guard dog thinking he will do anything Joham tells him to?

This is such a good story! I can't wait for more! Dixie

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 01:24 PM · On: Slow Burn

If everyone did not know that she was going to have a baby....WELL! The question is if she will TELL NaHuel that she is before they go looking for Jake and Nessie. I really like this story and hope that you will complete it eventually.

Thank You - Xanath

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 05:23 PM · On: Slow Burn

OH I could just kill you right now! lol Not nice at all! I loved how Sam got his ass handed to him...what a jerk! I hope at some point Nahuel gets to punch him in the face! I love Seth taking over for Jake...he's a good man. Maybe his imprint isn't a trader like I think she is....I hope so!

Update soon, I need more! Dixie

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 06:27 AM · On: Slow Burn

I am throwing things and screaming, at least figuratively.

I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER LIKE BURNING! Please keep writing.

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 05:23 AM · On: When the Wind Blows

This is adorable! I love how much Nahuel and Leah love each other. It is so beautiful.

I'm worried about Jake and Nessie, I hope you address that soon.

And seriously, when is she going to figure out she's pregnant?

And I love how much Charlie's presence is in this chapter, and he only has like two lines. You've captured him so well.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 03:05 PM · On: When the Wind Blows

I can not believe Sam and the Counsil!!! How could they do that to jake?!?!

What's the deal with Seth? I can't believe he would allow his imprint to turn him....he's too loyal....isn't he?

I loved the proposal! When are you going to confirm that leah is indeed pregnant? lol

Update soon! Dixie

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Miss Peculiar

As always excellent story hungry for more please dont make us wait too long for the next segment

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Miss Peculiar

As always excellent story hungry for more please dont make us wait too long for the next segment

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 05:34 AM · On: Miss Peculiar

Ooooh, *sigh!* I realy love this fic. It is totally my headcannon for Leah now. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Miss Peculiar

I just love your Leah! She's tough as nails but turning more girlie by the day! lol I hope she's wrong about Seths imprint....it would kill him.

I hope Jake and Ness are ok! Update soon! Dixie

Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Changes

I just want to say awesome writing the plot just kept me reading until I finished your last chapter very few books make me read throughout the night but yours was just so worth the no sleep. Can't wait for your next installment please don't keep us waiting too long.
JE

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