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Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think... that you should write more because i really like this story and i don't want it to end as a one shot so start brain storming because i won't be happy until i get more Carter! :)
Reviewer: HopelessRomantic913 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
love. it.
Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was totally cute and i loved it!
Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was so much fun to read. I too wish it were longer than a one shot. OH so enjoyable !
Reviewer: Lion_in_the_Land (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Cute and sexy story! I really like your writing style - very smooth and funny.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yours was way better though, much more original.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, I LOVED this! :) Loved his cocky attitude, and that he only shared his "gift" with her and his mom. Sweet. Ending was cute, too.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very good, funny and whitty. Really liked it
Reviewer: smellyia (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Carter was fantabulous! Thanks so much for sharing and WELL DONE!!!! Fav: "Goodnight gentlemen and ladies," he addressed the group in a loud booming voice, "we bid you farewell! Don't worry about our shirts...we won't be needing them." I will sleep in your shirt Carter...leave it here.
Author's Response: You are officially my favorite person of the day for writing that! I laughed out loud when I read your comment.
Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
funny stuff. everything you write turns to gold. excellent!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks
Reviewer: eroticfan (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great! Very sexy and I love the "produce".Carter can have me in a closet any day...
Author's Response: Haha, my friend has this thing about one day making out in a broom closet-don't ask me why, she just does-so I figured this was my tribute to her.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
A fun read! Thanks for posting it up! I'm more than a little amused at how she suddenly turned to cooperative at the sight of a beef-tastic chest.
Author's Response: yeah, don't we all
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2008 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was... pretty amazing! It was so much fun, and I kind of wish it wasn't a one-shot because I want more. Again, nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
I want my own personal Carter, dammit!
Author's Response: Yeah, just find a closet and he'll be there lol.
Reviewer: Lisa3 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was awesome! Loved Carter. Lol! "You want my bod." Very cute!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!
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