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Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

Another stellar ch.



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Barquin (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 3

I found Emmett's point of view really interesting



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

Open mouth, insert foot for Emmett.



Author's Response: Yeah, it's hard when you don't understand just what it is you're dealing with.

Reviewer: Msarkie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm loving hearing all these different voices, and getting the glimpses into Edward's past!  It's making me want to go back and re-read the whole Loner story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: PhoenixRN (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm really liking these flashbacks.  Emmett's point of view was interesting.  It must have been really hard for him to be a teenager living with someone like Edward and not understanding him at all.  I'm glad that the family resolved it's issues in Loner.  In fact, this is making me want to go back and read Loner again so I just may do that... great job, as always!



Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm really happy you liked it.

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

It's very interesting to hear this story from different POV's, it makes you see it in a different way. I kind of feel bad for Emmett - he's really trying, but it just goes wrong, and he doesn't know why.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you find it interesting.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Edward :( Loved hearing from Carlisle.



Author's Response: Glad you liked Carlisle's POV. Thanks for leaving a review.

Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Thank you for a wonderful chapter once again.  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: You're welcome. And thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cleopatra7 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 2

Loner had me hooked & waiting avidly for each installment for at least a yr (I usually only read complete stories) & I apologise for not reviewing before. This background story is making me want to read Loner again, straight through as soon as it finishes. So I think thats exactly what I will do! Very good work. Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thank you very much.

Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love this <3 :D its good to see him before with the family :)



Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: yaaay me (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Haha! Du är ju svensk! Det hade jag missat efter att ha följt dig hur länge som helst nu. Tack för att du fortsätter att skriva och jag hoppas att nästa kapitel kommer ut snart. :)



Author's Response: Japp, jag är svensk, och jag blir alltid lika förvånad när jag får en review på svenska. Ser så konstigt ut. :) Hur som helst, tack för att du läser och "review-ar", har inget bra svenskt ord för det, haha!

Reviewer: yaaay me (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love it! 



Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that. Thank you!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor Carlisle.  My heart breaks for his character.  You did a great job describing his feelings.



Author's Response: Poor Carlisle indeed. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Barquin (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

This was awesome.

Will we get to read about Carlisle's POV about the changes in Edward once Bella enters their life?



Author's Response: I'm really sorry for not responding sooner, I always try to answer any questions I get, but somehow I just missed it. As for Carlisle's thoughts about Bella, that would be in the outtakes I plan to write eventually. I can't say when that will happen, because right now I'm taking a break from writing. But hopefully I'll find the inspiration I need soon. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Barquin (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ok, so I'm definitely a disaster. When I first received a notification saying you have posted the first chapter I opened it, I added it to favorites but I forgot to read it. And I have just realized when I received the notification of the second chapter.

 

I have to say I really enjoyed this first chapter, it's interesting to know more about the family before Bella entered their lives.

Now I'm off to read the second one.



Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

Strange that you haven't gotten a better response to this story - you had tons of reviews for "Loner". People who read that should be most interested in this - it's always interesting to see things from someone else's perspective. It's heartbreaking to read about Edward's reactions to things, but it helps knowing that there will be a happy ending.



Author's Response: I think the lack of reviews for this story could be because there's no B/E interraction. I guess most people want that, I know I do myself. *lol* Anyway, thank you very much for your review!

Reviewer: Kattya (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was so sad when Loner ended... and when I found out you post a related story I was bouncing on my toes

Can't wait for the next chapter

In spite of the hard topic, your writing is so great, you make me love Edward more (if that is possible!)



Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoy my writing, thank you very much for your review.

Reviewer: iloverob32 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

I started reading Loner last week and have now finished it.  I was in the middle of it, when I discovered this and could not wait to read it.  Once again, this chapter is amazing!  It's well thought out and just wonderful.  Thanks for posting and can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the chapter, thank you very much.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightie04 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

<p>oh my gosh... i seriously had the biggest smile on my face before going to work... cause i noticed that you had posted the story.... it was seriously hard and so emotional seeing things how carlisle did ... its utterly heartbreaking... i&nbsp; cant wait for the rest of the story</p>



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Carlisle!



Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's interesting to read this from other points of view, although it's heartbreaking at times. I really liked the original story, and I'll be following this as well.



Author's Response: Thank you, and I really hope you'll like what's to come.

Reviewer: PhoenixRN (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Absolutely heartwrenching... you are a truly a gifted writer.  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! There will be more soon. :)

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm not sure I'm up for this kind of story Nilla.....afterall we already know what Edward was put through and his struggles along the way. "Loner" was an excellent story but tough to get through many times, I don't know if I can read about a younger and more confused Edward as he fights and tries to protect himself as he attempts to assimilate into the Cullen home and his school environment. I will stick with you and your story for now, I'll try hard to give this a chance. 



Author's Response: Thanks for giving this story a chance, although I understand how you feel. I hope I get to keep you as a reader though. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: nanuvamp (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

:'( so heartbreaking! 



Author's Response: I know. It's hard to write at times. Thanks for your review.

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