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Reviewer: Tee-Whyy (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
Just had to pop in and say. . .This banner is DOPE!!!!
It's the first that has EVER caught my attention. LOVE it!
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Smile for me
just found this story and yes, it does have a 'while you were sleeping' vibe about it, but it is completely on its own.
adoring that he is fighting with his feelings and her reactions
i fear her reaction if he doesnt handle this carefully and more importantly B's wrath towards Alice
i am along for the ride, i love a good twist that always keeps me guessing
love what i have read so far!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you. ;D
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Smile for me
I liked Edward going all Caveward for a minute lol. Bella is going to be pissed no matter when she finds out about Edward.
Author's Response: Definitely pissed. Hopefully, Edward will have the balls to confess before someone else tells her.
Thanks. ;)
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Smile for me
Well, at least Edward is finally starting to get it. I am worried about how Bella will handle it when she finds out the truth. I hope he tells her instead of her finding out some other way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: She'll be pissed, there's no doubt about it. Edward is already crumbling to confess. Let's see if he will do this before she someone else tells her.
Thanks. ;)
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Mirror, mirror
Hmm, interesting. I really enjoyed getting Bella's pov. I feel awful for her though, that has to be so difficult.
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 - effin' Alice!
I think I would have liked a little more gradual transition into the first few weeks of him pretending to be her boyfriend.
I am however really enjoying reading this, and am very curious to see how far Edward is willing to let this go.
Author's Response: Thank you again. ;)
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
Loved it! And I am really looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you. ;D
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Smile for me
Loved it!can´t wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks. ;D hugs and kisses
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Smile for me
Loved it!can´t wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you. =D
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2011 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mirror, mirror
Well damn. WTF crawled up Edward's ass? lol
Author's Response: Something bothered him, enough to get him irritated. We'll find out next chapter. Thanks. ;)
Reviewer: jfcx3 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 - effin' Alice!
From Bella's reaction to Edward, I kind of feel like Riley might have forced her to do sexual things. She seems too into doing it with someone she really doesn't know, even if she's been told that Edward is her boyfriend.
Author's Response: Nothing like that. lol But there's a reason why she feels this way, which you will know when she remembers.
Thanks. ;)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 2 - effin' Alice!
Edward got himself into a rather sticky (he he) situation...at least a situation in his pants lol.
Author's Response: Yes he did. Lol.
Thanks. =)
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
uh oh! How long is it going to take them to come clean?
Author's Response: Not sure yet, but come on join the ride to find out. =) Thanks.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
Loving it! Can't wait to see what's going to happen to everyone during the course of this adventure of yours :)
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Reviewer: MonstersWithsoftsSpots (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
i can't wait for the next chapter, update fast please !!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, I will. Thank you. =)
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
Please update soon. I enjoyed your opening chapter and want to see what you have in store for Bella and Edward.
Author's Response: I will update soon. It all depends on my validation beta.
See yah next update. Thanks. =)
Reviewer: honorata (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
This is a funny plot. Will enjoy reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you. See yah next update. =)
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2011 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
interesting...
Author's Response: Thank you. =)
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Oh, sh-t!
Whoops! This mistake could get interesting....
Author's Response: Yes, it definitely will. lol Thanks. =)
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