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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 07:33 PM · On: Primal

lucky he has Bella to calm him after that drama.....I hope Bella takes Angela's advice.....

Reviewer: pfarrell (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 07:17 PM · On: Primal

I was so excited to see your update!! Such a great story, thanks for sharing it!!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2013 05:18 PM · On: Primal

I feel torn having lived in Philly and kids living in Pittsburgh. My daughter who is now a world traveler made sure she took her Pens stuff with her. Loved how Bella is coming to terms with her feelings about Edward.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2012 07:19 AM · On: What was Missing

Hi there, just started reading and read straight through. I love it. Love your Edward and Bella, And Charolett is right, there is nothing sexier than seeing a man or father interacting with a child.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 08:26 PM · On: What was Missing

Aww! What else can you say, except... Come on Bella!

Reviewer: Sunflower (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 04:52 PM · On: What was Missing

Send it to csquirt@aol.com! :)

Reviewer: gracefish21 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 08:03 AM · On: What was Missing

soo good

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2012 07:30 AM · On: What was Missing

Great chapter! My heart was breaking at the beginning just thinking of how sick and hurt Edward was, at the thought of Bella not being his, awwww! Really got to me, but then to see him hold her tight, knowing it was a dream, so wonderful. Great job! Bella obviously loves Edward very much, and to see these two slowly building a closer and closer relationship, just makes me smile and smile. How Charlotte is talking to Bella, and suddenly the though of children, especially a girl with long brown hair and green eyes, sounds OK. Loved it! Everyone must see the looks these two give one another.....and it's awesome! You absolutely got to me when I read about little Bree, and how sweet Edward was with her. Who doesn't love a Sweetward!?? LOVED IT! Edward loves how Bella is getting more comfortable with the women of his team, and I can't wait to see more! Adore the story!! Keep up the great work!!! xoxo

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 07:57 PM · On: What was Missing

he's the sweetest thing! Bree is going to be so surprised!

Reviewer: ficreader (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 06:51 PM · On: What was Missing

Hi, I would like to read the Fandom for Texas one-shot. I was a little nervouse reading the beginning of this chapter. I don't read stories until they're complete, but skim the chapters when I receive the updates (sometimes authors don't marrk stories 'complete'). Anyway, please send the one-shot...thanks!

Reviewer: Indigold (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2012 06:04 PM · On: What was Missing

Awwww Dadward FTW!!!! Love this story!!! Thanks for the update :) Hockeyward is sexy as.......you know what ;)

Reviewer: Becky92532 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Girl Date

Loved the new chapter! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gracefish21 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 04:04 PM · On: Girl Date

so good

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Girl Date

Oh, I think Bella should definitely be giggling and squeeing-all that adrenaline and high on the win is going to need to be spent somewhere!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 02:02 PM · On: Girl Date

I just loved it. I like stories where I learn something and since I know nothing about hockey I am having fun getting some of the playing words. I enjoyed the Alice and Bella meeting too.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Girl Date

Loved the girl date....lol! i hate that their bubble will brought disrupted when she gets back to work.....

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 03:36 AM · On: Snooping

I'll bet game day could become a favorite! Especially if they win and he plays well. Then that kitchen experience might become a ritual!

Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2012 06:04 AM · On: Snooping

riley is making me wanna say bad words. ugh. creepy

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 10:33 PM · On: Snooping

Damn cute, damn erotic..damn everything. Edward the big time hockey star, is a big time softeee when it comes to his Bella. Such a tease, as he talks about their future. Love it! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Snooping

they are very sweet, that's why it pisses me off that jealous conceited pricks like Riley are out to destroy their happiness!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 05:35 PM · On: Snooping

Loved it ! They are so cute. Can't wait to see what happens with Alice and how the game goes.

Merrily

Kat

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 03:32 PM · On: The Newest Girlfriends

I can't wiat for the game!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 08:34 PM · On: The Newest Girlfriends

Absolutely adore a great hockey story, and you've got one here! Loved the visual of the boy running through the airport with a "Cullen" jersey on....made me smile. The little kiss at the airport, so sweet, followed by some amazing nighttime activities. He's so happy to have her there!!! I can see the boy singing along in the car, pretty off key.....but happy. Yeah, lit up like a Christmas Tree. Can't wait to see Alice and Bella bonding. Great read.

Reviewer: tickledpink89 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 03:55 PM · On: The Newest Girlfriends

Love this story mixing Hockeyward and Bella this is the best thing mixing sports with their love story. Can't wait to see what comes up next, dont make us wait too long please?!?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 02:23 AM · On: The Newest Girlfriends

Now he has the opportunity to knock her socks off, maybe bring the romance out into the open!

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