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Reviewer: channings (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 12:02 PM · On: On the Beach
Love this so much. Everything about it, really. For some reason, 'With Alice, there was always matching panties.' really stood out to me as the truest line of the story because Alice is a psycho, really.
But I love Jake/Bella. SO. MUCH. :) I love your writing. This is great.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Alice
wow! like the tug of war. Its hard being stuckbetween 2 loves, and you get that through so wel....and hot! omg!
Reviewer: billikers (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Done
I wish you made this like a Choose Your Own Adventure book from here. . . because I would really like for Bella to say yes!
Author's Response: It's funny that you say that, because I was thinking of doing just that! And having certain chapters follow certain story lines. But then I thought it would just be confusing. I know I haven't updated in awhile, I promise it's not abandoned. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Samilee (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 10:44 AM · On: Alice
LOVE THIS STORY!!! When will you finish, I'm in suspense!!
Reviewer: cooksey25 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:18 AM · On: The Seed
I love this story!! Are you planning to post more chapters??
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Alice
Miss your story! Do you plan on continuing?
Reviewer: Samilee (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:13 AM · On: The Seed
It's a great story so far!!! Hurry and make a new chapter :D
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Alice
Post, post, post the next chapter please!
Amazing!
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Let Me Be Free
In a way I was feeling bad that Bella held that last part back from Jacob but it would have ruined the rest with Edward for sure. It's now already tarnished but great job yet again!
And you're right, those lyrics are perfect for Jake.
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Done
Again...HOT, HOT, and even more HOT. That was a great piece of writing! I loved it and even got into the Bella and Jacob thing even though I'm team Edward.
Great job!
Author's Response: THanks for reading! I haven't abadoned it, just need some time to work on it, so stick with me!
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:12 PM · On: On the Beach
Wow! That was really hot! If this really was just a love triangle and Jacob never ended up with Nessie then this would be some serious drama. Wicked drama. I just won't think of this as the same "Twilight" saga as I read this.
Getting better with every chapter! Really loving it!
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Quick Decision
Love the mattress bit, hilarious. You have my full attention and now I can't wait to read the rest. Great job!
Reviewer: Dreaming Dimitra (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:35 PM · On: The Seed
I'm very curious to know why you've chosen Emmett as the "messenger" instead of Alice or even Esme. Was it for comic relief?
Great start, I look forward to the next.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought Emmett would be the only one blunt enough. And you don't get much of an Emmett/Edward relationship from the books. I'd like to think they're closer. thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:46 PM · On: On the Beach
ummmm........ok
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Alice
Please, Please, Please,Please add some more chapters.........
Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:33 PM · On: On the Beach
ummmm........ok
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Alice
Don't stop -- don't stop!!! Please add more! Good stuff!
Reviewer: his bella (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: The Seed
If Bella had chosen Jacob- either to love or to "help" her pre-honeymoon, THIS is how it would have been written! You write beautifully and descriptive in a respectiful, reverential manner that makes it feel like we are in Bella's head. WELL DONE! I can't wiat to read more!
Reviewer: his bella (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 01:02 PM · On: The Seed
If Bella had chosen Jacob- either to love or to "help" her pre-honeymoon, THIS is how it would have been written! You write beautifully and descriptive in a respectiful, reverential manner that makes it feel like we are in Bella's head. WELL DONE! I can't wiat to read more!
Reviewer: Mitia (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Alice
OMG Great story!
NEED MORE!!! KEEP WRITING!!! SMUT IS GOOD!!!
Reviewer: bells13nm (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Alice
I'm getting SUPER anxious...I wanna read more!!!
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Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Alice
I started reading this thinking it was funny, but soon realized, "Oh!" I'm thinking Edward won't be pleased with Bella's solution, but what was that small nod to Emmett all about?? Surely, it wasn't intended as it turned out, but only to have Bella not panic when they do have sex. I don't think it was for Edwards blood lust, as the deal was that if Bella married Edward, he would then change her, and Bella had complete confidence in Edward.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story and hope your wedding went well. Married life can be quite difficult, getting all the small things in line and establishing a routine of sorts.
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Alice
" shock is all over her face" umm yea ok..
Reviewer: AshleyMCullen (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Alice
I am really getting into this story. Please Please post more soon!!!!
Reviewer: WendyJH2 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Alice
How can she dismiss what happened with Jacob like that. But, this is a Edward/Bella story. I have to keep reminding myself of that. Still love it though.
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