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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 04:46 PM · On: Prologue

Interesting start.  I love Emmett!

Reviewer: domoxchan (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm definitely liking this story. I've always liked reading TFs from Emmett's point of view but the prolongue didn't really sell me yet. However, the first chapter was amazing. I hope you keep on continuing this story(: 



Author's Response:

Glad you read past the prologue then, I guess.  :-)  Chapter 2 is already in the queue.  And Chapter 3 is with my Beta, so it's coming as soon as I can write them.  LOL  Thanks again for the review.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: watchcrisis (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

hey, this was pretty interesting. I'd love to see how the story develops.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.  Chapter 3 should be up soon. 

Reviewer: blackjacklily (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Prologue

Damn, I tried to get here as quick as I could to give you your first review, but oh well.

I am so happy you are finally up. This story will be one of your best yet. You are so talanted, so amazing, and a great friend.

I am so thankful to be able to be a part of this.

Love you bbs!



Author's Response:

Aw... your so sweet.  Thanks bbs!!  mmmwwaaaaa... Love you right back!

Reviewer: NOMnomNOM (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Prologue

oooOOOOoooOOoOoooOOOooooOOOOooooOOOoooOOOooo
this sounds intruiging already!
little heads up for next time, maybe put a little more in there?
too many open ended cliff-hangers can make ME (personally) loose interest occaisionally :)
but its well written and sounds exciting!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your constructive crit on the prologue.  I had more in there, but my beta said it kinda introduced characters too early, etc.  So while it's a little cliffhangery, don't worry.  Chapter 1 will be along shortly.  & Chapter 2 soon after.  I've already written through Chapter 3 - so hopefully I won't keep you hanging for long.  THanks again!

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