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Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2012 02:01 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

i very much enjoyed this story

Reviewer: stella sin (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 03:15 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

great story, not what i was expecting when i started, but really great! it was a little confusing how you jumped around from one pov the the next, but after a few lines i could figure out who was the focus. thanks for sharing and i cant wait to read another one of your peices.

Sin~

Reviewer: Georgi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Wonderfully written story, but unrealistic as to the aspects of life as a royal, especially in England.  The dialog was almost pure "American".  With that said the story line and twists were wonderful, and I enjoyed reading the story.  Thanks for writing and posting.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 05:42 AM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

What a sweet ending! I'm so glad they found their HEA. Great job, sweets!

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sarah!

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Wonderful ending and beautiful story.. I've enjoyed reading over the past year. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 04:19 PM · On: An arrangement years in the Making

ack sorry, can't read on.  Too unrealistic and stiff. 

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 10:46 AM · On: The people have Spoken

Things are going well! I hope it continues...

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 08:39 AM · On: A good impression Goes a long Way

Oh, I hope the coronation goes without any problems...

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 08:26 AM · On: A true Princess

Uh oh. Wonder what the announcement will be. This is my favorite chapter so far. I like the slow yet steady progress these two are taking. Our Prince is quite the master of seduction isn't he? Cant wait to readmore!

By the way, I hope Rosalie changes a little, as she comes to see Bella's genuine care for Edward. She is quite horrible to date...

Thank you again! 

Chyla

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Welcome to a world of Darkness

Wow. Very unexpected turn of events.. Very intriguing...

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 05:23 PM · On: An arrangement years in the Making

Nice start to the story. I can't wait to read on! 

By the way, I fell out  when you wrote that Edward probably wears high waters! lol

Chyla

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 03:59 AM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

I can't believe it's over! I loved this story so much. Can't wait to read more from you in the future.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 05:40 PM · On: A good impression Goes a long Way

first i love your story ...next optic nrver transplant and stem cell regenaration is in its eary primate research stage so i am ok with what ever path you want since this is a fiction story.... just thinking out loud

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 07:11 AM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Brilliant story!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 01:16 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Loved it!!! :) 

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Happy New Year to you, too! I'm really sad to see this story end - but there's still the audiobook to look forward to, so I won't complain too much...

Thank you very much for sharing this story. I enjoyed it a lot!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 06:25 AM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

I can't believe how beautifully you captured that small momentwhe. A couples just sitting there together, working side by side, in silence, all the while stealing glances at one another. Been there, done that, and you got it. NOW, the way that she told Edward that they were goi g to have a baby, squeeeee! Loved it! So sweet! I can feel the love!! It was really sweet to see at the end how Edward and Bella still cling to one another, although Edeard doesn't need the assistance due to a vision issue, HE just doesn't want Bella far from him!! Loved it! Sad to see the story ending, and wouldn't mind seeing a FEW outtakes, or maybe a little "for the love of a Prince"story????? LOL! Ah, I'm just greedy by nature whe. It comes to unbelievable, spectacular stories! Loved it!!

Reviewer: sirena (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 08:55 PM · On: An arrangement years in the Making

boring, unrealistic, descriptions and lines taken straight from the book. 

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Epilogue: Long Live the King

Thank you for the epi...i may reread the first few chapters.  

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2011 11:00 PM · On: White Tulle and Lace

Please don't leave us hanging without our ending. we are dying to see how Edward and Bellas' lives turned out. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 07:40 PM · On: White Tulle and Lace

Thank you for writing this sweet chapter.  It was lovely.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 06:15 PM · On: Dark Pools of Wonder

Thanks for a great chapter.  I am so glad you are wrapping up this story.  I bet it will feel wonderful when you change the status to complete. :)

Reviewer: Lily09 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 02:44 PM · On: White Tulle and Lace

Ohh Noooo! not the epilogue! I love this story sooo much, it's the reason i started looking for more prince edward/ commoner Bella stories :| it's ending.. waaaahhhhhhhh :'(

I guess all good things must come to an end :( Well written though :P

Reviewer: tabbymarie1975 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 12:46 PM · On: White Tulle and Lace

awesome u did so good

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 01:08 PM · On: White Tulle and Lace

too freaking wonderful! i loved it! i am so happy that aro lost!! he is such a jerk! i wonder if edward and bella will caom back from their honeymoon with a surprise?

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