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Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:38 PM · On: One-Shot

I'm thinking that a lo-ong visit to Jacksonville is looking better all the time - where Bella will probably become the fixation of a lovelorn warlock.

Even before I found my True Team Affiliation, I was shocked at how B just let Edward back into her life so easily, it just didn't seem natural...(oh, yeah, this is a fantasy story, oops.) Thanks for fixing that.

Very cute! <><3

Author's Response:

Good evening, diamondheart! :)

Always a pleasure to see you!

LOL Ohhh wouldn't that be just the thing for her?  Hie off to get away from the Idiots and meet up some other legend-come-to-life... 

Or a superhero!  Now that'd be very hot. :D  Nice bods! ;-)

Bella's easy acceptance of Edward was NOT healthy. I like to have a Bella who makes him sweat. ;-)

Thanks for reading!!!



Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 06:15 PM · On: One-Shot

Now this is what should have happened in New Moon, not forgiving either of them so easily - that was a let down of S. meyer. I much prefer your version of events! Thanks for posting.

Rating : 9/10

Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Little-Lamb!

Thank you!  I would have preferred a bit more "nuh-UH!" from her myself. lol

Thanks for reading and for the generous rating!


Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 10:12 AM · On: One-Shot

would have loved to have heard what happened next lol the next morning

Author's Response:

Good morning, vixenjc!

Hey, me too! lol  Now that IS something to consider. A few folks have asked me to continue this, over the past couple of years (seriously), and I would definitely start at the next morning if I ever do. lol  Oh yes, where are the guardians?  Does Bella lock her window with a big padlock?  Does Charlie start sleeping in the living room, gun on his lap?

Thank you for reading! :)


Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 12:18 AM · On: One-Shot

Funnier than hell you need to keep on with this story line

Author's Response:

Good morning, redauntie1!

Aw, thank you! I wrote this two years ago, can you believe, and people still tell me that I should do something else with it. I am glad it is here to amuse you and, maybe one day, to spur my imagination to do something new. :)


Thank you for reading!


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