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Reviewer: FireKat09 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
So this is my first review ever, and I've been reading fan fiction off and on for almost 10 years now. I love your story it makes me giggle and keeps me waiting for more...to see how it play out. Keep wrighting...and faser please lol
~FireKat
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
-"Astronomical," he'd said aloud to himself, smiling proudly at his star-related observation and stellar wit.- LOL. Great chapter, and you killed me with the unused pennames, I cant believe the simple ·Stardusted· one wasnt already occupied...this were my favourites, they fit his character selfview so well: TheOriginalAssHat
ADickTed2Bookz
TheMadHatter
Hope u can update soon, have great weekend
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Oh, it's a shame you didn't use "ireallyshouldn'tbedoingthis" *LOL*...
Angela is quite happy playing matchmaker for those two, isn't she? Too funny... And Edward's comment about his usual Saturday morning pastime made me choke on my drink (yeah, I know, stupid me, I KNOW the warnings!). ;-)
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
That was great... can't wait for Esme at the BBQ now ;)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Another awesome chapter! Dickward wasn't a dick at all in this one. And Angela, that little sneak ;) I love Edward's pennames LMAO
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Squeeee I am so glad you finally posted his comment teehee!!! I hate that he thinsk she should keep her feelings in check that was pretty darn close to hurtful... But then again she doesn't know yet...Post again soon more more more lol
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
You know I have to show you some love!! Your story makes me smile, always!! I'm really starting to love your Angela. She's able to see what we all know. Edward has the hots for Bella, and jumped ou of that car as if her hair was on fore looking for water, just to give these two time to be alone. Damn, she's good, and I can't wait to see what she'll try to set these two up. I have a feeling her illness was perfect to put the two oblivious "assholes" in a car together. Loved it all!! Edward is clearly trying to win Bella's respect, and maybe love??? Bella is also smitten, but still probably remembers silky pants man, lol. Need to trust, but now that Edward is her secret reviewer, damn, trust might go out the window, lol. Angela might start screaming when they are in the changing room or something and get Edward to try to rescue her when she's half dressed...lol. Love it all and love your updates. Much love!!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Sounds like they are well on their way to the "maybe more" she aludes to in her fan fic.
I love the "Im2sexyformypants" penname! Definitely fits him. :-)
On a side note, any plans to finish Tranfer & One Stupid Thing?
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
How I love this story! Each chapter gets better and better!!
I was really sure that Edward would be "different" to Bella, but I guess he is being different to her; he's being nice!
I loved Startdusted's (Should be StarBUSTED) review. Very intriguing indeed. I can't wait for the next chapter, in the story and out of the story and Starbusted's review. LOL
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Love the alternate pennames for Edward. Though they would have been a little too obvious. It'll be interesting to see what she writes next and how Edward responds to it. Can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: GG999 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
That chapter was too funny! I loved the pen names too!
Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Very, very good chapter! I enjoyed every word!!!
Perfect!
Reviewer: yanebrouillard (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
OOOH! It's getting warm! I am always so happy to see an update from your story! Can't wait for next update... I guess i'll have to dust or do laundry or something in the meantime... Keep up the great work! And thanks for brightening my day!
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Oh, I wonder how this will turn out... If Bella starts a "conversation" with her new reviewer about how Ethan might be worthy of Stella, how will Edward use that ammo in real life? This could go in just about any direction. And I'm pretty sure it's going to be a fun ride.
Reviewer: katees (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
First love the extra names, good choice in the end for 'stardusted', but the Jerk_and_the_Beans-stalk in clever.
Wow, what a confusing review, Bella's right, who would question the inevitabilty of the main character's relationship? At the same time it was very analytical and very self loathing Edward. Can't wait to see her reply!
Reviewer: serendipity1 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
I loved it. I get so excited when I get the notification that you have updated! I swear I hold my breath while reading it. Hanging on every word....and every time you update it is like that. I love your characters...I love that it is fresh and that people such as yourself make these characters come to life. Bella and Edward will honestly live forever as long as there are wonderful writers like you out there to keep them alive. Thank you.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Wouldn't it be great if every saturday was near-naked-in-my-PJ's-day? Nom, nom, nom!!!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
That was fun. I can't wait to see Bellybeans' reply
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Grinning again!!!! Poor Edward will he ever smarten up?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
I loved this chapter! I think Bella can convince 'the reader' that they belong together. :)
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
User names-MWAAAHAAAHAAA!!! I like the Original Asshat! These crazy kids are going to make themselves crazy...
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
those are some awesome names ...she how everybody loves to play along ...ths story is the best ....I am having such a good time with this ....can't wait for her next chapter to see how his next review will get under her skin
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
My fave is Jerk_and_the_beans-stalk! Loved it, just like always. Can't wait to see how she "convinces" her readers that Ethan can become worthy of Stella...maybe Edward will pick up some hints? Great job.
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
Oh, my goodness. I have no idea why it took me so long to get through this chapter but I'm so glad I did. This is going to get SOOOO good! If he's going to interact with her as she writes her stories, he's definately going to have some explaining to do when she finds out... I wonder how she'll take it? Oh, geez, things are about to get good.
I couldn't help but grin like an idiot while reading this, Edward is funny in his desperation. Sigh, now to wait for more bellybeans, Edward interaction...
Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
Oh, I can't wait to see what his review reads like! Update soon.
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