Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
The recovering bimboholic gets it from all sides, I feel kind of sorry for him now. Who wants to share their sex-life with their parents? I highly doubt Esme will be able to keep her knowledge about Bella's story and Edwar's role in it to herself.
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Busted, Edward - LOL... Poor guy probably still doesn't know what hit him. And Esme was so funny, going in circles and not really daring to say what she wanted to say :-)
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Yep - fully expected that. Now, when did Esme tell Alice - that's what I want to know!!! lol
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Things just don't seem to go Edward's way, are they? Even his own mother knows about the fan fic... Hilarious! I can't wait for the party. Something tells me it won't be just three people who know about Bella's story in the end... This will be very interesting.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
I love that Esme was talking to Edward about fan fiction. And "Twi-Lighting?" You clever little clover :)
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
I knew it! I knew (like most of your fans) that it was his mom who would have read that one story!!! That was the funniest thing!! Do I feel bad for him.... Should I? That was the best. I can't WAIT for the next chapter. This is getting convoluted by the minute. I love it! :-D
Reviewer: serendipity1 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Wow! I can't even imagine how embarrassed Bella is going to be when this all comes out. Fantastic update...as always you leave me longing for more. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Hi serendipity!
Yes...Bella will be embarrassed...but she will have someone who can help her through her mortification. Someone who will have experienced a similar mortification. LOL
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
AWWWW I think it's time to cut pooooooor Edward a break!!!!! I realize he's a dickward but he is trying to change, seem to me Eddie boy gets all the shit. Can I kiss it and make it better?????
Thanks for another great chapter
twimom1960
Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Hahahahahahahaha I always love finding out who reads fan fiction. You never expect it.
Author's Response: Well...if you like finding out who reads fanfiction, then you're really going to love my story. ;)
Thanks for the review. Hope you like what's next.
=-bannerday
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
OMG I almost snorted down my sidecar cocktail as I was reading this. I also almost fell out of my chair when Esme was talking about reading fan fic. That was the best laugh I had in a long time. Thank you!
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Hi Kat!
I haven't had a sidecar cocktail in a zillion years. That sounds so yummy! Glad you got a good laugh out of Edward's extreme mortification with his mom reading "his" little story.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
That was priceless!!
Author's Response: Hi Gelsamina!
Glad you liked that last mortifying chapter. Wonder who is more embarrassed...Edward because his mom read it and had that convo with him, or Esme, because she read it and had that convo with him. LOL
Thanks for the review. Hope you like what's coming next.
-bannerday
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
I laughed so hard people at my work starting to come into my office to ckeck on me!!! BEST CHAPTER OF ALL I'VE READ THIS MONTH!!!
have a nice week!
Author's Response: Hi DaSrO!
Glad you got a kick out of that last chapter of FFSGSG. ;) Poor Edward...he never saw it coming. Poor Esme. Then again, she can just go home to Carlisle in his red-hot daddy silk pants. So that's a good thing.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Ha, it's only the three of them.... except I think Emmet might be the masculine-voiced reviewer.. :P Hee hee! and Angela might blab.... and Alice might guess...
Author's Response: Hi PG!
Yeah...the chances of just the three of them being in the loop is pretty far-fetched. Especially given Edward's recent run of bad luck. We all know his luck will be turning in the end.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
10 +++ Awesome as always!!! Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next chappys!!!!
Author's Response: Hi Suzanne!
Thank you for the 10+++. *takes a bow* I'm glad you liked that crazy chapter. Poor Edward, at least that convo wasn't face-to-face.
Thanks for the review. Hope you like what's coming up next.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Great chapter!
I loved Esme talking about the story. It was hilarious!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Poor Edward...his mom is in the know. And now he's in the know as well. Wonder who else is? Bwahahaha!
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked that very revealing chapter.
-bannerday
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Outstanding! Poor doucheward!
Author's Response: ROFLMAO! Oh, Lordy...samekraemer...I wonder if ever there was a Ward like Poor Doucheward? I can't really say that I've read one. There have been some Douchewards, but I'm guessing not many "Poor Douchewards."
That just struck me so funny.
Thanks for the gigglefest.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Haha! Edward got called out on the carpet by his mom! Of course it's his luck that mom was reading Bella's story & figured out it was about him.
Author's Response: Hi twimom!
I'm not sure if Edward got "called out on the carpet" by his mom or if she just pulled the carpet out from under his feet. I guess both. LOL Poor Edward...such a run of bad luck lately. But of course we all know it's good luck in disguise. LOL
Thanks for the review. Sorry I'm so late with the reply.
-bannerday
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Loving your story and wanted to send you more praise here too!! Just picturing Edwards mortification. Over his mother reading this story still makes me laugh. He's laying down in his car from mortification...lol. Can't wait to see what will happen with this story Bella is writing, what her review answer will be, and of course if Edsafd can keep from laying down so he doesn't pass out from the stress. LOL! Might want to leave some of that illumination at the party so you don't see ner blushing or the green discoloration of his skin from feeling sick..lol. love it all, as always......xoxox.
Author's Response: Hi RW, you multi-site praising fangirl! Love ya, bb! Can't you just see him lying down in that car? I just giggle every time I think of it. I loved your comment about her blushing at the party and him being green, feeling sick at what's going on behind the scenes. LOL
Thanks for the reviews!
-bannerday
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
LOL I knew she'd read it! XD Geeeeez! I can't wait till Bella posts the next few chapters. Although that would be entirely awkward if Esme continued reading and Bella started to write things that happened with Edward.... No mother should ever read that. lol
Can't wait for more! XD
Author's Response: How cool is Esme, reading fan fiction at her age? (Well...my age too, as it turns out. lol) How mortifying is it for Edward that his mom is reading? Very! We'll have to wait and see what develops in that story of hers and just how much mom gets to read, because you just know she's going to be curious. lol
Thanks for the review. Hope you like what's coming next.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Born Princess (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Roll on the barbeque! And more of Edward reading Bella's story!
Author's Response: Hi Born P!
The BBQ is on its way...as is Edward reading more of Bella's "stuff" like her review reply. Hope you like that.
Thanks for the review. Sorry this reply is so late.
-bannerday
Reviewer: numiii (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
LOVE all the potential Edward pennames xD the anxiety that Edward feels for Bella reading his review is so raw, so much of a "lighter" Edward, especially in this story. I like how you made Angela sneakier and sly compared to the original Twilight. Bella needs someone to convince her to take the risk, and I'm glad it's Angela(:
Cant wait for the next chapter! I've gotten so desperate for this story, I put everything I was doing on hold just to finish the chapters I needed to read XDD
Author's Response: Hi again, numiii!
Glad you liked Edward's "penname outtakes." lol I'm glad you are enjoying a lighter Edward in this story. He's confused, but he's not terribly angsty. And I love Angela. I'm glad you like her sneakier side. She's just the best of friends...she's protective, perceptive, practical, possibly-periodic and willing to give Bella a kick in the right direction....Edward's direction.
Thank you for the review once again.
-bannerday
Reviewer: numiii (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
God I was laughing so hard XD Edward's commentary + Bella's words = a drooling reader who was laughing uncontrollaby on the floor. Best chapter yet. I can't wait to read more to see how it all turns out! XD
Author's Response: Hi numiii!
I laughed at your review. I may have rolled on the floor drooling as well. lol Glad you liked Edward's inner musings/tirades as he read B's story.
Thank you for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
why did she pull the story!?!?! that was a good story! i really enjoyed it. as i am this one!! keep up the good work....although i have never really understood that saying.....
Author's Response: Hi again!
I think she pulled the story because she may be writing it up as an original fiction, perhaps for sale at some point. That sometimes happens with a really great story.
Thankk you again for your votes of confidence and kind words. :)
-bannerday
Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan
ha! i have read most of bella's stories that she has on her "baker's dozen"
Author's Response: Hi genevieve!
I am so far behind on review replies, but i thought I would try to catch up a little. I'm glad you recognized a lot of the baker's dozen." They were all really great reads.
Hope you continue to enjoy FFSGSG. Thank you for all your reviews.
-bannerday
Reviewer: saneheart3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
omg! hahahaha! i was laughing the whole time! i just kept thinking that edward would slip or bella. :) aww! that was an awesome reveiw from edward. hes such a softy underneath it all. :)
ps I LOVE YOU!! you are a brilliant author! :D i absolutely loved the list of "not" possible pennames. ;] my list of favorites starting with my number one:
silkandsatin (Winner)
ADickTed2Bookz (1st runner up)
Im2sexyformypants (2nd runner up)
TheOriginalAssHat
UrDifficult2Read
We'reNotOnTheSamePage
Im2sexyformypants
Jerk_and_the_beans-stalk
TheMadHatter
Ireallyshouldn'tbedoingthis
Author's Response: Hi saneheart!
Sorry this reply is ridiculously late. Oh well, better late than never. I'm glad to know you got a real kick out of Edward's "penname outtakes." I love that you took the time to "rank them." Hilarious. And you are right...Edward really is a softy underneath it all...at least for the right woman. I'll bet he's occasionally hard for that right woman as well. ;)
Thanks for the love,
-bannerday
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