Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
Bella just need to ride Edward on to work. Of course he will come rescue her.
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
wow, another absolutely beautiful chapter!!!!
I am so in love with this story and cant wait for more
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
DEFINITELY the right combination!
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
You are an amazing story-teller! I just love this story and smile everytime I get a notification that it's been updated! Thanks for sharing :}
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
I like that Bella had the confidence to give Edward a happy morning. Great cliffy with her truck dying at the end.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Great chapter. I could almost feel Bella's nervous jitters in the bathroom before she met Edward at her bed. I doubt extended foreplay will work for them. They do have a lot of spark.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Great chapter. I love the history of the Dartmouth sweatshirt. Plus great cliffie with Edward finding out just how special Bella is.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: AshesAshes (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
So sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter. I expect Bella's bliss will be noticed by her students and teasing will ensue ...
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: roseblossome (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS
Love the chapter!!! Edward was so good with her. She sure shocked Edward in the morning!! LOL some dreams do come true.
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Love the "About 3 things..." quote in this context! LOL
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Love the "About 3 things..." quote in this context! LOL
Reviewer: penstop (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
THIS is an amazing story I have had such fits of laughter that i can 't remember having for a really long TIME!!!!!!!! THANK YOU for that and keep them coming. I DO BELEIVE IN FATE.
Reviewer: ShanaEich (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
I can't wait to read more!!!!! So very excited to see what is next for this couple.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
this should be where she opens her drawer and a note from Alices pops up with the perfect night wear ......progress were are making progress ,,,,this is such a slow burner the state of Texas could have already burned down ,,,,lol......you go girl
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Woo hoo!! Yeah baby, so glad Edward suggested waiting, you get to see the real gentleman there.
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2013 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
I loved this chapter. I love this story. I can't wait for next week <3
Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
I have extremely blue balls from reading this fic. I'm sure this comes as a complete surprise to my dh. Seriously, this is moving as fast as continental drift. Which is to say, NOT. I'm giving up. Seriously.
Author's Response: Hi D A
Sorry about your blue bits. You nearly made it. The Continental Drift lurches forward next chapter. It's posted already on FFN if you want to check it out there. If not, sorry you feel let down.
-bannerday
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Bella's pre-sex spit bath...hysterical!! And her comment to Edward about it being both of their first times...so sweet!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Can't get enough of your story!! Your Edward and Bella are so freakin fantastic together!!!!! Love it!!!
Reviewer: funlovincat (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
You, Bannerday, are a tease! and i think she should have used the Dartmouth sweatshirt security blanket as a nightshirt so he could take it off her - really symbolic.
Reviewer: funlovincat (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
You, Bannerday, are a tease!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
holy hell squeeee!!! I am so excited for to get so excited and for some amazing excitment hell even extended foreplay sounds liek so much fun that I was liek squeeeeeee!!!! post again soon you big tease!!
Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Ahhaaahhaaa. Excuse me while I pick myself up off the floor. Love how you worked in that last paragraph! :D
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2013 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
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