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Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 57: The Trucker

What?!?!  That was random!  Buy the fanfiction site?  Hilarious!

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 57: The Trucker

Ha! Well, that came out of left field!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2013 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Great chapter - again! The time for Bella to put into action what she's writing about in her stories has come.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Lots of explosions in this chapter :D Me likey!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt

This chapter was a soft hug and a warm ball of gooey happiness!  Until the end...now I'm freaking out again.  When they're anxious, I get anxious!

Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

I think you got the combo exactly right! It was all those things in spades! Yowza! More please, and thank you!

Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

One Word "AWESOME"

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Such a sweet chapter...lol

Reviewer: linda (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

More Please!!!!!! Linda

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

lmao her poor truck is dead....  Cant wait for more I get so lost in the story I lost trac of time myself!!!!  Post again soon!

Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Bella just need to ride Edward on to work. Of course he will come rescue her. 

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2013 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

wow, another absolutely beautiful chapter!!!!

I am so in love with this story and cant wait for more

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

DEFINITELY the right combination!

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

You are an amazing story-teller!  I just love this story and smile everytime I get a notification that it's been updated!  Thanks for sharing :}

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

I like that Bella had the confidence to give Edward a happy morning.  Great cliffy with her truck dying at the end.

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

Great chapter.  I could almost feel Bella's nervous jitters in the bathroom before she met Edward at her bed.  I doubt extended foreplay will work for them. They do have a lot of spark.

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt

Great chapter.  I love the history of the Dartmouth sweatshirt.  Plus great cliffie with Edward finding out just how special Bella is.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: AshesAshes (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

So sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter. I expect Bella's bliss will be noticed by her students and teasing will ensue ...

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: roseblossome (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2013 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 56: Shivering KABLAMS and Shuddering KERPOWS

Love the chapter!!!  Edward was so good with her.  She sure shocked Edward in the morning!! LOL some dreams do come true. 

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

Love the "About 3 things..." quote in this context! LOL

Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2013 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

Love the "About 3 things..." quote in this context! LOL

Reviewer: penstop (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2013 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

THIS is an amazing story I have had such fits of laughter that i can 't remember having for a really long TIME!!!!!!!! THANK YOU for that and keep them coming. I DO BELEIVE IN FATE.

Reviewer: ShanaEich (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2013 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

I can't wait to read more!!!!! So very excited to see what is next for this couple. 

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash

this should be where she opens her drawer and a note from Alices pops up with the perfect night wear ......progress were are making progress ,,,,this is such a slow burner the state of Texas could have already burned down ,,,,lol......you go girl

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