Oh, Jessica. Gold digger? And poor Bella, almost having a heart attack. I loved the scene in the garage. I can't wait for that first kiss!

Aww, Bella went and got a copy made of her key :]] How cute. And I can't wait for this BBQ :D This is honestly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and i've read, many, many a fanfiction. You're a very talented author, and I hope to read many of your other stories in the future!

Jeese, Edward, why did you have to lie? It's just going to blow up in your face, as it always does. And obviously by that last night it's not just the three of them...Maybe Alice? :] Among other people. Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens at the party.

Wow...It's so weird for me to have just seen the Fifty Shades of Grey being advertised in a magazine just the other day, having no idea it used to be a fanfiction. That's completely amazing to me, and I now want to go and buy it just because I know how it first started.

In other news, I'm so excited now. I didn't think I'd like having to go through the chapter again, but I actually liked it with all of Edward's little commentaries. I find it extremely funny how he argues with himself constantly.

Author's Response:

The Fifty Shades books are actually very close to the original, of course the names of the characters have been changed, but it's pretty easy to figure out which character is which Twilight character. If you do read and wonder who any character is, I can fill you in. It's not just scintillating erotica, it's also a great love story, though it is hard to read at times. Lots of wonderful ups and downs and edge of your seat moments.

I'm glad you liked Edward's mental musings and arguments with himself. ;)

Thanks again.

-b

 

Hopefully our little Edward will have the sense to see when it was posted...Maybe then he'll calm down? This is ridiculously funny, though. I'm loving it :] And this chapter was hilarious.

Haha, Jezebel. I laughed at that one XD And JASPER! You had me all worried for nothing :[ And Bella, too! Well, at least their night will now not be so awkWard.

Author's Response:

Jezebel and Emmaline...*giggles* Hahahahaha FOOLED YOU! I love how every reader was so upset about the blind date. Edward wasn't feeling too good about it either. And then there was poor little Bella, watching her daydreams and plotlines going right into the toilet. ;)

Wait, did you think you made the fragrance up? XD That would be hilarious. It looks like it costs and arm and a lag, and then some. This chapter was extremely amazing, and I couldn't have been happier with how it ended (well...besides them making out then him taking her on her desk...In her bunny slippers XD...akdsjf). And hopefully, with the little hint from Bella's 'bellybeans', he'll figure out her pen name.

Author's Response:

Yes, Shanniles! I thought I had made the fragrance up! Then a reader sent me a link to Predateur ou Proie. It is expensive stuff, which is only right, right? I love the idea of Edward taking Bella on her desk at school while she is wearing her bunny slippers. That had me ROLLING! I can totally see it!

xo

-b

im one of those ppl that read storys that never review, and its not b/c i dont like the storys its b/c i never know what to write.

anyway i just wanted to say that i cant wait to see how the rest of the story turns out, and that i dont think that i have LOL so much reading a story in a long time

Author's Response:

Hi Kris!

Thank you for the review. You did a good job! :) Just knowing you are enjoying the read is a great review. I'm glad you are getting some good laughs at my characters' expense. LOL

I'll update in a few days. Keep in touch!

-bannerday

I was honestly close to tears during and after her returning her things. She's just so innocent and kind. I feel immensely bad for her and I wish I could give her a hug. I really hope that Edward makes up with her soon :[ It's so depressing to see them both this way. Hopefully Angie's visit with help Bella out :] I'm also happy I was right about Edward being a snoop (on Bella's laptop), I was sure at least someone had done something with it.

Author's Response:

Hi again, Shanniles!

I loved that you were so moved by sad little Bella when she returned Edward's things. He felt the same way. See how I did that? He wanted to hug her just as desperately as you did.

Thanks again for all the reviews.

-bannerday

Ohmigod, I'm so happy she didn't lie. I was dreading it :[ And how he took care of her was extremely cute. Too bad it doesn't seem like they'll be getting together any time soon...Or will they? (Please say yes!)

So before all of the new characters came into play, I felt like I knew who some of the reviewers were...But now I'm not so sure :[ I also don't know how much I like it when I have to wait to move on in a story while the story is being written in the other person's perspective...I like it, but at the same time I don't. Also, for some reason I was sure that when Bella left her computer on with her site up (or a review...I don't remember) that Alice or someone was going to go in there and realise (since I thought Alice was the person who makes Bella's banners...Star-Ho?) who Bella was. Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait to see how this dinner goes :]

Loved this chapter. Definitely a first for me, with the whole story in a story...in a story? Kind of thing :] I've liked it though. Also, the banner is sexy, just saying. Hopefully I'll get to see more of Edward's reaction next chapter.

Well, Bella's in deep shit :] I'm actually kind of excited. I wonder if I'd do he same thing as Bella if I was in her situation...Hmm...