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Reviewer: AlexC (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

wow, just found this yesterday, I can't remember the last time I laughed so much from a story, thanks for the warnings to get ready :)

so i found it yesterday afternoon and didn't stop reading (except to get something to eat) until about 3 in the morning and I had to get up for work at 5.45 ... not the best day at work I've ever had. And what where my plans last night - read a little bit and then study for the huge exam I have in a couple of days. So that didn't happen. So at 3 in the morning i got to the end of a chapter and said thats it, closed my laptop and forced myself away. All day at work I've being dying to get home to read more. so I finally open my computer, the page is already up, I scroll down just a bit further ready to press the next button and have another awesome night reading your hilarious version of Bella and Edward but its not there!!! please please please update again soon!!!

I can't wait to see what happens next you have got me hooked. Thank you so much for writing this. I think I strained something last night keeping my laughter quiet enough to not wake the rest of the house.

Looking forward to hearing more xxx

Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life

OMG!!!!!!!!!  I <3 this story!!  this is absolutely the best I've read in a while.  ty so very much for posting it! >:)

 

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

Want to know the first thing that came to mind when I saw the 'o's? NO! Litterally, it was a big, fat NO! I don't want to waaaaait :[ Yes, I am whining like a little kid. I can't help it. I love this so much, and I'm always wanting more by the time I'm at the end of a chapter, I almost just don't want to review because I want to move on that badly. :[ I don't know what I'm going to do while I wait for the next update ;_;

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces

I just knew that was Emmett :] And that means that there's another reviewer who's Rosalie...I'm assuming Alice is Star-Ho, and we know who Esme is. Jessica is probably the constantly giddy one...This is just so weird :] I love it. Another great chapter, and I liked being able to see what was going on between Alice and Edward in the backyard, as well has Alice and Angela's conversation. But stupid James, he just needs to go :[ He's going to ruin everything.

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em

Ahhh, yeah :] Emmett and Rosalie are hysterical. I love Emmett, and it was nice to see that side of Rosalie. I'm sad I'm catching up to all of the updated chapters, being able to read it straight through has been soo nice. But I hope something...Romantic(?) happens in the next couple chapters to come, before I have to wait for the next updates like everyone else.

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises

Oh, Jessica. Gold digger? And poor Bella, almost having a heart attack. I loved the scene in the garage. I can't wait for that first kiss!

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks

I really love who you've made Edward and Bella out to be. Their personalities are just great. I can't wait for all of the canon couples to meet, as I'm sure they will at this BBQ. Sorry, there's always so much I want to talk about, but forget by the end of the chapter. One thing I did remember is the fact that Edward changed his bedding. I loved that, and just like it was mentioned, it was kind of like a double sided thing, where he wasn't just getting rid of old bedding, but also his old habits. And it was too cute how he let Bella have her way with his bed :] Just adorable!

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 29: Word Processing

Aww, Bella went and got a copy made of her key :]] How cute. And I can't wait for this BBQ :D This is honestly one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and i've read, many, many a fanfiction. You're a very talented author, and I hope to read many of your other stories in the future!

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 28: A Review Reply From Starlighted.net

Wow, can't wait to see Edward's reaction to that :D

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

Jeese, Edward, why did you have to lie? It's just going to blow up in your face, as it always does. And obviously by that last night it's not just the three of them...Maybe Alice? :] Among other people. Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens at the party.

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection

Those pennames were quite amusing XD And I loved this chapter! Edward is so cute when he's being protective. And I'm wondering if what Esme has to say to Edward has anything to do with 'From Hate To Heat'? Can't wait for things to really heat up. And Angela is awesome. I love how she's so conniving.



Author's Response:

Hi Shanniles!

I have been loving your comments in your reviews. I haven't had much time to reply, but I'm going to go back to them today and reply where I can. Glad you loved the pennames. ;) Edward is protecitve, isn't he? And he's probably worrying he's got to protect her fom him, to some extent, right? lol I'm glad you love my Angela too. I kind of love that girl. What a great BFF.

Thanks for the reviews.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction

Wow...It's so weird for me to have just seen the Fifty Shades of Grey being advertised in a magazine just the other day, having no idea it used to be a fanfiction. That's completely amazing to me, and I now want to go and buy it just because I know how it first started.

In other news, I'm so excited now. I didn't think I'd like having to go through the chapter again, but I actually liked it with all of Edward's little commentaries. I find it extremely funny how he argues with himself constantly.



Author's Response:

The Fifty Shades books are actually very close to the original, of course the names of the characters have been changed, but it's pretty easy to figure out which character is which Twilight character. If you do read and wonder who any character is, I can fill you in. It's not just scintillating erotica, it's also a great love story, though it is hard to read at times. Lots of wonderful ups and downs and edge of your seat moments.

I'm glad you liked Edward's mental musings and arguments with himself. ;)

Thanks again.

-b

 

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

Ugh! I wish I could go read the updated chapter over on fanfic since i saw that you posted it, but if you find that you have a lack of readers or reviews it's because there is a fanfiction strike / ban going on for all day / night Friday and Saturday. The ban is on for all of the stories being taken down with no warning. I was hoping that this chapter was updated, but i suppose that I'll have to wait for Sunday. :( Just wanted to let you know what was going on in case you hadn't heard yet.



Author's Response:

Hi m&bgirl!

Thank you for letting me know what's up at FFN. I don't do Twitter or Facebook, and I pretty much live under a rock, without personal contact to other writers, so I didn't realize about the boycott until after I'd posted and got a few other messages. I've pretty so pressed for time to write with RL demands for the past few weeks and the chapter was a tricky one to write and be happy with the progressions I needed to include in it. I thought about taking the chapter back down, but I'm lazy and that just always makes for confusion, so I left it up. I was glad to be rid of it after nearly three weeks anyway! lol

It will still be there for you on Sunday, so I hope you enjoy it.

Take care, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Cyber-Stalking a Swan

Hopefully our little Edward will have the sense to see when it was posted...Maybe then he'll calm down? This is ridiculously funny, though. I'm loving it :] And this chapter was hilarious.

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five

I'm so happy he figured it out :D I was hoping it wouldn't take too long. Also, that dinner was so cute. I couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole 'birthday' celebration. I loved that he gave her his jacket, too. That was too cute :]



Author's Response:

I just love when an Edward "jackets" a Bella, so I had to include it in the "Mexican Mariachi Birthday Celebration" chapter. lol

Glad you loved that touch too.

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate

Haha, Jezebel. I laughed at that one XD And JASPER! You had me all worried for nothing :[ And Bella, too! Well, at least their night will now not be so awkWard.



Author's Response:

Jezebel and Emmaline...*giggles* Hahahahaha FOOLED YOU! I love how every reader was so upset about the blind date. Edward wasn't feeling too good about it either. And then there was poor little Bella, watching her daydreams and plotlines going right into the toilet. ;)

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 21: A Series of Thought Provoking Events

I hope Emmett's cousin isn't a main character, because right now I just want her to go die :] Is that a little much? Oh, well. I loved this chapter...So, basically just like every chapter. I feel so bad for Bella, though. Hopefully things will look up soon (Well, more than they have, anyway).

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B

Wait, did you think you made the fragrance up? XD That would be hilarious. It looks like it costs and arm and a lag, and then some. This chapter was extremely amazing, and I couldn't have been happier with how it ended (well...besides them making out then him taking her on her desk...In her bunny slippers XD...akdsjf). And hopefully, with the little hint from Bella's 'bellybeans', he'll figure out her pen name.



Author's Response:

Yes, Shanniles! I thought I had made the fragrance up! Then a reader sent me a link to Predateur ou Proie. It is expensive stuff, which is only right, right? I love the idea of Edward taking Bella on her desk at school while she is wearing her bunny slippers. That had me ROLLING! I can totally see it!

xo

-b

Reviewer: g_divs (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

god, i love this story. keep it coming!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the storylove! More in a few days.

-bannerday

Reviewer: KrisBowes (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

im one of those ppl that read storys that never review, and its not b/c i dont like the storys its b/c i never know what to write.

anyway i just wanted to say that i cant wait to see how the rest of the story turns out, and that i dont think that i have LOL so much reading a story in a long time



Author's Response:

Hi Kris!

Thank you for the review. You did a good job! :) Just knowing you are enjoying the read is a great review. I'm glad you are getting some good laughs at my characters' expense. LOL

I'll update in a few days. Keep in touch!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 19: Distractions

Okay, at least there was a little citrus at the bottom. I've been agonizing, not having any form of loving going on :[ I mean, besides Edward and his slores :] And I'm really happy with how Edward turned around and wants to make things with Bella better. And I find myself finding things throughout the chapters that I want to say, but I have a horrible memory, so I usually forget some of the things I wanted to mention by the time I'm done with the chapter :[

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: Do the (After)Math

I was honestly close to tears during and after her returning her things. She's just so innocent and kind. I feel immensely bad for her and I wish I could give her a hug. I really hope that Edward makes up with her soon :[ It's so depressing to see them both this way. Hopefully Angie's visit with help Bella out :] I'm also happy I was right about Edward being a snoop (on Bella's laptop), I was sure at least someone had done something with it.



Author's Response:

Hi again, Shanniles!

I loved that you were so moved by sad little Bella when she returned Edward's things. He felt the same way. See how I did that? He wanted to hug her just as desperately as you did.

Thanks again for all the reviews.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions

"Oh, Jesus Christ! Bella! You saw that giant, life-like, vibrating dildo?"

Best. Line. Ever.

And wow...This is the most I've laughed so far throughout this fic :] But I'm stressing out on what's going to happen next...I really hope I don't have to sit through a school day :[ That was extrememly boring for me. Oh, well :] Everything else has been amazing. But Edward, I can't imagine what he's going through XD It's hilarious. And poor Bella. She just did what basically any other girl would do. COME ON!



Author's Response:

The best line ever was you writing "Best. Line. Ever." to my line "Oh, Jesus Christ, Bella! You saw that giant, life-like, vibrating dildo?" Bwahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!

I was rolling on the floor.

Tears. Really.

xo

-bannerday

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment

Ohmigod, I'm so happy she didn't lie. I was dreading it :[ And how he took care of her was extremely cute. Too bad it doesn't seem like they'll be getting together any time soon...Or will they? (Please say yes!)

Reviewer: Shanniles (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much

Can they both be on the floor and in each other's arms? Sounds good to me :] I'm seriously waiting until they both give in, this is excruciating. I honestly wasn't breathing at this last part. It was like I was feeling it with Bella. Great chapter!

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