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Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

I hope Bella doesn't get too upset when she finds out so many people know her fan fic id.  Is she going to continue the story before she finds out she is outed?

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Damn I love this story... :)

Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

:D it's always wonderful to see an update from you in my maIlbox. This story is such fun, just love it!

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

I really like the progress these two are making! They're so cute together, and I hope it stays that way. I like stories that give me a warm, fuzzy feeling when I read it and also makes me laugh, and this story does just that.

Reviewer: Angelik1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

This story is so different from the ones I' ve read. Very unique! Please post the next chapters soon. I am breathlessly waiting for the next update. xoxo

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

Excellent chapter! I was smiling when I saw this had updated and I loved everything about this chapter!

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

I loved this chapter!  So being jealous is new to Edward? lol  I think is's sweet and very funny!  I loved the ending....*sigh*

Dixie

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Great great update!!! pls pls update soon

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Great great update!!! pls pls update soon

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

squeeee omg omg omg too cute love love love hahahahaha   The ending to that chap is just wow she totally difused that situation..not lol!!!

Reviewer: shasamp (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?

This is the funniest story I have read in a long time !

 

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

It's so cute how Edward is looking out for signs. I like Bella getting more and more comfortable around Edward and more cheeky.

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

I'm so glad I finally figured out how to get my new laptop to let me review just so I could tell you that this story makes me smile every time I read. I read your author profile, and it's nice to know I'm not the only one who's (well and truly) over thirty around here. :)

Reviewer: serendipity1 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Sooooooo fantastic!  The near thought of this story ever ending kills me much the same way as twilight did.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

I loved this chapter! It was very sweet and I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Really?! Cutting it off right there. Tease. Great job. Post again soon.

Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 45: A Feeling of Lightness

Sweet chapter.  The picnic basket was a nice touch.

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

I have been loving this story!! I wish I could review more often, but RL keeps getting in the way and I am so behind on so many stories, but your's is the one I keep up with. I need the laugh and romance and the UST. I can't wait for the heat to turn up to an inferno!!! 

Happy Thanksgiving to all!!



Author's Response:

Hi Snowball Sniper!

I'm glad to know you are still on the bus for this crazy ride. I totally get RL getting in the way, but thanks for keeping up with me and my silly story. The heat is coming...or maybe I should say turning up...I'll save the "coming" for a later chapter. And I'll try to make it inferno-esque! ;)

Hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2012 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

I applaud you!! I was actually expecting Tanya and Irina to be the usual like in most fanfics i read but you surprised me so i applaud you! =) Oh also, the fact that Edward went over and explained stuff to the sisters were awesome =D i loved that!!

I really liked this chapter..although I would realllllly like to see Bella's next chapter up just so i can see how she will write it. hahah.

I just have to add this, have you seen Breaking Dawn Part 2 yet? If you have...what was your reaction o.o!! You can send that in a private PM so no one sees just in case for spoilers. I JUST NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO ABOUT THIS O.O lol not surrounded by fellow Twilighters >.< hehe



Author's Response:

Hi Forev!

I'm glad you liked the way I treated the Tanya/Irina meet up at breakfast. It took some deliberating to make it logical and make it work. And yeah, I knew it would be kind of a surprise that they weren't as skanky as you'd been led to believe. Remember we really only know about Edward's "encounters" with women through Alice's and Bella's eyes. Alice is certainly not impressed, and Bella was going by what she'd seen and assumed about Edward. And then we've seen Edward re-evaluating the way he has been with women since his encounter with Kate in Chicago. We are seeing that he really isn't a horrible person, there is a reason why he has lived the way he has as far as his approach to women goes. That's coming. Bella's chapter 2 is also coming soon.

I haven't seen BD2 yet. I was out of town and I've been sick. I don't want to watch Edward while my brain is in a fog. I don't want to miss a thing. But hopefully before this weekend is over!

Thank you for the love!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Louise Clark (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2012 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

Yet another chapter that was such an adorable and giddy pleasure to read! ;)

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

Gahh great great chapter!!! Pls pls pls update soon!!

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

Hilarious bimbos!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

I loved it!  I'm thrilled that Edward confessed how he felt!  I can't wait for more!

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 43: A Date With Fate

OMG! lol I can't wait to see what happens!

Dixie

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 44: Dirty Laundry

Edward's growing up, I'm so proud of him. I like the way he handled himself with Tanya and Irina, especially cancelling the party with their father. Kudos to Bella. too, who didn't let herself be intimidated by the girls.

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