The Dickmobile had just left the Dickcave - bwahahahahaha!!  Dear God, I don't think I've laughed so much through fic before.  It's a good job I'm sat on my own at the moment or my daughter would think I'd lost the plot.  Edward's morning is one of those times you wish you had a camcorder handy, pure comedy gold.  I loved how Bella's attitude changed as soon as Vicki called her a Hillbilly.  Lol, I still wouldn't have turned around when Edward kept reving his car engine, I couldn't give him the satisfaction of knowing I was curious enough to let him get my attention.

Jane x

Lol, she bit his dick, hahahaha!!  Edward's seriously going to go out and confront Bella in is silk pyjamas....let's hope that that bite totally killed his erection.  What's he going to say?.....Hi, my name's Edward and you made the woman giving me a blow job bite my dick.  Lol.  Poor Charlie, it's time to let his little girl venture further into the real world all by herself, it's a tough time for him.

I love your beginning.  This has been in my favourites for ages so I have a lot of catching up to do.  I have a really dodgy internet connection at the moment so you'll notice you get reviews in a block.  I do review as I go along but due to said stupid dodgy connection I can only connect every few days, hopefully it will be resolved soon and normal service will resume, lol.

Jane x

I loved this chapter.  And I am thinking more needs to be done about this fate thing.  Maybe a proposal in the same place they first met.  But this time he will be on the floor, kneeling.  I would also like to know the reactions of the others to their fate senario.  It is very sweet.  It reminds me of the couple that when preparing photos for their wedding slide found them both in a shot at Disney.  Or my parents when dating in high school found out my Grandma used to babysit my Dad as a baby.It happens all the time.  Play it up!

squeee love love love thats what he needs/wants to say I hope squeee love it post again soon If Ang moves in with Bella she can save some money and be able to get her a car!!!  woot woot post post

squeeeee omg omg omg wow!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 8389430: Bella Buys Condoms

Send that girl to the gas station, woman! :P

Great chapter. The beginning of 'The Scene' was a little awkward, but then again, I guess all beginnings are a little awkward. Ended very well. Very hot Fingerward.

Love!

Great chapter! I loved it!

Excellent!  More please :):)

I loved this chapter!

Jessica is so, so annoying! Loved Bella's interaction with Bree (Trucker - ha!) and Angela (will we get to know Ben's reaction to the old photo?). Edward - as always - too good for words, Bella's one lucky girl.

Excellent chapter!

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xoxo