.ok you should warn us not to read this when other people around.i was reading it on the beach and i am pretty sure they thought that the heat did a number on me(here in greece is like hell broke loose is 40 C)best lines:jacob:i don`t get it(how fitting)bella:you `re missing one of the major food groups edward :dad,i have this friend who thinks he might have a problem(hillarius)i totally love the concept virginal bella against playboy slash secret geek edward.it`s like war between bad and good,black(ultimate)and white.i can`t wait for the next adventure these stupid kids are going to fall in

p.s is the review i send on f.f but i thought it deserved one here too

Author's Response:

Hi amelia!

I'm so sorry to have caused you to embarrass yourself while reading FFSGSG and laughing out loud in public. People will probably think it is the heat. WOW that's hot for Greece!!! Are you on vacation there or do you live there? I went to Greece about 30 years ago and absolutely LOVED it!

I love when readers quote lines back to me to let me know what they found particularly funny. And yes I think virginal (smart, funny and awkward) Bella pitted against playboy/secret geek Edward is a match made in hell---well, it'll be hell for a bit, then it'll be heavenly. ;) Exactly like a war between good and evil. LOL

Thank you for reviewing me twice!!!

-bannerday

so... I apparently needed to catch up on a couple of chapters, but no worries, I am all caught up now, and let me tell you I am excited for the continuation of the story. I always new Edward had a nerdy, sensitive, side. If he lets that show up a little more then I think I may reconsider that date offer. :P

Author's Response:

Hi -_dreamchaser!

Glad to know you are excited about this little story of mine. and Bella's. Yes...Edward does have a nerdy, sensitive side. if we're lucky we just might get to see it. If it does show up I think the line for the date in the Dickmobile will be somewhat longer than previously thought.

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch! hope you like chapter 7. It's posted. Enjoy!

-bannerday.

Hey there.

Long time fanfic lurker and first time reviewer.  Loved The Transfer and already super excited about this one. Your work is awesome!

Sending much love from the Chicago Twihard Princess,

PrncsHJ 

Author's Response:

Hi prncshj, you long-time-lurker you!

I'm so glad you popped you reviewing cherry with me. I'll try to be gentle with me reply. ;)

Thank you so much for loving The Transfer, my first endeavor. I loved those characters...obviously..I can't seem to let them go, still adding the occasional epilogue. lol

Thank you for the kind words regarding what I've written. Glad you are looking forward to FFSGSG. I think it will be entertaining and very different.

Thanks for reading me and thanks for the review. THE FIRST EVER!!!!!!! YAY ME! :) Take care and keep in touch, bb!

-bannerday  

Great one!! Can't wait for the next! Poor Edward and his non  working parts, I'm sure that is gonna come back to bite him(agian heehee)

Keep'em comin Sugar Britches!

Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi J's S!

I know you've already read and reviewed chapter 7 too...I'll get there. Those non-working parts of Edward's may give him some difficulty in the future...I'll have to see how I feel about the women with whom he hooks up. I can give the guy erectile dysfunction any old time I plese! ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Nice! Now I have a little soft spot for Edward - and it isn't a bog in Ireland. He just wants to be loved for himself :(

I wonder if he is the writer behind the Written in the Stars movies? That would be why he is trawling the fan fic sites.

Author's Response:

Hi Looby  Luscious!

Oooh, I'm glad you sense a little love for Edward. See...he's not all bad. He does just want to be loved for himself. You're onto something here. I will get to Edward's occupation shortly. And are we even sure he's trawling the fanfic sites yet??? ;)

I'm really mean, aren't I? Muwahahahaha!

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch. Chapter 7 will be up in a few days. It's also already up over on fanfic(dot)net if you want to check it out there.

-bannerday

ROFL!! Too funny!

And I imagine that since Edward helped her move in, that he would have noticed that was not going to be living there? Or perhaps Jake spilled the beans that they were friends since Edward told him about her dance moves?!

And thank you thank you for the wonderful Emmett introduction! ;) *swoon* More Emmett please!

Author's Response:

Hi Louise!

Glad you got a good laugh out of chapter 6. Edward still assumes Jake is living there...he hasn't seen or heard anything to the contradictory, and he's operating on what he sees and assumes. B & E BOTH are operating on what they see and assume. lol

There will be more Emmett. I love me some Emmett. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Another brilliant one and soo soo funny!!! :D

Asshole and Bitch hats... the game is on, I guess ;)

Edward is already following Bella in her dreams and Edward is having trouble to perform... (must be quite a shock from him!!).. guess they have both been a lot more affected by their first meeting than they thought!!!

Dear Edward is a bit intimidated by Jake, hmm? Well, if he keeps treating Bella like that, he has reason to be afraid of Jake!

Love love your updates they always give me the best laugh of my day!!

Btw, every time I read the word predicament in a text ... I have think of Transfer Edward and his 'problem' and that gives me plenty distraction from what I should be doing.... I blame u for that :P :P

 

Author's Response:

Hi Rory!

I am so glad you are enjoying! I think B & E are both in for some shocks in the next few days, weeks, whatever...

And yes...Jake is worrying Edward...we'll hve to see what happens there.

Thanks for the terrific review...like always...I'm glad I can give you a good laugh during your day. And I guess I should apologize for ruining the word predickament for you. ;) it's funny, I think that word that way a lot now too.

Chapter 6 and 7 are posted on fanfiction if you ever read there. My validating beta is still gone on a vacation, so I can't update my story here yet. If you come looking for me at fanfiction(dot)net it's the same penname, bannerday. Leave me a me review if you stop by so I know you visited. If not...I'll see you back here soon. !

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

oh my god pazzles were solved and more guestions came in mind all in one chapter.i so knew i should start the story later(thank god for

your fast updates)well i was expecting the bitch hat but not bellas reaction ,so damn funny.and the dom dream,totally genius.and jake made an appearence,  yeah( not really).so the guestions:will edward flog bella in the future(i hope so),will he wearing the siljk pants

(figers crossed),will bella touch edwards pickle(totally),will it be fanctional(damn sure it will be).will they have sex on a diagonal surface?

(please pretty please),does jake  know what hyperbole means?(i reallydon`t think so.this mutt is all muscles and no brains,but at least has a good heart).i can`t wait for more.

i totally love your story,it`s hillarius,not that i don`t love a good angst story,but it was always my opinion that it is more easy to make people cry than laugh,so i have great respect to authors who manage to write a really funny story and you sure can

Author's Response:

Hi amelia!

I know, I know...I'm leaving you hanging. But I'm quick with the updates. This story is my life now.

Glad you liked Bella's Dom dream. That girl has a heck of an imagination. We'll have to wait and see about Edward and his silk pj's...maybe there are more of them. And we'll have to see if he's into the BDSM thing.

I think eventually there will be pickles touched. And Bella will round the bases. Why else would I be writing this? isn't that why we're all here? ;)  I like the idea of it showing up in her fic. ;)

And Jake...more on him in chapter 6. Hyperbole...I'm guessing not.

Thanks for your the storylove and you kind words about my writing. I'm having fun playing with words and fanfic and all of us who love Edward Cullen for whatever reason, no matter the kind of Edward Cullen he happens to be in whatever story we are reading. I hope I can keep up the hilarity and tell my story at the same time. :)

Chapter 6 is posted over on fanfiction(dot)net if you want to read the next chapter over there (same penname and of course same story name). It won't be posted here on Twilighted for at least a week to a week and a half because my validating beta is on vacation. If you come find me on fanfic, please leave me a review over there so I know you dropped by.

Thanks for the review! Keep in touch!!

-bannerday

 

LURVE me some Domme Barbie! That would be TOO classic....Barbie would come complete with BARBed collar, cat o'nine tails, spiked heels for ball shmooshing, a crop for encouragement, and a wee, pink ball gag. >:>  KenPig, her sub slave, could wear spandex shorts, blindfold, and a chastity belt with spikes to tame his unruly erection.

Mattel may never be the same..but you know that stuff would sell!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Esquire...once more...

Glad you like the Domme Barbie idea. Of couse the flogger, cat and crop would all be hot pink, just like the ball gag.  I love KenPig! LOL  I bet there's a hot pink cock cage under those black spandex shorts. ;)

Oh Mattel would never be the same!

Thanks for the giggles!

-bannerday

OMG I'm hooked!! I mean really hooked. I can't wait to get another and another and another.  Your a fanfic Goddess!!

Keep'em comin sugerbritches! I can't wait ;^)

 

Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi again, Stephanie!

Wel I'm glad I have you hooked!

Chapter 6 is posted over on fanfiction(dot)net if you want to read the next chapter over there (same penname and of course same story name). It won't be posted here on Twilighted for at least a week to a week and a half because my validating beta is on vacation. If you come find me on fanfic, please leave me a review over there so I know you dropped by.

Thanks for the review! Keep in touch!!

-bannerday

OMG! I love it already!! This is gonna be one hell of a ride. And I love your story within a story concept. It gives us non-writer readers some insight into what you creative people go through. I can't wait to read more!

 But as JacobsStephanie, I am hoping you give him a hot girl and some stroy time, maybe a short, blonde haired blue eyed Stephanie would be just the thing for him! LOL

Stephanie

Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie!

Thanks for the storylove! Glad you are enjoying the read. I think the story-within-a-story will be fun and different and I never even thought about how it would give readers an insight into what goes on with the writers of the fics, but several people have mentioned that. So I guess I will be sharing that experience a little. :)

I don't know how often Jacob will appear, but he won't be a jerk in this story, obviously.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

OMG! Bannerday~!  That was hilarious!  Looking forward to this new story of yours!

Liz

Author's Response:

Hi Liz!

It's lovely to see your face...er...reviews again! I hope you're going to enjoy this one. It's a little different. ;) Let me know what you think.

Thank you for the review.

-bannerday