Reviewer: wdmmom4 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Great update!! Keep them coming!!!
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I'm pulled in two dieections: Don't listen to Alice, Bella! and Run away from him Bella! Love this FF and looking forward to their dinner.
Reviewer: katlyn_eliz (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I always love seeing that this story has been updated. I wonder if Edward happened to see anything on Bella's laptop when she wasn't in the room. I bet this blackout dinner will be exciting, and I wonder if Edward will bring up the issue about the strawberry smell on his pillow. If so, I bet Bella will be glad for the limited amount of light, so he doesn't see her looking so guilty. This is my first time reviewing your story. Reading it has opened my eyes that I should put in a little time to show my appreciation, because you've spent so much of your time writing such an amazing, entertaining, and witty story. I can't wait till the next chapter, i'm sure the dinner conversation will be quite interesting to say the least. haha
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
So, Alice warned Bella about her womanizing brother... I think she was too late, there's already something there. And why do I think that Bella's bunny slippers will be seen by someone? LOL. And just what might happen at the candlelight dinner? Oh, and did Edward possibly read something on Bella's laptop while she was out of the classroom? I would definitely not put that past him... Could make for some interesting stuff in the future, since he's bound to have recognized himself and Bella in Ethan's and Stella's characters.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I love the collection of names Alice has for Edward's whoring ways & socialite skank-ho had me rolling! It's been a rough couple of weeks & I definitely needed the laugh!
Can't wait to see what else is in store for them & what Edward does w/ the tidbit of knowledge he gleened from reading Bella's laptop.
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Love this story! I LOL at many parts of it! Can't wait to see what happens at their candlelit dinner!
thanks for writing!
Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I loved this :D we can already see Edward is changing yaya hehe can't wait to read more :D x
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Excellent chapter!
I think Alice might be a tiny problem, should anything happen between Edward and Bella.
They're going to have dinner together....I can't wait to see how that will turn out!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Don't worry about the Eiffel Tower - just bring Edward, wine and candles - then leave!!!!
I am trying to guess which of your reviewers will make the connection - I'm guessing the new one. :)
Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
The Pixie's outted Dickward, oooh dear. And I wonder which of the Fawks High School staff are reading Bellybean's fanfic? Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I just love it! One of my favorite stories!
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
As always, another wonderful chapter!
The disagreement between Alice and Edward was interesting. As was Alice's talk with Bella. Lots to mull over, that's for sure.
I thought the last line was just perfect. Very excited about their impromptu dinner! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Loved the update. I wonder who Young at Heart is????
Story is shaping up not that it was bad just you know more and more stuff happening.
Look forward to the next installment.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Great Chapter! Okay so I loved the confusion, lol greatness in the making. Loved the Alice speech, I laughed so hard.
Blackouts.. greaaaaat... this should be interesting >:)
Yay for ending the chapter with a rhyme! :D
Reviewer: Justread (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
AHHH he read her fanfic... well at least I think he did. That was what she had on her computer last and when she walked back into her classroom he was looking at her computer...he read the story, about himself (he wouldn't know it was him unless he read more) but still...AHH I would be freaking out if I were Bella. And running, I would avoid him like the plague not invite him over for a candle light dinner and wine!!
Reviewer: stwin315 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
oh Bella what have you gotten yourself into hah
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
That was so much fun! Loved Alice and all her words to describe her brother. Looking forward to the next update. No reason to reply. Just write because I always know that it'll make my day and give me a good laugh!
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
love it! love the little last line poem! your stories make my heart happy.
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
i personally have never reviewed a story so much before(part of the reason my poor english writting skills).but you actually force us to do it with each chapter you write.Don`t get me wrong i enjoy your replies,but since my sister is a greek teacher and i know the work someone needs to do in order to start a new year,i agree a new chapter is much better than a reply.as for the chapter i rather enjoyed the cullens madness.when i came across the word vomit of alice to discribe edward i thought that is a gift you have(then i remembered the ear plugs and i thought maybe is a bit of an illness too).among all this you managed to close this chapter with a cliff.see you next time
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
GHAHHAHAHAH PLS update soon!! Im soo sorry I ve failed to read and review miserably but life picked up alittle for me!!! But pls Write some more!!! I dont know what my afternoons would be like with out fanfiction!!!!! :) lol Great Great job!!! Keep it up and cant wait to read some more!!!
Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
I think I just died from laughing! Good work!
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
hahaha...I've been reading and finally have to comment!...So funny he realized what he meant!
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I am really enjoying where this story is headed right now.
Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
love it
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
*GASP* EMMETT *GASP* and *GASP* Bella *GASP* is *GASP* too *GASP* much!!!!!!!!
That is just..... funnier than words!!!! I love it. You have rendered me speechless. Lol.
Loved it and Love you!!!!
Kate :D
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