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Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
I think I just died from laughing! Good work!
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
hahaha...I've been reading and finally have to comment!...So funny he realized what he meant!
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I am really enjoying where this story is headed right now.
Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
love it
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
*GASP* EMMETT *GASP* and *GASP* Bella *GASP* is *GASP* too *GASP* much!!!!!!!!
That is just..... funnier than words!!!! I love it. You have rendered me speechless. Lol.
Loved it and Love you!!!!
Kate :D
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
I will gladly leave the fic inside a fic inside a fic writing to you my dear Lady. I do love the fact that Bella is having a change of heart about Edward and vice versa with Edward. This chapter has appealed to my softer side, and if anyone asks you, you never saw anything. I will admit that I will have sprayed my self with Predatuer, but more thasn just my wrist. Lol!!!!!
Im so late on the review and its shameful. Life has been crazy. Ce La Vie!
Loved it and Love you!!!!!!!!!
Kate :D
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
squeeeeeee!!! OMG that was some funny stuff right there!!! I love love love it Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
OMG too funny, Edward thinking that the dildo belonged to Bella and that she was getting herself off on his bed - it had me in stitches. And now Alice knows him can't wait for more....lol :0) Nicole
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Like how you're introducing the rest of the characters. Curious about the relationship between Edward and the gang. Sad you're having to slow down your updates. I haven't been able to put down this story for two days and am already caught up. Eagerly awaiting more. More, please!!
Reviewer: kty_xii (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Ok so I know I am early on twilighted, but I just finished chapter 14 on ff. I am loving it. One problem I found was you refer to Alice as his sister before the reveal. But other than that soooooo PERFECT. I loved the closing line about the predator and wine. Instead of a tower can you send me my own sex god edward?
Thanks
Katy
Author's Response: Oh holy crap!! I proofread so many times! Thank you for pointing that out to me. I went back and fixed it. sooooooooooo stupid! Glad you liked that last line. And I'm not sure I'm willing to part with Assward-Sex-God-Manslore just yet. and besides...I bought a dozen cases of Eiffel Towers...now what the hell am I going to do with them??? Maybe Alice can pass them out in class. as prizes.
Thanks for the review and for catching my fauxpas.
Thanks, bb!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
I have been reading this story on Fanfiction and I am so glad it's finally on here. Now I can leave you reviews. I love it!!! Very unique and hilarious to boot!!
Ok, I'll wait until you post the next chapter here and I'll give you a nice review!!!
Author's Response: Hi Snowball Sniper!
Are you not able to pots a review from ffn? I don't really mind where you read or post a review...just curious. lol Thanks for the note. Thanks for the storylove, too!
-bannerday
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Okay, this is a banner day for me...2 reviews in one day. I am a usual lurker, due to iPhone not letting me leave reviews. But I logged on to the laptop to let you know I LOVE this FF. I get all excited when I see an update b/c I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love your characters and the silly mess Bella got herself into. Keep the chapters coming 'cause I can't wait!
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Oh geez. Bella Bella Bella. What is he going to do with you? You know you're accident-prone, so why would you touch anything in his room. You know you deserve what's coming to you (who's coming to you).
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Wow! I've spent the last few hours- granted I was on facebook and other sites between chapters but still- reading this story and I'd have to say I LOVE it!
The Fic in a Fic is crazy. lol Kinda hard to keep up with sometimes, but great nonetheless!
I can't wait till Edward and Bella get together... that on its own should be interesting. lol As well as Rose & Em, Alice & Jazz.
Can't wait till Edward gets some answers on her creepin. lol though he doesn't assume the worst like some people.
All around hilarious and awesome story. I'm eager to read more! Till then, it's bed time... I'm going to be a zombie in the morning. lol
Update soon! :D
Reviewer: Chiquitaf16 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Jeeezus I so wished I wasn't chewing starburst when Bella hatted Edwards dick cause I just spent the last 5 mins trying not to choke on spit, lmao that was great.
Reviewer: kty_xii (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
I love the entrance of edward at the end. Very unexpected! I am so earger to see how this pans out. I was curious is this story as close to home for you as Stella's is to Bella?
Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
update soon cuz i'll freak out if u don't.
Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
Thank u thank u for updating love it love it. i'm so addicted to this stoy
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
"But the thought that someone…a girl he barely knew…had been here in his bed, unbeknownst to him until this moment, completely shocked the hell out of him and left him rattled" Why? This has never been a issue for him before (sorry had to get my dig in at his womanizing ways).
How like a man to find a strange sex toy in his bedside table, and then have to compare himself to it before doing anything else! I laughed out loud at that!
OMG the nipple clamp story is the best! Where do you come up with this stuff?
Emmett and Edward make the best detectives! Smelling the other pillow, checking for stray hairs in the bed! Never fear E and E are on the case!
Looking forward to seeing where this goes now that Alice, Rose, and Jazz are in the picture. BTW I really hope to see a French speaking Jazz...although that might just do me in!
CM
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Outstanding, yet again! I'm guessing that the second review Bella read is from Emmett? LMFAO...hope I'm right! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
ok i do not know whether i am imangining things but i have the idea that after our winning about the heavy chapters ,the bella chapter,the fiction chapter...you decided to get us back with an king (dong),mega(meat) chapter,LOL.Idon`t think i will try to tell you all the things i liked in the chapter because i will end up with a review as big as it.i will just mention the nipple clamps/earplugs because it would be sin not to and another thing i personnally found hillarious,emmet.he started the chapter as the evil mastermind behind the huge vibrator,he continued as the little devil on edwards shoulder speaking of another man in his bed or worse another man pubic hair and he ends up like this ( poor little swan upset with nobody to turn to )or (maybe she just needs a friend).the change of emmet from an evil jerk to a sensitive person was a work of art.(is your emmet on drugs?just asking)anyway so far this was my favorite chapter and ican`t wait to see what will you paint next time
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2011 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Edward and Emmett crack me up :) Emmett and his Frankendick lol. When Alice introduced herself to Jasper, all I could think of is "My first name is Alice, Ms. Brandon if you're nasty" (I hope you get that reference). Edward always has to stick his dick in other people's business lmao. Can't wait for the next chapter!
FYI: I voted for you for your Tomato Soup Awards :) Hope you win one!
Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Ok the Cockzilla debucle, funny! Although I did have to take a minute or two to wipe down the computer screen; snotted Stawberry and Vanilla ice cream all overthe frickin' thing. Thanks for a great chapter, glad we've met the rest of the gang now. I was wondering when they'd come around.
Reviewer: Justread (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
GOOD! Once alice and the gang get to know her, they can vouch that she's not pyscho-stalker crazy. Its really funny that he wakes up hugging the pillow, and that dream he can't remember, could it possibly be the beach dream? You know the one bells has when she realizes what edward is? Just a guess. Either way, great chapter, I await your next.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
LOVIN' IT!
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