SWEET!

I loved this chapter! They had a wonderful evening....I just hope it finishes that way after this talk about Jake.

I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Still laughing at Em's meat packing industry comment!

OMG can I just say I being a dork myself I love dork Bella! LOVE HER! 

oh my god,she is so busted(or not).i really hope that edward is going to grap her because i have became familiar with the twisted way your mind works and i am afraid that you will have her to grap precious edwards dick and cause harm(don`t forget she has already damaged his candle).so ican`t wait for the next chapter to see whether edward saved her or she ended up with head trama or worse caused  trama.i don`t think you will be so cruel after all we want edward to trust her with his sensitive areas.

Bannerday,

As usual another amazing chapter! Edward may be an asshat but he would never let his Bella get injured so I say she is in his arms. 

I love Alice btw. She is so fun.

thanks again can't wait for the next update.

:)

kty_xii

wOW..WOMAN!!!  I have to say, with all honestly in my heart....you absolutely deserve the "I"ll Drop Anything to Read This Story" award.   I could be running out for an appointment, and see that you've updated, and screw the appointment....GAH!   You know how I adore your inner dialogue.    Can't get enough of it.   I don't care if it's Edward's,  Bella's or that damn Keychain!   It's always brilliantly done.   This chapter is no exception.   I loved how Edward was thinking to himself so many crazy thoughts when he got to the school....how he was most definitely JEALOUS over The Dorkman....LOL!   Love how he still thinks of Big Burly, er Jake...Hahaha.   I love how Edward is slowly, but most definitely, in to a more gentler, kinder guy.   Even Alice is seeing something, and you know, if Alice sees something, it's going to happen.   Wahoooo!    I guess you answered my question from last chapter, and it was Jake that Edward was going to talk to Bella about when they were in the classroom.    I hope he gets to talk to her now, that they are in her house having dinner.      LOL!!  Poor Bella!   Will she ever get over her little snooping incident? Her inner voice was killing me...hahahaha...rolling on floor.    She needs a little TLC....and I think Edward is ithe one to fit the bill.   Now....what do I think is going to be happening when she opens her eyes...well...first of all..I think that she may think she's awake, but she might be dreaming...and Edward is wearing a little baret, and speaking with a French accent, and then the rest of the silverware, and Edward's keychain is dancing around like Beauty and the Beast...ooohh or maybe Edward is the Beast or Jake is the Beast, and Edward beats the beast, and then WHAM...Bella wakes up on the couch....LOL!   OK...so that's a little insane, but you know me.   I think she'll wake up on the couch, with Edward giving her a little TLC...a cloth on her head, because she passed out for a second.   They both feel the pull, maybe move in a little closer...and WHAM...the lights come on!!  Yeah...lol...it could happen.   LOVE THIS DAMN STORY!!!!

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she fainted in his arms right before the candlelight dinner ;) finally those two r gettin somewhere :) but as far as i know you it will take some time and more 'obstacles' until they r together.

I love that Alice is finally here. Next to EB she is my favorite, although I m pretty partial to Emmet as well.

Does he really not know that she is responsible for that dent in the candle?? I mean he knows about her being in his bed.

He saw the fanfiction side.... thats bound to get interesting.. he only needs to find out her penname now and then he can start reading :P

Anyway, loved every part of the new chapter. R u still working on the sequilogue for the Transfer?

Take care, bb hope alls good :) Did u get my fb post?

btw, did u see SWATH Kristen :) I loved it!

Until next time

Edward wouldn't let her fall :) And you know nothing says loving like something from the oven lol. Can I spend a power outage with nothing but Edward and candles?

I really like this premise but I do hope you begin writing more in the 1st person, as you were earlier. I know it takes longer but it's so much more interesting than exposition.  So sorry to be critical,  I really do like the plot line. thanks.

Of course she's in his arms! The question is- will she confess? 

And when will Edward discover her story on fan fic?

Oh my god!!! I'm still laughing my ass off!! :) hilarious omg! Hahahahaahhahah

After reading this chapter I feel the urge to call you a tease.  While I love hearing Edwards inner thoughts, I was really looking forward to reading the dinner scene play oout.  Oh well, something to look forward to.  As always, you have me at teh edge of my seat anxiously awaiting your next chapter.