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Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2012 10:37 AM · On: At Last
This was fantastically well written. I apologize for not reviewing every single chapter. In my defense, I read it on my phone after my son and husband fall asleep (usually the only time I ever get to read anything) and typing reviews makes a lot of noise that eould disturb them an end my entirely selfish reading time. I look forward to reading more of your work. I'll have to check out some of the recs you've made in your AN's as well. Thank you!
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2012 07:25 PM · On: Taboo
Yeah, I'm amazed that never gets mentioned in the books or way too many fics within this timeline. Very good read thus far but this chapter I had to comment on. Forgive me for not reviewing each chapter.
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 01:22 PM · On: A Laurel Wreath
I sooooooooo luv Emmett!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lurecyka (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 05:37 PM · On: At Last
I just wanted to tell you that your story was really well written and I had a great pleasure to read it:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 06:57 AM · On: A boring afternoon
Lovely n hilarious as always:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Pull my hair, and spank me
Wow I loved edward in this chp. ..its nice to see him let go of his tightly wound self...mentioning again that I laugh a lot while reading this fiction...absolutely enjoying it...its a good thing that u haven't gone over the top with the erotic stuff...ur story has the perfect balance:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:48 AM · On: Pull my hair, and spank me
Wow I loved edward in this chp. ..its nice to see him let go of his tightly wound self...mentioning again that I laugh a lot while reading this fiction...absolutely enjoying it...its a good thing that u haven't gone over the top with the erotic stuff...ur story has the perfect balance:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:46 AM · On: Pull my hair, and spank me
Wow I loved edward in this chp. ..its nice to see him let go of his tightly wound self...mentioning again that I laugh a lot while reading this fiction...absolutely enjoying it...its a good thing that u haven't gone over the top with the erotic stuff...ur story has the perfect balance:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Dinner, for two
The best thing abt ur story is that it's devilish funny...despite the intense storyline u manage to put in hilarious punches...I'm guffawing all thru..well the story doesn't exactly lead to breaking dawn coz they hv obviously crossed the lines but it's d humor that has kept me stuck to ur story:)
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Alice's Gift
Wow awesum chp...initially the chp was freaking hilarious...it was so Alice...amazing...it must have been so embarrassing for bella but Alice will b Alice...I really enjoyed the chp...Bella dint switch on the vibrator... Lol...n that's actually plausible...I'm loving ur story...can't wait to read wat Edward had been up to
Reviewer: crazytwihard (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Mind Over Matter
Nice beginning...uve written it very well n it is one of the best periods of twilight to write about..I'm really excited to c how ur story progesses...I wud love it more if it remained canon so let's c how uve gone ahead with the story
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2011 09:21 PM · On: At Last
Beautiful...just beautiful.
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 01:51 AM · On: At Last
I was just about to congratulate you, once again, on a brilliantly well done story, then i got distracted in your AN by my name... again! Thankyou for the kudos... i am pretty proud of my little story... as you should be of yours. I still can't believe how awesome it is, made even more so by the fact that it was your first! That just prooves you have oooooooodles of natural talent, bb. xoxox
Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 11:46 PM · On: The Longest Day
Aww SP, I had forgotten all about that sweet little treat you left me in this chapter... it was equally as beautiful to find out about it all over again as it was to read it. Thankyou... and i should thank Mae and Cal as well.
I loved the photo shoot, the idea of Bella in E's tux, touching herself was even turning me on... E's gonna love it! ... and i have to say, i MUCH preferred your little Jacob wedding visit to SM's version in BD... a brief, sweet little encounter between friends, not more Drama.
So Again, i thank you, and i declare my undying love for your writing.
Bring on the honeymoon!!
Oh, PS, I noticed the 'Dominant' reference as i read it. :)
xoxox Bec
Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 03:25 PM · On: Taboo
Hmmmm, you hemmed around it, but you didn't actually show us anything taboo honey! I would LOVE to see this chapter fleshed out to its rightful conclusion. It's not my kind of fetish either, but he IS a Vampire, and it IS blood. Please Don't spare us the gory details. lol. xoxox Bec :)
Author's Response: i fleshed it out a scoosh more graphically as a standalone one-shot called 'cullenlingus'...... heh! enjoy!
Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Worth a thousand words
Aaahh, i love that photo shoot. I'm surprised at how much of this fic i remember, considering the hundreds of different fics i have read over the years... this one has really stuck with me, and i'm thrilled to have found it again. Thanks SP. :) xoxox
Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Dinner, for two
A thick steak, and clams in lemon butter... LOL, God I love your writing SP. :) Rereading this for fun, while i wait for you to update Aro's Heir. Let me know if i can help you with anything to get the next chapter up, K? xoxox Bec
Reviewer: guardedwithanangel (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 12:03 AM · On: At Last
Amazing. You're such a good writer. :) I've enjoyed this entire story. I'm sad to see it end. But that's entirely to be expected. I'm glad you let it end like this, in the right place, instead of trying to drag it on and on and end up beating the poor story to deat like some authors do, you know? Anyway my point is, not you. :) So thank you for that. I seriously enjoy a good, natural ending. Mature. Mature like, I know it's hard to let your pet/baby/project go, because you've been working on for so long it's like a part of your life that you hate to see end. But it's not dying, it's moving on. You let it go peacefully. Which is the same reason I'm not sad to see it ending.
You know, aside from the obvious ending to the latest outlet for my sexy Edward addiction! ;) ;) ;)
Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 08:55 PM · On: At Last
okay you cant leave us hanging here!
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Taboo
i have heard of people doing that but i cant imagine ever doing it. i feel bad enough during that time that i dont wanna be touched. BUT, i hear it relieves the cramps,lol. wtg for going there. not many ppl would have
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Not the Same
im thinkin i need a freezing shower after that. damn ur good
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 08:09 PM · On: I am a stronger man than I knew
all i can say is wow,wow,wow!!!THANK YOU !!! for that vision that is now stuck in my head of edward
Reviewer: Sally-Anna (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2010 05:23 AM · On: At Last
Ive just spent the last two days reading MOM, I couldnt stop reading it. Sorry I didnt review each chapter I was just to eager to get to the next one. The relationship you created between E&B was amazing, it was emotional, tender, passionate, lustful and lemony. Thank you
Reviewer: Jiggle (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Mind Over Matter
Reviewer: RiceReader (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:21 PM · On: At Last
I enjoyed this story a lot. This chapter was good as they finally gave into their desires. I was wondering if your Bella would get pregnant, but she must to keep it cannon.
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