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Reviewer: hogsoccer (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
this is a very good and extremly unique. why do u have it as completed? i think u should write more.
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
oooo more to come?? this was gd!
Reviewer: Lique (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
I have no idea what happened in that last bit. Was Carlisle actually kissing her lips? Was he trying to bite her? If not, what does he mean by "see you soon."?
Reviewer: Tblack (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
Ahhh, this is excellent! Your writing is really good. I can feel the sadness and emotions Bella is feeling. It will be great if you will continue to write this story! :)
Reviewer: SouthFloyd_AugustRose (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
i like it especiall because carlisle is my favorite character so i like it but would he really be that disloyal to esme hell who cares it's an alternate universe besides i like the ones with him in it.
Reviewer: SouthFloyd_AugustRose (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
i like it especiall because carlisle is my favorite character so i like it but would he really be that disloyal to esme hell who cares it's an alternate universe besides i like the ones with him in it.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2008 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very good! More please! I love how you've captured her state of mind!
Reviewer: gee3195 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Did he just kiss Bella on the lips?I can just picture that. But I think Edward would be better to be kissing her. Not Carlisle. lol
Reviewer: Rialle (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2008 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oooh, interesting plot line. This is original and intriguing, well done.
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