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Reviewer: sage17 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
Oh, I just read your update that it is also posted on ff.net... going there now! I can't wait to read more!! THANKS!
Reviewer: sage17 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Please update soon! :) You are such a great writer and I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: sage17 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
new chapter please! :)
Reviewer: robda (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
love your story please add more chapters 24 was awesome cant wait for chapter 25
Author's Response: LOL!
25 will be up soon! :)
xoxo
Reviewer: pppdddooo (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
love it!
Reviewer: Amber20 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Proposition
I love the story line, its different! Please keep writing!
Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Lovin it!
Reviewer: katlyn_eliz (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
AHH i absolutely love this story. The way Edward kissed Bella was damn good, I like how he started at her cheek and worked his way over. haha I wish Bella wouldn't have to be so uptight and guarded around him, but hopefully that will change over time. I can't wait till her parents get there, so the acting can really begin. I'll be looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: GG999 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
I'm loving this story-so cute!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
I was greedy for more after one of the previous chapters that mentioned this story was also posted on ff.net; now I am languishing at the last posted chapter on ff.net... Must have more for sustenance *gasp* :P
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Well, that was interesting! Can't wait to hear what edward is thinking!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
just thinking of all the praticing they could do ....she send him on his way is she nuts ...he needs to add a few of personal things of his own to make this believeable a shirt book extra pair of glasses body wash in her shower a robe maybe oh come on i am just trying to help her out her something with his sent spray her pillow with his cologne
Reviewer: anntje (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Great story! Can not wait 'till next update. Keep writing! :-)
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 6 - The Practice
Oh yes, I'd practice with Edward anytime as well! Yum! I think these two are in way too deep. It will be very interesting to see what happens when it's "showtime". And what happens after that - I can't imagine they'll stop after that.
Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
I can't wait for her parents to show up then the acting begins :)
Reviewer: princesascullen (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
I can't wait for her parents to show up then the acting begins :)
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
you left it there!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Oh, I think we know who has the advantage here, even if he doesn't know it!
Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
>:)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
OMG OMG OMG OMG SQUEEEEE
TEASE TEASE TEASE!!!
Oh Mistress how I love your sweet sweet torture!!! With a name like mistress I expected Bella to be a little more naughty then refined a little more lose then closed lip and little more demanding then feeble heheheh aggghhhh I love love love it!!
I am so excited to see Alice is in on Bellas little manipulation and I can't wait to see Bellas plans go south or Edward go south or well bed room foreplay a foot hahahah Post again soon can't wait can't wait aggghhhh!!!!!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Hahaha.... they both want this more than they'll admit.
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Oh yes, I think they're both screwed, LOL! Things like these always backfire, so I don't think it will be long before they actually want to be together. It will be interesting to see what Bella's parents think of Edward. What if they love him? Then she's in even more of a pickle... Yes, she's screwed.
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Thanks for providing Bella POV it is a very interesting perspective. Looking forward to reading more :0)
Reviewer: sage17 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
Awesome! Keep the chapters coming... soon! Great job! I love this storyline so far.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 - The Ploy
they better pratice real hard cause if her mom is anything like minhe would see through it in a heart beat....... this is just too funny
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