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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 39 Not a Second Time

Travis was so brave!  Poor little guy,  I loved the ending.  I do have a question...why are they staying with Sam when the could stay with Sue?



Author's Response:

I believe to help Sam deal with his guilt at freezing Leah so she couldn't run toward the house sooner.  Plus, Sam's was closer to their own home . . . remember there is a path that connects the two through the woods.

Stay tuned . . . there's more!

Thanks for reading!  Kat

Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 38 Get Back

Doreen should have become wolf kibble. I hope the long arm of the law embraces her tightly

Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 37 Can't Buy Me Love

ERRR!! I know she just took him because she wants money!!! Loving the story, here, even though right now i want to see Leah dropkick that woman.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 38 Get Back

Where is our boy?!?  He must be in the woods?  I hope they find him soon.  What's the deal on the $100,000?  Why would Doreen want to burn the house down?  I hope the bitch goes to Jail for the rest of her life!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 37 Can't Buy Me Love

OMG that bitch!   Evil cliffy!!!  You have to update....like now!!!!

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 37 Can't Buy Me Love

I just knew she was going to do something.

Reviewer: hayleyann15 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 36

write more!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 36

I loved it! :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 35 Two of Us

It was so perfect!  I can't wait for the Honeymoon!  I'm so glad Jim came, am I'm thilled Doreen  didn't show up!

Reviewer: Jasperholic (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Night Before

These updates have been so great. I know I wasn't a fan of the baby thing at first but of course YOU WERE RIGHT and Noah is a perfect addition to the story and to Leah and Paul's growth. This story is really one of my all time favorites. Well done!

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Night Before

Now, please don't let Doreen show up to the wedding.

Reviewer: hayleyann15 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 34 The Night Before

Write more!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 34 The Night Before

So fun!  Jake was a hoot!  Sooooo, maybe Jake will get a HEA with Bella?  That would be great!

I can't wait for the Wedding and Honeymoon!  Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 33 In My LIfe

I love this chapter!  It was just a huge warm fuzzy!  I want more, I kind of enjoy the smile I get when I read this story!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: hayleyann15 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 33 In My LIfe

Write more!!

Reviewer: hayleyann15 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 32 I Me Mine

Write more:)

Author's Response:

It is already written!  I pass each chapter through my wonderful beta, tima83, and as soon as she approves it, it is posted.  She's pretty quick, so I will keep updating as fast as I can, I promise!

Reviewer: Sevelyn (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 31 Getting Better

I would first off like to say what an amazing author you are. Secondly I would like to thank you for writing this story, I just spent all afternoon reading it and after mulitple laughs and crying bouts I am finally done.

I don't usually cry reading, expecially online. This is an amazing story and you should be proud not only of your writing skills but the fact that you finished it so wonderfully. I loved it and can't wait for anymore stories. You are offically my favourite author on this site.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

First of all, thank you so much for your kind words!!  But, I have to tell you, the story is not finished yet!!  There is more!  Keep watching for more updates.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 31 Getting Better

Soooo, your story has other changes?  Edward and Bella never had Ness so Jake doesn't imprint on her?  Man I hope he has a HEA or will that all come later?  or wont it play a role in this story?

Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Just a minor mention in this story.  Jacob NEVER imprints on the weired vamp baby in any of my stories.  I believe it was Stephanie Meyer's worst mistake. 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 30 Come Together

Oh lord, I can't believe Sam did that!  I'm so glad Emily didn't see or hear anything....I'm glad Leah will finish her studies under Carlisle.

Damn Paul and Leah are hot! lol  I wonder if the guy's heard and thats the real reason they left? lol

I can't wait for more!  Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 29 When I Get Home

What?!?!  Damn cliffy's! lol Please update like now!!!! lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 28 And I Love Her

Thank God the sexual tension was killing me!  I'm so happy for them,  But what about the imprint and Rachel?  I can't wait until Paul brings Leah and Noah home and everyone get's to meet the little guy!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 This Boy

I loved this chapter.  I'm so happy Paul got to meet his son.  I'm so glad these two are getting their shit together!  I can't wait for the boys to meet Noah!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 26 Do You Want to Know a Secret?

OMG I'm so excited for Leah to open the door and see Paul!!!!

Reviewer: daminilo (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 This Boy

Two updates in one day! So glad you updated!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 25 Little Child

OMFG!  How could Leah not tell Paul about the baby?  Please, please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

I love this story, I'm totally vested in Paul, Leah, Tyler, Travis and now Noah!

Take care, Dixie

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