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Reviews For Total Frat Move

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Prologue

I see you know ASU well, interested to see where this will go.

Reviewer: Interested (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 04:30 AM · On: Prologue

hmm, i thought the character was going to be Bella :) interesting!

Reviewer: SaeVandy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Prologue

Frat-tastic! Can't wait to see where your story goes!

Reviewer: McQueen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 03:34 PM · On: Prologue

No need to be rude. 8:)

Reviewer: McQueen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Prologue

Someone's been reading totalfratmove.com. Just be careful of the brands you use. A&F =TGdiM. Other than that, I'm intrigued.

Author's Response:
alice isn't in a sorority is she? thanks for your concern.

Reviewer: McQueen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Prologue

Someone's been reading totalfratmove.com. Just be careful of the brands you use. A&F =TGdiM. Other than that, I'm intrigued.

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Prologue

I am most definitely intrigued by this story. I love TFM.com--great source of entertainment and insight into the male Greek mind.

I'm not Greek myself, but I have friends that are, and it's a great way to pick on them every now and again. Nothing malicious, just all in good fun.

Will there be a different TFM post at the top for each chapter? Or will it be more like a relevance kind of thing?

So interested!

Author's Response:
thanks! yep! there will be a new TFM post each chapter! i'll load the second now. or you can find me on ff.net as i'll update that one first :)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 12:14 PM · On: Prologue

i love the sounds of your blurb and the start to the story...i have to say i like the sounds of bad ass regular guy edward...i always hate that when he meets bella he turns into a chick or even already acted girly....i mean most guys act like that and he acts in most stories like too respectful and in love on the first date...i mean fine for the vampire from the olden days...not so much for modern times...i like the possibilties of where this story can go....hoping bella is cool too!

Author's Response:
right!? there will be no pansy edward, haha. or pansy bella for that matter..

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