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Reviewer: Sunshine72 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
I liked it! Thanks for the story. I just was going through my favorite stories and found this one completed (awhile ago) and reread it. It was great. Thanks!
Reviewer: stephtwilight (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2011 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 9
Beautiful!! A beautiful story that is beautifully written! Absolutely loved it!! <3
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <3
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
I thought it was a wonderful love story and you should never get tired kissing the one you love. You have a wonderful way of telling a story and I hope to read more of yours. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Lilly
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate your support and I hope to have a new story out very soon!
Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 9
Cute story. They should all have happy endings.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
great ending
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
Glad that you didn't totally abandon Jake :-)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
im glad that the yare getting their happy ending!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 7
well im glad that he pulled his head out of his ass but in the end i wish she made him work for it
Author's Response: I actually considered that but, as I said, this was originally a one shot so I tried to make things go faster. Making her hold a grudge would have dragged out the story much longer than it needs to be. j
Thanks for reading:)
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
god he is such a ducheward! i hope she can just forget him at the curb ! keep the updates comming
Reviewer: ITRomantic (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great Chapter - thanks for the update. Looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: ITRomantic (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great Chapter - thanks for the update. Looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: ITRomantic (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great Chapter - thanks for the update. Looking forward to next chapter.
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
love it!!!!!! update SOON!!!!!
Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 6
Love it! More soon please!!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
I am really getting wrapped up in this story! can't wait til the next chapter!
Reviewer: ITRomantic (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
Really enjoying this story. Great writing and great story - very intense. thank you.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh I hope she tells him to alone now and going to be a free women. I think she should get all dolled up go to a bar with the girls and let Edward see her and then watch the sparks fly. Great story keep writing.
Lilly
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 5
well im glad that shes leaving him and im excited to see what happens when she gets better i hope that edward realizes what a ducheward he is !
Reviewer: hoppyliz (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
I don't know what to say yet, so I'm not going to lose many words here, but I will be following this story to see how it develops.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
I feel so sorry for Bella no one should be treated like that beating someone is not an option. Bella has lost a lot in her young life and needs someone to take care and love her for the wonderfulo person she is. I think I will follow you in this journey so till next time.
Lilly
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 4
very good.
Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
Please, oh please, update this ASAP!!! My heart is thumping, I'm breathing really heavily, and....well, you get the picture, right? PUHLEEZE!
Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
great story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm very glad that you decided to expand on your initial one-shot. I like what I am reading so far. Please update soon - can't wait to find out what happens to Bella and Edward - not so fond of Jacob.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story so far! And I update each time a chapter is validated. The next one should be up within the next few days!
Thanks again!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
im excited to see where this goes
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I hope you like the rest! :)
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