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Reviews For Nude Moon
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:13 PM · On: "You've become my muse."

more? please?

Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 05:27 AM · On: "You've become my muse."

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!  Great story

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2011 11:35 AM · On: "You've become my muse."

Great update I know all about RL and struggling to put thoughts to paper but I love your story and hope they gain many updates and longer chaps ;)  <3



Author's Response:

Thank you. Unfortunatly, the chaps are going to remain short. I had planned on trying to do short chaps but quicker updates, sadly RL is in the way right now. Hope to get back on track soon.

Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 08:47 AM · On: "You've become my muse."

Another fantastic chapter. Loved it. I can't wait to see what happens!
~Jess



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm hoping to have the next chapter out soon.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 11:30 AM · On: "You've become my muse."

Hey i loved this chap it was great i am glad you left us with more unanswered questions !



Author's Response:

Thank you and your welcome. Some of those questions will be answered next chapter. Even I can't wait.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 04:42 AM · On: "You've become my muse."

Well, that answered a couple of questions...but GAH....need more....LOL!   So glad to see you writing again.   It gets hard sometimes when you're writing and everyday life gets in the way.   You have a wonderful story here, and it appears that Edward is writing again...so there you go!   You've inspired your character to write too...lol.   Can't wait for more.   Not sure why Bella went running into the night.    Love to see another update soon.   Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you. The next POV is Bella's so we should learn abit about what is going through her head. ^_^

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 09:48 PM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

Hey wow i didnt expect anything thing like that but i am glad you put a kind of twist in !



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love writing twists. ^_^

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 02:41 AM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

I like it :). Can' t wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response:

^_^ thank you.

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 06:59 PM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

story sounds great, what sucks is your chapters are so short.



Author's Response:

They are short because I was trying something new, write-post-write-post...these last 2 weeks it got messed up because I was away but now I'm going to get back on track. ^_^ thank you.

Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 06:27 PM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

WHAT?! No, no, no! This was way too good to leave us all hanging right THERE!! What is his QUESTION?! Oh my! I'm holding my breath here!
~Jess



Author's Response:

o.0 don't hold it too long, you'll pass out. I've been away but I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 03:20 PM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

oh shit oh shit oh oh oh!!!  Look forward to more post again soon!!!!



Author's Response:

^_^ thank you.

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 01:47 PM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!!!!!!! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!! MORE ASAP AS IN TOMORROW!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, I've been away for 2 weeks but hopefully the next chapter will be validated soon since its already done.

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 11:55 AM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

I like it :). Can' t wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response:

Thank you. ^_^

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 10:14 AM · On: "Bella, can I ask you a question?"

I have to say....at least Bella seems to have a conscience and a soul...lol.   She has certain lines that she doesn't want to cross, including having a one night stand with her favorite author, which author seems to have lost the love of his life in a horrific crash.    It appears that Edward has a question for Bella and I'm not sure what it could be.     Probably something about love, or why she was in the bar that night.      Emmett and Jasper think he is ready to move on, so I hope he really is.   It would be a shame if he never loved again.    He seems so sweet and I hope she doesn't say or do something that she will regret and will destroy any change of love.   Love the story and can't wait to read more.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. So many questions for me, sheesh. Soon all will be revealed. ^_-

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 08:53 AM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

Hey i loved this chap and it was great that it was in EPOV ! i loved that bella seemed so happy at being called me lady !!!



Author's Response:

^_^ thank you. Its definitely a shock when your treated like a lady.

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 12:11 AM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

seems interesting so far. looking forward to what happens next..:)

Author's Response:

Thank you. Hopefully the next chapter will be validated soon.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 05:18 PM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

Well...your Bella seems a little more than excited about spending more time with  Edward...and I'm not sure she isn't falling for him.    He is so sweet, and such a gentleman, holding her door, telling her that her chariot awaits...gah.   I loved it.   Of course Emmett and Jasper would be giving him the thumbs up to go get his grove on.   Go Edward..Go Edward...Go Go Go Edward.   I'm happy for Bella too, but she is the game player in this situation.   Edward wants to get to know her a little better...and thennnn sex.   Great read.   Can't wait for more.   Love it!



Author's Response:

^_^ thank you. Talking then sex...are you sure ^_-

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 02:57 PM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

Oh i love Edward and I hope Bella will fall for him and not just take him for a ride. Can't wait for next chapter write faster.

Lilly



Author's Response:

Write faster, thats the idea. All of my stories are Edward/Bella HEA so you should have some idea of how it will end up. ^_^

Reviewer: JessiCullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 02:50 PM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

More surprises?! Can't wait!
~Jessi



Author's Response:

Thank you, next chapter is waiting to be validated now.

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 02:10 PM · On: "Not too slow, I hope."

wayy tooo short!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry its short, I'm trying something new hoping to get chapters done sooner and out faster

Reviewer: faeking (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 08:10 PM · On: "What can I get for you?"

I'm intrigued, more please :D 



Author's Response:

Thank you, there will be more as soon as its validated. ^_^

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 05:51 AM · On: "What can I get for you?"

can't wait to read more update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm updating right now, cross your fingers that chapter 3 is validated soon. ^_-

Reviewer: eldertree (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 04:17 AM · On: "What can I get for you?"

Please continue! What'll bad Bella do to poor Eddie?



Author's Response:

I'll be submitting chapter 3 today so hopefully it will be validated soon. Trust me, I'm continuing. ^_-

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 10:56 AM · On: "What can I get for you?"

hey i did enjoy this chap !!!!!! and i love that you put some mystery in there with the riley thing !!!



Author's Response:

LOL, thanks. I think Bella's 'game' is also a mystery to some extent. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 04:50 AM · On: "What can I get for you?"

We of course know that Edward is a good guy, but Bella seems hell bent on trying to take poor Edward down.   I know she said she doesn't want to play the game with him (yeah...the game...we'll get back to that) but she just wants to have sex with him.   Poor Edward.   He doesn't seem to be the sleep around kind of guy.   Emmett told Bella he hasn't been out for THREE years.   Bella seems to be such a bitch.   I hope I'm wrong.   OK...so now about this game.   Is it like what a lot of guys do?   Sleep around and then dump the girl.   In this case, she's the dumper, and tries to break the guys heart?   Wow...six years.  Time to move on.   Try to find true love or something, lol.    Great story.  Wish to see more!   Can't wait.



Author's Response:

LOL, it feels kind of weird writing a bitchy Bella. Your guess about the 'game' is close but that will be all I'm going to reveal, sorry. I'll be submitting chapter 3 today so hopefully soon it will be validated. Thank you.

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