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Reviews For A Family Secret
Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:50 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

CARLISLE.

have her go with carlisle! 



Author's Response: I'm getting to it!

Reviewer: siouxchef (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 09:54 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

Meeee yowwww!!!  Bella and emmett, yes please!!!

Author's Response: Not quite yet, but it's coming!

Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 09:04 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

It has to be Bella and "naughty" Carlisle.  But we need some serious Edward action too!!

Author's Response: Naughty Carlisle is coming soon! And we will see Eward again!

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2008 07:58 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

Emmett!!

Author's Response: Yes yes yes! Soon!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 05:40 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

I do have to say that I am a bit excited about the possibility of Jake and Bella.  I know it's a little weird with the whole imprint on Nessie thing, but still.  :)

Please keep posting...this story is a great distraction from getting my behavior therapy critique done! :)



Author's Response:

I really wanted to write Jake and Bella. So I'll make sure Ness has no problem with it.

Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:52 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

ooh we definitely need Daddy Carlisle next... or Doctor Carlisle... i mean she did complain she is a bit sore right? so she need to see a doctor.

and can we see Jacob & Rosalie going at it? doggie style maybe



Author's Response: I think the Jacob Rosalie dynamic would be amazing! This being a Bella story though, Bella would have to be there too. What do you think?

Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 11:59 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

This is great!



Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. By the way I'm a Big fan of your stories! IF you write more I'll write more!

Reviewer: alilove (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:56 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

i should take another shower..jiji...i wanna see bella with Rosalie

Author's Response:

Bella and Rosalie is a possibility. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:26 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

carlisle please!

Author's Response:

He's coming!

 

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:18 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

WOW!! TOTALLY HOt!!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:03 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

sexy as hell

jasper would so be my first

no wait emmett would be

no jasper then emmett yes thats right

ohhhh i want to ride a cowboy right now

and i like that you put the line save a horse ride a cowboy in there from the song save a horse ride a cowboy

update fast i want to know who dose what to bella next

come on partner fast

-you know you love me^-^

(like a puppy or a BFF or a sister of course)



Author's Response: Typing as fast as I can. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks!

Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 09:57 PM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.

Who should she have fun with next? How about Em? :-D



Author's Response:

Maybe Em will be next.

Reviewer: maturetwilighter (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2008 12:17 AM · On: What did Edward say?

I am anxious to see where you take this.... I would love to see Edward watch Bella and Rosalie together or Bella and Carlisle. Can't imagine Esme with anyone other than Carlisle though.

Author's Response: I like the idea of EXBXR, and I agree about Esme. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MrsPattisonheart (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 09:16 PM · On: What did Edward say?

the only thing that bothers me about this is that vampires don't need to stop having sex. As said in Breaking Dawn, they don't need sleep and they don't get tired. But otherwise, great story.

Author's Response: Yeah I thought about that, but they do have other things to do, so they would have to stop eventually. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:40 PM · On: What did Edward say?

nice sex with ALL cullens i would do any of the exsept esme and nessie

please write more

i am shocked that i am enjoying this

i am NOT a perv so dont even think it



Author's Response:

Hey I don't judge. But we are on the same page as far as Nessie and Esme go.  I just couldn't go there with Bella. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:49 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Awful and fun and awesome!! Yeah, gotta love it!! you have a wicked and dirty mind and I like that in a gal!!  I'd love to see Bella and Alice with Edward as an outside participant, since Bella and Alice are close anyway.......then she can take on Carlisle next!!!!!  Keep on writing, this is great!!!!!  

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:48 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Awful and fun and awesome!! Yeah, gotta love it!! you have a wicked and dirty mind and I like that in a gal!!  I'd love to see Bella and Alice with Edward as an outside participant, since Bella and Alice are close anyway.......then she can take on Carlisle next!!!!!  Keep on writing, this is great!!!!!  

Author's Response: Edward does have voyeuristic tendencies. So it owould make sense that he would want to watch Bella and Alice. Hmmm....

Reviewer: Miss Cullen 26 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 10:02 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

 

  It's bizarre and addicting! Keep the awsome job!



Author's Response:

Bizzare, yup that's me! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 09:07 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Okay, naughty, strange, taboo, some of the words that could apply to this story, also, amazing, very good, interesting.  Wow, you answered a review saying writing is how you get things out, keep them coming. About who's next, Bella and Emmet should be interesting....

Author's Response: Yeah this story has run the gammet of reactions. I'm excited (pun intended) about writing Emmett.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:07 AM · On: What did Edward say?

WOW!DIrty talking Edward is hot! SO had Edward been partaking in the sex prior to his marraige to Bella? Or had he been a virgin too?

Author's Response: I'll make it a point to cover those questions in the story. Thanks.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:03 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Holy Crap!!! Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2008 04:46 AM · On: What did Edward say?

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP.... LET IT BE BELLA AND JASPER up next!!!! 

I am so madly in love with Bella and Jasper fictions!!  The thoughts of what his emotional control can do whilst in the throes of passion... MMMMMM - nummy treats!!

Loving this idea, a little smutty way to play with my favorite vamps!



Author's Response: It's being validated now! Yea!

Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

I just read "Hollow's" review, and your response to it... and you could maybe have an EBA threesome... ??? I would LOVE that!

Phwoahh :) :)

Author's Response: The EBA has come up more than once. I'm definitely considering it. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 12:16 AM · On: What did Edward say?

Holy moley... there's just so many possibilities! It could be ANYTHING next, couldn't it?  I mean, anyONE not anyTHING lol. Whoa... Rose and Bella, or Jasper and Rose, or Bella and Alice, or Alice and Edward.. oh god. It's like the most wonderful mix and match ever imaginable!

Author's Response:

So, this is basically a Bella story, but I might have to do a spin-off.  I'd love to see Edward and Rose go at it!

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 11:57 PM · On: What did Edward say?

"Who would you like to see next?"

Oooh you're taking suggestions...well I'm on board w/ the JasperxBella crowd.  Ooh!  Or Edward and Bella could gang up on Rosalie...get her back for being so snarky at first. 

Hm.  I appear to have sprouted a pair of devil horns.  This is your doing.  ;)



Author's Response: I like the way you think! I could so see E and B punishing Rose, but in a fun way. Maybe... ooh...they could borrow Carlisle's toys!

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