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Reviewer: spazeen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
Ahhh amazing! I'm very much Team Edward, and the fact that Bella is Jacob's mother-in-law made it a little bit weird for me... the "fighting" scene between Nessie and Bella over Jacob made that even more real, too... But you're so good at this that I still can't say anything bad! This may not have been my favorite pairing, but I am suuuuper excited for more!
Author's Response: I'm so Team Switzerland. I wanted her to have both. At the same time. I know I need help :-/ I'm such a perv.
Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 12:55 PM · On: Sand and Surf
you should do one in edward's pov with alice i think. :)
Author's Response: Unless I write a Bella/ Edward/ Alice threesome, Edward and Alice are going to have to wait for a sequel.
Reviewer: playfulvixen (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 08:17 AM · On: Sand and Surf
Wow was that hot! Please do Carlisle next :) That just sounds like fun! Thanks for the great writing
Author's Response: Carlisle will be alot for Bella to handle. I still need to warm her up a bit more.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 06:53 AM · On: Sand and Surf
I think that we need a Edward POV with Alice :D please, please????
Author's Response: I really want this to be a Bella story, but everyone wants to see the others. Gah! I'm going to have to write a sequel.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 06:36 AM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
Well I have friends that are swingers, I myself....the prude/closet whore cant do it. Damn my conscious.....
This is too hot for work, but I cant seem to stop myself. Someone please smoke a cig for me, I quit 3 years ago and I want one now more than I have in sometime. Pheeeeeew its hot in my office. :D
Author's Response: I personally don't know any swingers, but it would be interesting to get an opinion about the story from someone who was. And as far as the cig goes, Iv'e got you covered 'cause I go through several as I write each chapter. I have to picture this stuff in my head!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 06:28 AM · On: The bigger your buckle, the better.
“Well, Tex, why don’t you show me just how big,” Hhahaa I loved that!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 06:00 AM · On: What did Edward say?
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD THAT WAS HOT SHIT!
WOW......its really hot in here!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:36 PM · On: Sand and Surf
I agree that I may need a cigarette... you never cease to amaze. Thank you. write more!
Author's Response: You can bum one from me. Thanks!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Sand and Surf
I've decided to start smoking... just because after your stories I need a cigarette. Or maybe a stiff drink. DANG. Phew. Post more =]
Author's Response: I love bringing people over to the dark side. *evil laughs* Have a double shot of Patron on me!
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 08:53 PM · On: Sand and Surf
Ahhhh. The howl. Gets me every single time I read it. *Laughs* You're awesome.
Author's Response: I'm only awesome 'cause you are!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 08:51 PM · On: Sand and Surf
This story is hot and I enjoy it, except for the parts where girls on girls is mentioned- i cringe when i read those, probably because i am an extreme straight person or something (not that i don't like people who feel differently.) But I am going to have to get used to those, I think.
Good job!
Author's Response: The will be plenty of warning in the chapter notes before the girlXgirl scene so anyone who want to skip it can. Thanks!
Reviewer: LaurenCullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 07:53 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
Hot hot hot....love the " i have to do it this way" bit. Ok, I am officially begging for Bella/Emmett! Throw in who ever you want too, but please give my dirty talking sexy hunk of a man some face time!!!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 06:56 PM · On: Sand and Surf
“You’re a wolf, how else would you want it?” OME, that was the best part! :) Thanks for helping we Team Switzerlanders get some action...since E/B/J might just be a little too much for everyone. :) UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: I really wanna do a E/B/J, but I'm not so sure if people would be into it. Although you are not the first to mention it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kia (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 06:25 PM · On: Sand and Surf
hehehe, she is such a mrs robinson, lol. That was interesting, a bit strange that he kept calling her momma, but still hot. Hmm, you should write other couples as well, maybe some of Edward's experiences? I don't know why, but I really want to see some Jake and Rosalie action. I mean, they hate each other, but there could be a scene of them having wild passionate angry sex. Or something along the lines of her controlling him...
Anyway keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I think a sequel might be in the cards, just so I can write Jacob /Rosalie.
Reviewer: bloodlust72 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 05:32 PM · On: Sand and Surf
I really like this story...it is well written and the sex scenes are HOT!! I have to admit that I have a problem with the Bella, Jake, Nessie twist. I am trying to figure out why and all I can come up with is that I just can't get over Jake is screwing his wife's mother....ewwww. I guess if Nessie didn't exist I wouldn't think twice about it...lol. Anywhoo, i still love it and still read it....keep it coming! =)
Author's Response: I thought some people might be squeamish about the mother in law thing , but I had to give Team Jacob fans a release!
Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 05:30 PM · On: Sand and Surf
Wow! how the hell did I miss this little jewel?! Awesome! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 01:46 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
This is quite an interesting story line, I really like it. I love how bella new alice would go to Edward first. OHHHH and Jasper in a cowboy outfit (faint) extremely hot. I think it is funny though how Alice doesn't like tha outfit on him (the boots more so) espcially since he has the texan accent.
Author's Response: I've always thought that Alice and Edward would be drawn to each other. And Alice being so into fashion I figured she would have to dump on the cowboy clothes, but Jasper being from Texas you know what they say "You can take the boy out of the country but you can't take the country out of the boy."
Reviewer: Ronan (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 03:35 AM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
i think this story is really great and hilarious. i'd have to say the only thing i didn't enjoy was renesmee being involved, but i guess if it means bella will be able to take a crack at jacob, i'll just have to live with it! ha can't wait for the next chapter, hope its soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I can't wait for the Jacob chapter either, which by the way is up next!
Reviewer: spazeen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 12:15 AM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
Wow... this is one of the most interesting and original fanfics I've read! I really really like it! And you're a great writer... I'm really impressed! Can't wait for more! =]
Author's Response: It makes my day to get such a glowing review! thanks!
Reviewer: mystichearts (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 08:35 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
This is repulsive...no offence, you're an amazing writer, but the story line just irks me. I mean, it's just wickedly bizzare and scary to think about, lol. I really didn't need to read this...*grimaces*
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to leave me a review. I knew when I started to write this that some people would find it offensive, but thanks all the same.
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2008 05:36 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
This chapter made me smile.. quite a lot actually!! thanks for writing! =] I cat wait for another chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: paigecullen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 08:45 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
Yay this story. I'm sure with so many people you can have some really interesting couplings. I always thought Alice and Emmett would be interesting given the huge size difference. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, and Alice and Emmett would be interesting. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 05:34 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
wow, this fanfic is hott. i say you should inclue more dirty talk, i think its cute. and i can't wait till you update.keep writing this is well written and sexy. mission accoplished. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah I'm working on the writing better lemons and adding more dirty talk. Glad you enjoy.
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
yeah i love ti make ppl happy so you will hear from me when every you have more chapters up that reminds me PLEASE UPDATE FAST
Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Shitkickers are hot!
this is...well...different. but i absolutely LOVE it! haha! i guess i'm just a big ole horndog. it was oddly hot, and oddly believable. as believable as something completely unbelievable can get. [that is a compliment, i promise. i know it kind of came out wrong. but its a compliment i promise.] i would like to see, possibly everyone else with everyone else. when i first realized the concept of this story, and you said Ness and Jake were involved, i thought, what about Jake and Rosalie? HAHA! i would like to see Bella with everyone else though two. im just a horndog, and i love your story, so MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE! haha
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! Yeah another version of this story is brewing in my head, so that I can put together other couples. We'll see.
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