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Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Hot, oh so very, very hot.  I think I'm blushing as much as Bella as a human right now. 

I'm coming to this a little late in the writing but I'll be catching up quickly.

Thanks for sharing this lovely vision with the rest of us!

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

Poor Bella hasnt a clue, they really need to get her out more often! I cant wait to see how she reacts to Emmett. :D



Author's Response:

Bella will definitely be getting out in the next chapter! I actually am more excited about Emmett's reaction.

Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:30 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

wow. you never cease to amaze me



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:21 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

WOW! Talk about HOT!! Loved it! Cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was worried it wasn't  hot enough.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:20 AM · On: Sand and Surf

WOW! UNG! YEAH! That was good!

Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 07:13 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

i wish edward walked in on them while they were doing this!!! I would have loved to see his reaction!! Good job!! keep it coming!



Author's Response:

That would have been hilarious!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 05:58 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

Come on - give us Emmett!  I loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Emmett I swear is coming!

Reviewer: spazeen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 01:02 AM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

Ahhhhh loved this chapter! Alice, Rosalie, and Bella are so hot together... gah!

I think I'm ready for Emmett... is Bella? I need more!!! So excited! =]



Author's Response:

Bella is almost ready. Just one more little push...

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 11:08 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

ok, so i just read a buch of the reviews. what is up! why are we all so desperate to see Bella and Emmett. We're all horn dogs! haha!

like i said before, MAKE THEIRS GREAT! i don't care if its the last chapter. if it being last means its perfect, then do it!

no pressure, but we've all got big expectations for it. [cause you've already done such a kick ass job!]



Author's Response:

You know I was wondering the same thing, but then I tried to look for BXEm stories and only found a few. But BXEm is in the works.

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 11:04 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

GOD I'M DYING for Bella and Emmett. But i know you want to make it super good, so you just take your time with it.

this one, again. good, really good. but definitely weird!! haha! i love it anyway. I've decided that I don't have a brain anymore. I have a gigantic lemon where my brain used to be!

I'll be waiting to find out what Alice's great idea is!



Author's Response:

I'm to the point where I giggle when I see lemons in my ice water!

Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 08:56 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

Good lord. The only thing that could have made that hotter would be the guys watching. And I wouldn't be surprised if that happens in future chapters. It is so interesting to see who each chapter will be. You do a great job. I always find myself wondering...will there be any repeats? I mean if its good...its good :-) Also, will we be seeing any pairings without Bella? A witness of Edward and Alice or Rosalie would probably be really hot, and very intriguing. Okay, enough with my ponders, great chapter, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I really wanted this story to be all about Bella, but a sequel from another POV is itching to written.

Reviewer: Jennifer Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

We want Emmett, We want Emmett ! lol that was great!



Author's Response:

I know! I know! I know! I just want to make sure I get it right.

Reviewer: amorex1360 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 08:01 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

nnughhhhhh!

you cant do thatttt!

no emmett!

im already pissed about jacob.

grrrr.

but i do love the storyy. :)



Author's Response:

Aah! I promised Emmett and I will deliver. Bella just isn't quite ready for him yet.

Reviewer: kk_shortii (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 07:35 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

emmetts and bellas has to be awsome 



Author's Response:

I'm working on it as we speak!

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 07:16 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

I like the lesbian action here but it should be more. Cant wait to see what emmett and bella will do.



Author's Response:

I wanted more too. But have no fear there will be more to come!

Reviewer: morgan_taggart (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 06:43 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

hahaha, that was quite hilarious at the end i mean. seemed very short to me. not that i'm complaining. :)

anyway, i'm for the emment thing but i would favor the dirty carlisle one better, the Jasper one is still my all time favorite though. :)

keep writing,i adore this story. :D

-morgan



Author's Response:

I know it was short but I was having trouble with where to put the end of the chapter. So as a result the next chapter is extra long!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 06:32 PM · On: Bergdorf Goodies

Bring on Emmett!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. Emmett will definitely be coming! Haha!

Reviewer: CanadaGal (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2008 12:07 PM · On: Sand and Surf

Hey! Oh my gosh, I love this story! What a creative and fantastically Cullen idea! I would very much like to see Bella and Carlisle next, if possible! I think that would be very interesting. You're an amazing author and I can't wait to read more of this awesome fic!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it! Bella will eventually get around to Carlisle. Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: horses929 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 05:48 PM · On: Sand and Surf

What pairing is next? I'm waiting for more :D



Author's Response:

Ive hidden the answer in the reviews. Glad you like the story. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Miho (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Sand and Surf

next chapter NEEDS to be a girlxgirl scene.

maybe Bella, Rose and Alice all together. :]



Author's Response:

Whoa! And I thought I was psychic!

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:56 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

haha. i think EVERYONE would have to prepare for a night of sex with Emmett! cant wait!

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

dont get me wrong, it was good. i think its just 90% of Twilight fans are Team Edward, so Jacob and Bella is never a good thing. haha. i liked it though. I'm quite intrigued most about Bella and Emmett. Because Emmett is such a physical being, and a very sexual one as well. And I think Bella longs to be that sexual. I dunno. I love your concept though. It will be good though, I just know it!



Author's Response:

I love getting a good honest review. And everyone is waiting for B/Em. I've got a good one for him, but Bella need to prepare first!

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 07:48 AM · On: Sand and Surf

great!

a little weird, reading about jacob and bella. and the whole mommy thing. it was still pretty good though.

I think you can do better...so im waiting on the next one patiently. [well as patiently as i can anyway]



Author's Response:

Yeah, weird is the comment I keep getting about this chapter. Hopefully the next one will be better.

Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2008 08:38 PM · On: Sand and Surf

Love it! :) This chapter was hilarious!

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 10:54 PM · On: Sand and Surf

Totally the hottest story. I'll admit I was skeptical at the summary but I'm a convert. Do EVERYONE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I love you :D The longer the better!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you gave it a chance. And Don't worry Bella will get around to everyone.

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