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Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Yes Father.
i think bella should go kinkier with edward a little game between he saves her or she saves him that would be awesome or edward jacob and bella
Reviewer: newmoontofullmoon (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Yes Father.
wow!! umm...woah! I swear thats all i can say! u have to post soon!!
Reviewer: Miss Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
this story is HOT.
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Yes Father.
Definitely something involving jake....other than edward he is my favorite guy and his chapter was my favorite
Reviewer: bella rayne (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Yes Father.
great chapter! i love this story!!
i think id like to see more action with emmett. maybe emmett and edward? with bella of course. no rosalie. heck, why not go for all the men at once? lol.
Reviewer: seth_is_my_pup (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Yes Father.
I say Carlisle, or Emmet...I'm loving this story!
Reviewer: LaBruja (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Yes Father.
***flails*****
MORE CARLISLE PLEASE.
Reviewer: Edward_Torn_Emmett (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Yes Father.
Again this is one H-O-T story!!! That I Love to read and don't mind waiting for... though I am sad to hear (read0 that it will be ending soon... but then again I can always come back and re-read it again...and again...and again.
Now my vote:
I would love to see Bella with Emmett and Alice again hey you can even throw Jacob in there just for the Fun (:-D) of it!
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Yes Father.
I totally want to see Rosalie with Jake!! I think it would be freaking hilarious!! Maybe Bella with Mike too. I'd like to see that.
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Yes Father.
You made it totally worth the wait! I already expected something very S/M and dirty for the Carlisle/Bella, but the whole religious thing totallyblew me away. That was amazing!! And for the viewers' choice... I agree with historicvampirelover about the "Queen Bella and the Servant Creatures" (even the title itself is great), you should do like a Royal-Vampire-Fucking-Rumble and not only with vampires, but with Jake too. Or just a "everyone-on-everyone"... a total crazyness just to put the cherry on top of that awesome icecream you did. That would be awesome! please update ASAP. I love reading this fic. ;)
Reviewer: Aphy (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Yes Father.
I'm really enjoying this story, that was HOT
I'd like to see Bella with Edward, Emmett and Jasper all at once please.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Yes Father.
Horny vampire she is too! I loved the dirty...dirty padre! :P
Bella/Jasper/Em rough! Hahaaa
Reviewer: justonekiss (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Yes Father.
I think the last chapter should be back to edward!!!
Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Yes Father.
Ah I Love that last line! It's so true too; Vampire Bella is badass. Hmm I wanna see... um...Ok I just checked the reviews for ideas and wow! I would love you to end it with a BxE but with some sort of flair like simply_obsessed ("Edward sort of pull out something from all of the") However, I'm also totally Guh over the idea of Bella taking on Jasper, Emmett and Edward. Mostly because that's a place I'd love to be!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Yes Father.
That was well worth the wait. You are fantastic. Anyone that you pair Bella up will be fantastic.
Reviewer: Alister Eternia (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 12:26 AM · On: What Alice Doesn't See...
I absolutly loved this Chapter. I would actually love to read about Emmet and Edward. I am actually in the process of writing a love story about them well anywho, I love all your writting, I just can't help myself. You are a phenominal writer of erotica. I can't wait to see if you write about Edward and Emmet. TTYL, oh and I will let you know when I post the ExE story.
Alister
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the amazing review. I get all giddy when people compliment my writing. And Ican't wait for the EXE story!
Reviewer: NiftyBob (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Yes Father.
I think you should have a Bella vs. The Cullen boys...and Jake. Or Bella and Alice vs. the Boys...I'll be sad to see it end though.
Reviewer: miss twilight (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
I say classic bella and edward
the other stuff kinda creeps me out
i think emmett should secretley video tape it and show it to mike
hee hee
Reviewer: Edwards Bella (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Yes Father.
Maybe a group effort?
Reviewer: twifanx3 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Yes Father.
oy. that was hott!
and if carlisle was the priest at my catholic school, i think id be at confession every day for a number of reasons...
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Yes Father.
Ok a little creepy with Carlisle for me (just my opinion) but it was still kinda hot. I'd like to see Bella with Emmett and Jasper.
Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Yes Father.
I WANT Bella with JACOB and EDWARD!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! More ASAP!!!!!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Yes Father.
Way back in the beginning, you said something about this not turning into a crazy orgy. I want you to go back on your words! Maybe they enter a "make it at home video" competition, and they use the hospital as the setting? Maybe Bella could spend some time with her husband and brothers at the same time? Like "Queen Bella and the Servant Creatures" or something.
I'm a sick, sick woman... now off to find Mr. Historicvamp... :)
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Yes Father.
Wow--the scene with Bella was hot.
How about Bella with all Edward, Emmett, and Jasper?
Reviewer: shell hell (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!
interesting ....... naughty edward and bella...... so far so good
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