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Reviewer: youfoundme (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Movie Night

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE update soon amazing story :]]]] i wonder watll be next



Author's Response:

Update will be in a few days. It's being beta-ed right now. As soon as she is done I'll post!

Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Movie Night

Man this just keeps getting better and better lol but anyway i think u were going somewhere with the whole threesome thing with Bella, Alice, and Edward. I think it would make an excellent chapter. But yea dont make me wait till long till the next one lol...keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I was torn about writing a BXAXE scene just beacause I wasn't sure if I would get it right. Maybe I'll write it as an outtake. Thanks for the review and the next chapter should be up in a couple of days. Sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Lunar Eclipse (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Movie Night

Great story great chapter I can't wait for you to update with a new chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Next chapter is being beta-ed as we speak!

Reviewer: i love edward cullen (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Bella's Box O' Bad Girl

omg this is an absolutely increbible story- thankyou so much for writing it because it has given me a lot of stuff to read over the boring wintwe

Reviewer: topaz_onyx_lune (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Movie Night

A CULLEN ORGY??!?! WHERE'D THAT COME FROM!! YAYAY!! HOW CREATIVE!!! POOR JASPER!!! FINISH THE STORY!!!!



Author's Response:

*sticks fingers in ears* Thanks for the enthusiastic review!

Reviewer: topaz_onyx_lune (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:03 PM · On: What Does Seth have To Do With It?

Amie....I love that name! French!!! Interesting subject matter....threesomes-interesting. :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: topaz_onyx_lune (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Bella's Box O' Bad Girl

Hmmm....Renesmee chapter kinda freaks me out....Just...weird hearing "Mom"

Good though!! :)

Reviewer: topaz_onyx_lune (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Yes Father.

Lovin' the Twilight movie references!! Doin' an awesome job!! 'Cept your grammar is not perfectly correct. We must correct that soon, young grasshopper.

Reviewer: Grace Ryan (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Shitkickers are hot!

I really liked the conversation between Alice and Bella, but my only question is: wouldn't Bella be extremly jealous of Alice and Edward when sex seems to be created for them. and making love is perfection between the two? Bella would never be able to please Edward the way Alice could. That would cause major problems for bella and edward... can you write something to resolve this problem?

Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Movie Night

Holy Flapping Duck Shit!  I ... words ... can't ... FUCK!

I'm still trying to figure out which movie they were (or weren't) watching.

Best chapter yet!  *hugs* Bec



Author's Response:

Well you just added to my vocabulary! Thanks. BTW they were watching the Twilightmovie of course!

Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:10 PM · On: What Does Seth have To Do With It?

Holy fucking Crap Sirena!!  That was awesome!  I don't know what else to say.  Just ... WOW.

I never thought i would find EJ together so hot!  You rock!  

Reviewer: PaintMeBlack (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

First, I would like to hug you just for doing something different!!!! Yes! I lov ethis story just because of that. Sometimes I get tired of reading the same thing, because I think Fan Fiction is ideal to explore new & different horizons for the characters.

Second, you are an amazing writer. I really enjoy the way you manage to 1) create situations and 2) are able to transmit them on text! Way to go! (Thanks for the visuals, lol

I got excited because i read you are planning a sequel! YAY! I was sad this was ending, especially after those two (wonderfully heated) last chapters. Oh gosh, Jacob, Bella and Edward ... my hard stop.

So, I just wanted to write soemthing up and go on record. I absolutely love it and I hope you keep writing! =D More Jacob and more Emmett, please!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that amazing review. This is my first fic (well first time writing anything!) and I can't believe the response I have gotten. It's great to hear that people actually appreciate and enjoy your writing. Thanks again!

Reviewer: klee91 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

Oh my goodness this story Is by far the best I have read. YOu go where no one else has dared to, but we all love it!  I hope your not planning on quitting on the story anytime soon. I would love to see tons more chapters, though i know it takes time. My request is some nessie/ emmett action just cause and maybe a dominant carlisle with edward and bella!!!

keep up the awesome work xoxo klee91



Author's Response:

Thank you for such an awesome review! But, alas there is only one more chapter of this story. But I am planning a sequel from Nessie's POV so keep me on alert!

Reviewer: Budds_Beautiful_Riddle (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 04:36 PM · On: What Does Seth have To Do With It?

HOLY F*CKIN SH*T! This was a...a... I love you! lol



Author's Response:

Now that's a review that makes me blush! Thanks!

Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Movie Night

fucking fantastic!
keep those updates comming.

 

xxo



Author's Response:

Thanks but there will only be one more chapter in this story. But  I am planning a sequel all from Nessie's POV! So keep me on alert!

Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Movie Night

LOL! Not only was that fabulous Cullen sexing, the whole thing with Ness was hilarious.



Author's Response:

The Ness thing had to be rewritten so I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Minamizu (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Movie Night

i LOVE it! This chapter is AWESOME!

I dont want this story to end! :(



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lindseyfair (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Movie Night

Who would of ever thought if a Cullen orgy like? I have no idea, but I'm sure glad you had the guts to. Wonderfully sinful chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad I had the guts too. I honestly almost didn't. I was scared that people would freak about it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Movie Night

Am I too obsessed with Twilight or you just described the Twilight Movie as the one playing in the backgroung of that insane orgy?? This chapter was the best! and Jake w/ Esme??  I never have thought about it... and the bite on Nessie's neck... sweet!. You outdid yourself again!



Author's Response:

Yep. That was Twilight in the background! Thanks for such an ego boosting review!

Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Yes Father.

OH DEAR FUCKING LORD.

EXCUSE MY LANGUAGE.

But holy hell.

I think my Dr Daddy obsession just increased tenfold.

GENIUS, WOMAN, JUST...GAH!!



Author's Response:

Who can hold their tongue when it comes to fucking Carlisle? Definitely not me! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Yes Father.

I am pretty new on this site, and still don't leave a lot of reviews. But I just had to tell you that your use of the dialog from the movie scene in the woods in this chapter was just freaking brilliant!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It's really appreciated! Reviews mean a lot to the writer, even if it's hard to admit.

Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Movie Night

LOVED IT! best chapter yet!! thanks!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Ness knew and I didn't!

haha. if i ever finish Gravity i'd love to do that.

Gravity is such a friggen obsession, it's getting a little out of hand!



Author's Response:

I'm in love with Gravity, so definitely keep obsessing!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Movie Night

You do not disappoint Sirena... I would have never imagined actually enjoying such a story, but by golly you had me hooked from the very beginning... It takes major cojones to see this through - good for you.

and yum.



Author's Response:

When I first posted  I braced myself for the flames. Not only was I worried that people would have a fit about defiling such beloved characters but this was the first thing I've written ever. I mean if you don't count my research paper in high school! But everyone has been so supportive and positive. Even the very few reviewers that didn't like the story still had positive complements on my writing. Thanks so much for the constant feedback and support!

~Sirena

Reviewer: VanessaM (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Movie Night

loved this chapter.

 

and omg were they seriously watching twilight? hahahahaha lmao



Author's Response:

Thanks and yeah, I couldn't help myself. I counting down the days till the DVD release.

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