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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2012 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
I'll bet that didn't look nearly so innocent to the eyes upstairs!
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
I enjoy this. Write faster. I miss it btwn chapters.
Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
I really love this story. I knew she was gonna get tangles with jacob sooner or later. cant wait to see what happends and someone need to light a fire under edwards a** :)
Reviewer: 11mousy (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
We missed you! Welcome back - great chapter
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
Nice to see you back. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
Uh oh! Bella is going to be in trouble!Thank you!
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 8
Sorry to hear about your computer, this was a great update and I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 8
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
oh.....crap! Edward is gonna think she is the mole.......did he read the proposal or scan it at least???
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
new chapter! love it!
Reviewer: SmillaGW (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
So freakishly happy that these two are back, as this is one of my utmost favorites. Do hope Bella won't get into trouble from someonemisinterpreting her getting her coffee paid by Mr. Black, what with the mole and all.
Reviewer: sekoehler (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmmmm. Jacob seems a bit sneaky. And I'm thinking that Edward's plan about the MBA is going to come back and bite him somehow. Great update! I know that you've had to redo everything and that it's been hard. I think you're doing a fantastic job!!!!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2012 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 8
nice!!!!!!!!! cant wait to read more!!
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
Loved the lunch and Edwards proposal........meeting with Jacob - interested to see how that turns out. Looking forward to more as always :0)
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
don't let our girl be blamed for corporate espionage or some such. I love that she is going to get to know his mother... see he can act human after all...amazing..... love this story!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
He's so flipping cute... she is definitely impacting his universe..... love this story
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story, it's very good...2 more chapters to go to be caught up.... Yes, Bella's situation is certainly a difficult one, and heart wrenching to think of, but seems pretty realistic, what we wouldn't endure in the workplace to support our families....great story!
Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Bella....if/when Edward finds out about this little albeit innocent interaction between Bella and Jacob sparks will fly....I for one, Can't WAIT!
Reviewer: twilly (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
I was so excited for the new chapter! I wonder if Edward caught Jacob coming to her rescue and how he's goin to react.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
i loved how she had him make his own lunch and ride the bus.....love this story....
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
i loved how she had him make his own lunch and ride the bus.....love this story....
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 4
yum yum yum yum!!!!!
Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 8
Uh, oh! I wonder if Edward knows...if not, I am sure Jacob will let him know. I love this opportunity that Bella has been given -- can't wait to see where it goes! Good Luck with all the writing/replacing!
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 8
Thank you so much for updating! I missed this story.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
Can we say he hasn't got a freaking clue what real life is about... he is the one that doesn't have perspective.....Bella is gonna enlighten him...making money is different than living a life worth something.....loneliness is Not living.... this really good
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