Sure did need a tissue, or two. What a lovely way to end this wonderful story! Good thing you didn't let anyone talk you into continuing this , it was just perfect the way you wrote it! There is a reason I've read so many of your stories, they're so damn good!

I was pretty sure they would wait, because it felt like that was very important to Edward and he's so important to Bella. You wrote it perfectly! Wonderful love making, and so sweet when he made her drink cranberry juice, and pee! Now that's being considerate of your virgin bride! Their honeymoon was cute, too, especially the sandy beach part!

I'm kind of ashamed of Charlie Swan, trying to be a manipulative father, like he did! I hope he comes to feel ashamed of himself! Reading this, you know full well that these two are meant to be together, forever! Nobody should mess with that!

You'll get no complaints from me! I think this little tale of yours is absolutely darling, and am enjoying it thoroughly! Go, Bella!

The truckstop waitress, Dot, was so sweet to Bella, just really got a kick out of her! Edward telling her how long he had waited for her was just as she had hoped, too bad Bella never got the chance to tell him, ditto! Things are going along swimmingly, and no surprise that Bella used her second wish to make sure of their future together. Now to make sure Rosalie and Emmett meet and life is good!

This does sound like the wish is coming true, bit by bit. Just a few more pieces of the puzzle, sort of, left to happen. Part of the 'crush on Edward" deal, seems to be due to Bella's lack of self-confidence. She just won't see herself as worthy of his romantic attentions, for some odd reason!

Interesting? I'll say! This whole idea is wonderful, in the true sense of that word! You have hit the jackpot with this one, even with no sparkling vampires! Too bad Bella doesn't quite believe, yet.

this was a wonderful and beautiful story!

It's been a while since I have been on this site. Im glad I came back because I found your story. Cant wait to read more!

ok so you managed to get a few tears! LOL I aboslutely LOVE this story as well as the others you have written!

It's funny. I rarely cry when reading fanfic (maybe 3 times out of 100,000!) and I don't like the whole tissue warning thing because it makes me except something sad. This took me by surprise and I certainly shed a few tears. It was a perfect ending. Absolutely perfect. Loved the story and thank you so much for sharing it with us :)

awwww, that was a perfect ending, I loved this cute story! The end reminded me a lil of Titanic when they were all young again. I finally got the last wish coming back to see your family one last time, I thought it was something different. Anyway, beautiful sweet story!!  ~Tracey xoxox

Yes, I guess I should have thought about the tissues...lol. I have been crying for a while now. That was an extrememly sad chapter but so so beautifully written. Your story touched my heart so profoundly, making me think of not only your characters, but my life as well, ant the eventual loss of my family. You have created something spectacular here and I for one am grateful for it all. Thank you for writing something so soulful.