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Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
OOOOOOOH I can't wait for the next chapter!!! The anticipation is killing me!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 11
well i hope emoward gets over himself and just asks her out!
Reviewer: bluedove (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 11
hehee love that coincidence, perhaps a chance meeting at the zoo.
love it cant wait for the next chapter.
take care and speedy writing (haha)
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
okay that was almost frustrating - the avoidabce, guh - what a coward ... need an update, quickly ... please?
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 11
Good Chapter......
Reviewer: Bon03 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
Aw..disappointed they didn't see each other...I was looking forward to their reactions ....at work .
Reviewer: Teahoney (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 11
I hope the fundraiser date is a typo otherwise, Edward might find a reason to fire Bella or maybe take her as his date instead. That will be awesome. But first, let's hear how the trip to the zoo goes, with sweet Bethy of course. I know Edward won't have a prayer at all. Go Bethy *sorry, just got excited* I can't wait for next update...
Author's Response: It's not a typo. Bella made a mistake. We'll find out about it soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 11
Can't wait to hear why Edward doesn't kiss and why he is such a womanizer!
Reviewer: BigRedM58 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 11
is there a reason that Rosalie said the annual hospital event was on 10/20 but when Bella booked a service she said 10/11??
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 11
I want to know how the ZOO went... I see it coming! Can't wait!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 11
yup, knew her was gonna do that *shakes head*......Monday should be tense and Bella might go home in tears...:(
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 11
oh ok so just be bad and make the escort sevvice fall through and bella can be his date but first lets give her the itch to go and see the zoo bethy will never let her leave
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11
So avoiding her. Hopefully they will meet up at the zoo. Yipee!!!!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 11
Well, the dinner/date between Jasper and Bella was more than interesting. It really did give us a better understanding of what Jasper knows about Edward and his inability to date, and also for Bella to give Jasper the lecture about what Alice deserves, and both seemed to understand. Very well done. I wish Edward was able to speak to, or confront Bella, but he still seems to be struggling to deal with it all, but thankfully with the City Zoo assignment, they will be meeting up with one another very very soon. Can't wait to see if Bethy can help bring these two together. Ah...the workings of a child can produce miracles....lol. Keep up the great work! See you at the zoo!!
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
i so need more interaction between bella and edward....i suspect it will soon happen at the zoo ;) looking foward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: ethelouise49 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 10
Love your story. So sweet and sexy. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 10
getting closer ...
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 10
Good chapter....
Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 10
love edward version :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nice to hear from Edward and his take on the kiss. Loved the end :)
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
So it would seem that Mr. Cullen is having second thoughts about his new hire. Can't wait to see where it goes (because I think he has it bad for her!).
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ah, silly Edward...
Thanks for the update-Kate
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
I really like this stoty keep it up bella1
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 10
It was short but it was so worth it. A great chapter.
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh now that is what a fisrt kiss should be. It might have been better is bella was not drunk but she went for it. Edward needs to just call her into his office close the door and go for it. His daughter loves her already he should to.
Lilly
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