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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
:D. I guess he finally had given in to his feelings when she said she'd go with him to the ball. Mike is a delusional nut, so glad Edward punched him. Can't wait to see what Edward was thinking that whole time.
Reviewer: jing (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
Please make it sooner :(
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 15
well didnt see that one comming and excited to see what ahppens next
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 15
Sweet...
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15
Got to say it....WOW! I was hoping for a little spark...and damn did you deliver a forest fire...well an almost forest fire...but definitely hot hot hot. It was wonderful to see Bella going out with Edward and how easily they were able to be together. Loved it! Can't wait for more! I was hoping that Edward would cave...but to be truthful...it is even more special that he wants to do it right...and can kiss..kiss...kiss his girl all the time. I loved that Mike Newton got a major punch...that Bella got a beautiful necklace and a lot of kisses...that their relationship is moving forward....God...I love it ALL! Such a great story, and I wonder where it is going next!!
Reviewer: Teahoney (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 15
OMG! That was awesome and sweet. I can't believe they made a lot of progress. I just hope they won't revert back to previously when Monday comes. I really love this update. Thank you.
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oh My. He really is a handsome sweet hunk
Reviewer: bscullen2010 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 15
That was beautiful...love the references to Twilight.
You have created the tension, attraction and sweet moments between E & B so well....write soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 15
Whew!
Reviewer: lowbatterysound (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter! It all progressed just as i'd hoped! Is it too good to be true? :)
Reviewer: mimikoulaki (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
i just love your story
please give me a clue about the next chapter
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 14
I just love Jacob accepts things so easily. Bella just fits with Bethany and Edward... oh, can't wait till next chapter.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 14
I always enjoy these chapters....every one I wonder what will happen next.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Loved it.
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am loving your story more each chapter! I cant wait to see how you play out the whole escort situation
Reviewer: kenzie227 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 14
Oh my gosh. I love this story!! I can't wait for you to post another chapter. You're an amazing writer. I haven't read a story this good in a long time, and like I said before, I can't wait for the next chapter (:
P.S. I rated this a ten being the best, not the worst (:
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 14
I really enjoed hearing Bella's perspective. How she felt about the picture especially. How she was starting to feel something for Edward, and how you described it was very insightful. She's keeping it in her drawer now in her room...hmmm....wonder if she'll be looking at it often, Loved how Edward doesn't have a date, hmmmm.....wonder who it will be....hopefully...lol. Can't wait to see more of that in the next chapter hopefully. Emmett of course is always a riot, and you seem to have created a great, funny Emmett. Loveeeed the racing. Have done those tracks, well maybe not that fast, but pretty fast, and it's a blast. Can't wait to see if Edward goes next time and makes a bet with Bella. I've got a feeling he'll throw the bet, lol. Love your sweet story. Can't wait for more. I had some power issues last week from a storm, but I did read your chapter. Not sure if my review made it through.
Reviewer: jing (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
I can't wait for the next one. i hope to read it soon! pls :)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
Edward would have had fun with them at the track.....hope they go back. Glad Bella cleared it up for Jacob, wouldn't want him causing any kind of friction between B & E
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
excited for the next chapter
Reviewer: malie (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 14
I LOVE THIS STORY I WONT ED @BELL TO GET TOGTHER NEVER MIND ABOUT THE BULLSHIT AROUND THEM JUST DO IT WRITE SOON PLES! HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TRUE READER
Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 14
Love this story, thanx for sharing
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 14
keep it coming.. liking this story
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 14
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: Teahoney (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update. I just love this chapter; it was lots of fun. I'm glad Bella had the talk with Jacob. I love it when she admits to herself that 'her heart wants what her heart wants' I can't wait EPOV when he comes back from London. I wonder what self revelations he's having now.
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