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Reviewer: Applegirl (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: FML
aw come on don't abandon the story!
Reviewer: mstre11 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2011 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
I'm enjoying this so far I hope Edward and Bella work out their differences.See u next update!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Good chapter! Update soon!
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2011 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
I really like this story but I would really like to see some edward and bella interaction and get Tanya the hell out of there!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
This story is pure awesomeness and selfish though it may be I truly hope RL doesn't kick your ass for too long. Lol....
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Why can't Edward read Jacob's mind? Won't he be able to see the truth of their relationship? Or couldn't Jasper feel it?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
Bella really is making things more difficult than is necessary.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Lovely:)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 3 No win situation
Hmm. I am pissed at Carlisle and Esme. If they knew all along and didn't tell Edward then that just makes them shitty. They knew Edward left to protect Bella. THey knew he was miserable without her. What parent withholds information from their child that could aid him in his journey to true happiness??? I don't care what Bella wanted... Edward had a right to know.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 Our Lips are Sealed
What a way for Edward to find out!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: FML
I am intrigued!
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Great story line. I wish you would have more conversations between the characters though...I would love to hear what Esme and Bella talked about while making the food...etc. It would add lot to the story. Although, conversations or not I still love the story and can't wait for the next update. Hurry...Please.
Reviewer: kgunter34 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Great update.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
well edward is a duche im excited to see what happens next
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 Standing the Heat
Get to it. Not enough interaction. Why bring back the c clan if tney arent important.
Reviewer: beckyd1210 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: FML
Hello all I know that it's been a while since I've posted but the next chapter is with PTB so while it's going through that I can get the next chapter under way. More stuff will be explained through out the next 3 chapters. Trust me the peices are coming together but I dont want to just pile everything into one chapter and not have it come across the right way. So I hope your all still with me and the chapter should be back from Beta soon. Thank you so much for your reviews. Beckyd
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
I am curious enough to want to continue, but still I am puzzled. There are things that don't add up
1: In a previous chapter you wrote that Aro said that Bella was allowed to live unchanged for a while only (like one more year), but then that threat seems not to be existing anymore. Why?
2: It is difficult to believe that Carlise and Esme never slipped with Edward, so that he never discovered the truth till now. It is highly improbable, I must say.
3: I suppose that Alice can't see EJ, therefore she had no vision of Bella whiule she was with him.
4. So, the Victorian made love to Bella and then LEFT? It is difficult to believe, I must say. Very ungentlemanly. You should finetone the motivations more, otherwise Edward comes out like a jerk.
5. And finally, where did Bella find the capitals to pay for her tuition at Darthmuth and open her disco? Carlisle? But then she is more beholden to them and less independent that you depict her.
Well, write on please.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
Great story, with a good twist. Keep writing!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
I'm really excited to see which dirction you will take this fic. The options are so vast. Until next time...
PS I like that Bella is letting Edward squirm, for what he's done in this fic, he deserves that and more and I really hope he has to eat a lot of crow. I'd like to see him begging like a wee little girl (insert scottish accent lol)
Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
I love this story. I miss seeing regular updates
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
I have to say...I am loving this story. Thoroughly enjoying Bella lashing out at Edward instead of just running straight into his arms. Although, I would have liked to have been in Edward or EJ's mind while they were getting to know each other. Cant wait for the next segment.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
enjoying the story
Reviewer: Cull3nLov3 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
Ok..I absolutely love this story. Can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 4: Getting to know you
Okay well she sees Tanya and I am sure she thinks she and Edward are together. So I don't blame her for letting him think she and Jake are.
Edward deserves his missery.
Bella has the best of that situation since she has had their son. She has that little one to give love to and keep her busy.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 3 No win situation
great story, now if you will keep it up!
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