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Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2012 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just found your story and all caught up now. I really love it. I see that the last update was in September; are you no longer writing the story? Because if you are, please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 22

very very nice keep up the great work and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 22

Tease!!!!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16

Gah! an almost kiss, what a cliffy, I'm glad i don't fave to wait!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 15

I love charlie! I can't wait for the date!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 14

I'm so happy Matt is feeling better. He sure is a sweet kid!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 13

I'm so glad Matt is getting the care he deserves. Poor jake :( I hope you give him a HEA. He obviously isn't into Leah so feel free to have him meet his Nessie and fall head over heals in love!

I can't wait for their 2nd date! Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

I loved it! Edward and Carlisle to the rescue!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 10

Oh my! I guess Emmett wasn't too far off on his teasing.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 8

She's sooooo hard on herself. I feel so bad for her.....

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 7

Yes!!! Edward can be trusted!!! lol

I understand were her chip is coming from, hopefully Edward will knock it off her shoulder for her.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 6

oh I feel so bad for her....what a tough situation...I wonder what happened to James?

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh thank God James is the father! I'm glad Bella and Edward are getting along alittle better!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

I wonder who the dead beat dad is.....please say it's not Jake......

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 2

Time to eat some crow Edward! lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

This should be interesting! :)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, now that was passionate. Finally, walls are down, and so are pants, lol. Love that they are finally ready to be together, and noowwww, James.....you better be afraid. These two will be unstoppable. Great job conveying the sheer depression of Bella, commitment of Edward, and the heat between these two!!! Can't wait for update!!

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great chapter!!!!! Please update SOON
I want to be a fly on the wall :-)))
Bella and Edward should marry to maybe help her chances of winning over James

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 22

omg! ....lol, that was evil! but i'm so glad she trusts him that much and is letting him in :)

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 22

This is soo good. Why did you stop? Can't wait for more. Update soon.

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 21

I'm glad Bella has so much unwavering support.

I know exactly how Bella feels. I went through something a little like what Bella is going through. And no matter how redicilious it is. It still has the power to cripple you with fear that there is a small chance that he is going to take your world away. But now I just laugh when he mentions it. There is no way a judge would take away my daughter and give he to someone that sees her 72 hours a month. And then he finds some excuse to not see her. Thank god she knows she's lived and his absence doesn't effect her.

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 20

Well that is just observe. James abandoned Matt at the start. There is no judge on the planet that would take him seriously. I'm not sure about Washington's laws but the majority of states would terminate a parents rights after over 2 years. It's well documented that they tried to find and contact James. I'm sure he's married now and his new wife can't have kids so he says look I have a kid out there lets raise him. Asshole.

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 19

Two steps forward, one step back. This seems to fit these two perfectly.

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 18

Well thankfully one of them was thinking straight.

Reviewer: Irishcharm429 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 17

I'm do happy that Bella is starting to trust herself and Edward.

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