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Reviews For Paradox
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 21

poor Bella!

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 21

Holy cow... she threw a friggin couch into his window O.O

And oh poor Bree... Friggin James needs to die. Bella coulda done it too but noooo wallowing in self pity. Go talk to Edward Bella! Calm yourself and go

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 20

are you going to leave us out here? I am freezing!

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 20

oh god no!!!!! Oh I hope she doesn't leave him!!!! Keep writing!!!! :)

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 9

SQUEEEEE!!! *thud* oh man I love this chapter!!! :)

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

oh man what a cliffie!! A dad??? Is it Leah? hmmmm

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

OHHHH CHILLS RIGHT UP MY BACK!!! I am so in love with your story. I wish someone had recommended this to me when you started writing it. Keep up the awesome work!!! :)

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Prologue

ooooohhhh this looks too good to be true. A reversed persons story. This time Edward as human. Oh I am so excited!!! Looking forward to the next one!!:)

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 20

  'We were interrupted by the nurse, who had walked into the room so quietly, I hadn't even known she was there until I heard my dad happily exclaim, ‘Susi!"(...)        "Bella?" my dad called, abruptly pulling me from my musings. "Come over here and say hello to Sue. It's been a long time since you two have seen each other."'     Hahahah!  Why, the old goat...        X-}

   'Victoria was innocent. She did not commit those murders, and I still couldn't understand for the goddamn life of me why she kept saying that she did.(...)        She was taking the fall for someone - the real murderer - and it just didn't add up, because surely she knew we would not be incarcerating the real killer, since he or she was a vampire and all.'        If taking the blame is really what she is doing.  I have my doubts...        :-/

  'NO! I still could not admit to myself that I was in love with Bella. I still couldn't get over the fact that there had to be something magical forcing me to love her.(...)  I thought that being away from her for an extended period of time would be able to break the magical spell or whatever the fuck it was I'd fallen victim to. I just couldn't believe that it was all real. It was too hard. That wasn't me.'        Damn!  He's still grasping at it?        :(

  'But I couldn't. I wanted to feel good again. I wanted to take back the man I used to be not so long ago and have meaningless sex. I wanted things to be uncomplicated again. I didn't want to feel. I wanted this.(...)        "What the fuck are you doing?" she screeched loudly as I thrust her face into her discarded trench coat lying in a heap on the floor.(...)        Bella was in the hotel room, standing at the window...staring right at me.'        You said we would be mad at you?  If next chapter you don't tell that Bella heard more than "Good bye, Tanya", I am going after you!!        B-(

Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

He is in trouble!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 20

Not good enough, Ed. She should have never gotten a hand on you. Douchebag.

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 20

uh oh.

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 20

Well at least I hope he learned his lesson! What a jerk!

Reviewer: sarky_devotchka (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 5

ahh! oh.my goodness! :) Love it!^3

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 20

Evil Cliffy!!!

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 20

Serves him right. Sexaholic idiot. I hope Rosalie and Jake kick his butt.

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 20

Serves him right. Sexaholic idiot. I hope Rosalie and Jake kick his butt.

Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 20

eew. 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 20

Poor Bella, vamp or not that hurt.  What will she think. He threw her out after making out.  He is not talking to her so she must think it is over. 

 

Edward always digs his own hole. Deep and nasty.

Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 20

I can't wait 4 the next chappie. please hurry I am on the edge right now.

Reviewer: TefGomez (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 20

can't really blame him for being scared of love, makes perfect sense to me. loving your story so far :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 20

NO please let Edward come to his senses and believe that he is in love with Bella.  Hopefully Bella heard what happen and forgives him of his stupid ways...  please update soon!!

Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 20

Omg Bella give him hell and make him work to get you back!!!

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 20

Oh lordy.. lets hope she noticed he said no.. he's got a lot of explaining to do. Great chapter!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 20

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