Okay.  I totally get Bella's need for ME time and I'd probably do the same thing and tell Alice to go AWAY if she invaded my ME time.  

Esme's intro of E and B was very much something people I know would do. lol

Edward's sudden admission (purposeful? accidental?) of his attraction (?) for Bella did surprise me. Felt like it came out of left field.

 

I'm feeling kind of detached from the characters in this story; they seem to be reacting very shallowly to what's happening. Part of that might just be because people OFTEN seek shelter in the shallow water when they're frightened.  I'm hoping that's the case here.

Hi! Love the premise for this story.  Nice, quick intros that brush over your so-far-main-characters.  Aw, poor Jake is an orphan? How sad!

Looking forward to seeing how you maneuver these people together!

Great story really enjoying it can haardly wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying my story! Thank you for reading.

I predict complications ;) There has been entirely too much lovey-dovey easiness so far! I thought this was supposed to be a horror zombie fic! :P I was truly expecting something bad to happen during that shopping trip, tsk tsk tsk! :)

Author's Response: Sorry no zombies in this story. But the complications will come. I promise. :)

Hmm, so is Edward Esme's son?   Interesting how they've all come together.  I am really intrigued by this story and can't wait to read more!

great story so far.

Love the story so far. It's like "The Stand" or any other apocalyptic movie that for once doesn't have zombies. Keep writing!!!

Great chapter. I'm glad the two families have each other to rely on now. What does Alice's vision mean? Will Bella actually get pregnant? Can't wait to read more.

I'm looking forward to reading more. I really like the premise of the story.

interesting,,,i am surprised all that happened to alice,.,,so money means nothing anymore?  it doesnt exist?   so i take it edward is carlisles son then that met up with alice,,,,,,

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Hmm, interesting start :)  I'll keep reading.

This is the kind of story I read very often in books and I am interested to see where you take the Twilight characters with this type of plotline. It sounds like it is going to be VERY interesting and I am favoriting it and will be looking forwrd to every chapter. I hope you post a new chapter VERY soon,  so I can get started down this story's road and see where you are headed with this!

Excellent so far! More! More! More! PLease? :O)