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Reviewer: Queendel (Signed)
April 29, 2011 12:57 PM · On:
Good update. I don't like soft, pathetic and over-sensitive Edward. Bully Jacob is in his element and I hate that he is harressing Edward. Bella is a wimp, always the victim.
Eager for more soon.
Reviewer: MrsGee (Signed)
April 28, 2011 04:08 PM · On:
Wow, I'm first to review. Loving your story. I am a confirmed Jacob fan, so I love sensitive Jacob under the thug with attitude. Intimate relationship he has with his car? Enjoying your writing style, snappy and contemporary. Present tense gives your prose energy. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Wonder if Eddy has the hots for Jacob......
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