the moment of truth is here.......the shit is about to hit the fan.....

Nooooo.....such a mean place to leave this!!!  Sooooo creepy!!  :)  Getting so excited so see how this all ends. 

 

How can Ben know where everyone is at any given moment? Is it because of his supernatural senses or is there something else Irina hasn't told so far? And that cliffie here is pure evil!

Wow, so Irina is very direct and to the point. Hmmmm, just as I suspected Edward and Bella giving into their passions, changed Edward and Bella, well at least that Aro and others from their supernatural genre are going to see....she is his Mate! Wonder if this means she's royalty now, like I suspected! Irina seems protective!! OK, so Renee, made me laugh out loud so many freakin times, lost count!!!!! LOL!!! Renee dealing with her crazy husband...hahaha. Bella hoping her mom slipped Phil Benadrhl just brought back memories to me of when my own children are acting crazy and we joke about maybe asking them if they wanted some "special juice" meaning the Benadryl bottle....lol. We never did it, but definitely thought about it, and the idea of duct tape...hahaha, had me rolling. Poor Renee complaining about crazy Phil hearing noises??? Well, is he a hybrid??? He said he needed to follow Edward's commands!! Hmm! How Renee was saying how horny Phil was with guests there, holy hybrid hell! Worried about Edward, almost as much as Irina and Bella! Glad that Renee told Bella to call her dad! He seemed more than suspicious, which is always the same for Dads!! Can't fool them! Wonder if Aro will have any of that real connection with Edward!!! Can't wait to see Edward again!! Love this whole damn wonderful story!!! Xoxoxox

please don't let that be a final good bye between Bella and Edward that i'm hopefully reading too much into. I don't thin Laurant can be trusted, what if this is all set up and it's a distraction to keep Edward away while they attack from somewhere else????

Author's Response: You are right to be worried, but, as you will see, Edward is very cautious and crafty when he leaves his house. Laurent is no match for our Edward. We have always promised a HEA... you'll just have to wait and see how we get you there. lol ---- Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. --- xoxo Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR

How long do you think this story will be? How many more chapters?

Judging from Edward's ability to pull everyone in that's face to face to him Aro must be able to do that even better. The "founders" of La Verrot shouldn't blame their own poor judgment. I NEVER would have guessed that the colonists were to serve as a gourmet-meal. I really hope I don't have too long for the update after that cliffie and I think you're doing great with this "monster".

oh I have watched for you on Fan Fiction and missed  you. Yikes what will they do? Get ready with fire machines?? LOL

 

You really did a great job showing what Bella was thinking, what was running through her mind, as she heard that Edward was a hybrid. Covered everything! Bella knew she had to commit to Edward, confirming that she loved him, more than anything. Just watching the scene unfold, and all the players panicking, arguing...makes perfect sense. Irina is a like a wacked out robot...only wanting to please the Legatee...so funny. Bella understands though that she is the love of Edward's life. The way everyone is arguing, and yet, someway, Edward is able to control the environment. He is able to look at them, and for some reason, he just exudes power and I doubt it's just because of his title...he has the energy about him that demands respect. Love it!! Irina was only worried about her sister. So glad she confesses what happened, so they understand the seriousness of the situation. He wants them for "dessert" and if it was me, I would find something that he doesn't want to "eat" and I would fill my plate with it. Not sure how Edward's impurity will fall into the plan, but to be honest, I doubt "Asro" is some pure creature. He's probably had his share of women...so why can't Edward. Bella may carry his child? Would that make a difference? Interesting how Jake made some people act strange. Does he know if he's a shape shifter? Could he and others like him take "Asro" down? GAH!! I know you can't answer my questions, but damn and I nosey, lol. Now Laurent is calling? Hope he is OK. I don't think Irina can handle much more! Such a damn fine story, and your visuals just blow me away! So much tension, emotional and sexual...can't wait to see where it all goes! xoxoxo

Its almost crazy how excited I got when I saw an update. It just made my day and I dread the day when the story ends. Although, I can't wait for the next update.

So the are delecacies? That's pretty sick & twisted! Can't wait to see what happens when Aro finally shows up!

Esme's right, they have to find out what they're up against and what Aro's plans are. Irina's mooning over Edward is quite irritating. What might the Vamps' and hybrids' reactios to Aro be like?

Author's Response: Esme is a smart cookie. Edward had no intention of letting his biological father hurt his true family, so his primary goal from this point forward is their survival. No matter what. The hybrids, vampires, and Aro will have an interesting reaction to Edward. Thanks for reading and leaving us a few comments. -- xoxo Deanna (ilovealion) EPOV of PR