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Reviews For Cause and Effect
Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 Promises, Promises

It's interesting to note that regulations exist that require background checks, including fingerprinting, for anyone working in schools, healthcare and many other professions that deal with children, elderly and vulnerable clients. This includes volunteers. So, how did Forks HS miss Mr Varner's background check when he was interviewed and considered for employment?



Author's Response: As a teacher, at least where I live this comes in the form of a fingerprint clearance card. I have one. They would be beyond easy to forge. If you have the card, your good to go plus we know from the first book that Forks high "doesn't protect it's students very well". Plus, I would suggest that varner is real and a teacher but his identity was stolen... I definitely thought it through ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 3 Promises, Promises

Lucky Edward caught all that with Varner, he would have ripped him to pieces if he had gotten there too late.

Author's Response: Yes he would have and who could blame him? poor edward. Everyone seems to want his girl... Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: JasonGee (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2011 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

It's great to see his view of events! I can't wait to see more of both stories. :)



Author's Response:

I'm going to try to get more up in the next couple days- real life has been rough lately so i haven't had the time.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

I love the EPOV version! Consequences is one of my favorites, and I cannot wait to read more about Edward's time away.



Author's Response:

sorry for the long absence- life has been rough over here but i hope to be back now ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovestwilite (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Great story, please don't let them part ways. Would love to see a happy happy story!  WTG



Author's Response:

This story already has a pre-set plan since Bella's side of it is already up for the most part. I promise a HEA though :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Good job so far.  I might need to go back to the other for some rereading.



Author's Response:

It might help- Edward's side of things is different because we are looking through his eyes but it really is the same story- he's just going to fill in gaps that Bella didn't know.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Good Chapter! I would imagine that Jasper is on edge due to the extra humany diliscousness floating around the air due to Edward and Bella's "Happiness".

 

Great chapter! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

That might have something to do with it or it might not ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Is Jasper having blood-lust issues?  Love the chapter!  Lokking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Jasper??? blood lust issue?? never ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

Very nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

 

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

Loved it!  You have the best Edward in your stories!



Author's Response:

awww thank you!!!

 

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Sorry I havent reviewed that much, its been a chaotic month for me and I havent even spoke to my boyfriend in 3 days :( see?you're not the only one who wants to pout =P hope you can update soon so we can get to the juicy part of the years after they separated that we all want to read. Have a great week, Daniela



Author's Response:

I completely understand- my personal life has been insane for the past month or so. I have had no time to do anything.

I'm going ot try to get back to a regular posting schedule though :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Why would Esme rat them out to Charlie?????

Author's Response:

Remember that Esme must act like a typical mother and most parents would be furious if their kids skipped school because they were otherwise occupied ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: KHolyoak (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

Is Jasper on egde because of Edward and Bella's emotions? That's my guess!

Oh and by the way, great story! :)

 

          -Katherine



Author's Response:

Edward will actually kind of explain that later but that is part of it- not all of it though.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 2 The Morning After

I am thinking that i should go back and read  the first story cause i don't want to be surprised i have it save in my favorites so i think that is what i will do now  ...been ssving for a while to i had my vacation so now that i am off i will do just that



Author's Response:

edward's side of things does tell some of the same story but he does have his own parts to tell :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rburt1973 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

all I can say is wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!great chapter. cant wait to see what happens next. this chapter rating is well past ten. I would rate it 100



Author's Response:

awww thank you! next chapter should go up in the next 48 hours or so :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

Now that was a birthday present!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Who doesn't want that birthday present??? Thanks for reading and writing a review!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 06:54 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

Loved it!  I have been wanting to read "Conaequences" but decided to wait till it was complete.  I always prefer Edwards POV so I jumped on this the minute I saw it!  Love your writing!  Question though, should I wait to read this after Consequences or is it ok to read it and Consequences at the same time?



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you!

I honestly think you'll be fine no matter how you read it but I think that Consequences will be a bit of a let down after Edward's POV. I learned a lot in the process of writing Consequences and I think (hope) it shows in Cause and Effect... I would be interested to see what someone thought reading it the other way around honestly.

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

Wow! What a chapter! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

aww thank you!!

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

I need a Birthday present like that plz. lol

Loved it.

Alaina



Author's Response: Who wouldn't?? Thanks for reading and reviewing. This story needs some love

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1-Losing Control

I love his POV, it's much more detailed and more emotional due to his vamp senses

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like his POV more. I do too ;) I think that I have made some progress since Consequences as a writer. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: SirenSongx (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

Thanks to Consequenses, I already know what's going to happen but it will be interesting to see Edward's train of thought over the whole ordeal. If you're still wanting a banner, hit me up (sirensongx@gmail.com), if you have images or ideas please share. ^_^



Author's Response: while you have the general idea, there are quite a few pieces of the story that Bella didn't know. I w will email you about the banner! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Prelude to a choice

Hmmmm... This is quiet the start! I am really interested in seeing what you do with this story. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response: I hope the story has some surprises and insight about what happened in CONSEQUENCES. I'm putting the next chapter in the queue for this story today. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 05:43 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

good writting

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

thanks... waiting for validation on the next chapter of my other story and then I will post another fro this one :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 02:56 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

hmm hmm hmm ;o o; :) i look forward to seeing his side! i really enjoyed consequences and i just know i'll enjoy more works of art :o

Author's Response:

I think you are going to get a lot of answers that are missing from Bella's perspective. I'm awaiting the next chapter of consequences to be validated right now but as soon as it is, I'll give you more of this ;)

Thanks for reading, reviewing and calling my dabbling works of art.. all this flatttery will definitely go to my head ;)

Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 05:32 PM · On: Prelude to a choice

i liked this but, i really would like to see you finish consequences first. it'been a long time since you updated.



Author's Response:

i can only put one chapter of one story up at a time. I was waiting for this to validate. Consequences gets the next update. I will trade off chapters from here on out. My beta for Consequences works slowly and I can't do anything to speed up the process. It's already written (yes the whole thing to the end) and I'm getting it to you as fast as I can.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! More coming soon!

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